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Wednesday, 4 April 2012

सेंर्यु-७

प्यार का बिच्छू
आंखों से है जो चढ़े
जाँघों उतरे



Translation:
Senryu-7

Trance of love
captures through eyes
wilts through thighs

10 comments:

  1. Well, honestly, I'm way below ur league Mr. Amit to comment upon ur writings. But I'll say this still & this is not only about this post alone.

    Your writing is a pleasurable blend of mysticism and reality. I don't have to say what an explosive combo that is. You must have got similar compliments a lot.

    God Bless You

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    1. Hey Anupam there is no hierarchy buddy, we all are co-bloggers giving vent to our feelings in different ways. You(and all other friends) are most welcome to comment on my creations even if it were a negative one. My blog is not approval enabled.
      I'm more than delighted with your observations and am grateful for your generous words. Thanks a whole lot!

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