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Saturday 14 April 2012

भाइयों के नाम..

मैं सीखा किया मुक्केबाज़ी
लड़कपन से,
मुझे क्या पता था
वो बंदूकें ले के आयेंगे.


Translation:

To Brothers...

I (we) used to practice
boxing as a sport
since boyhood,
I never expected
them to come
armed with guns!

26 comments:

  1. वाह...............

    अंदाज़ा न था उनकी फितरतों का..........
    वरना हम भी बगल में छुरी लिए चलते....

    बहुत बढ़िया सर.

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    1. arrey wah!...phir toh unki fikr kaun hi karta?
      Thank you Anu, for liking it:)

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  2. THE MEANING IS INCLINED. VERY NICE

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    1. Thanks a lot Latha for your understanding!

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  3. Zabardast vayakhya ki hai aapne us mansikta ki jo humein har pal gherti hai.

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  4. liked the translation version btter..nyc one !

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    1. Thanks a ton Alka...am so happy to see you back here!

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  5. very meaningful...beautiful lines.

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  6. deep thought...nice one Amit... :)

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  7. Very thought provoking, moves you in an insightful way! Loved it!!

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    1. Thanks a whole lot Arti for your understanding and appreciation!

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  9. Thanks a lot Rahul for your opinion,nomination,favor and kindness!

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  10. as usual this too is great.
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  11. Indeed very very deep thought sir. Well expressed.

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  12. Yes Its true, we can see this within the families, between the nations, regional and religion war. The unexpected future and the unexpected lives is what we get even being making ourselves ready to face the adversities! Loved it!:)

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  13. Majedar hai.Mere khayal se pehli line mein 'kiya' shabd ki jaroorat nahi hai.

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    1. It is nice of you Ram to analyse my verse critically:) Thank you! ...in face 'kiya' was used to indicate continuity over a long period(boyhood), and was intended to reflect unexpectedness of an incident(their coming with guns), which will be defeated if 'kiya' is not used. Thanks again for your valued comment! Please make it more often.

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