ऐ मेरे ख़ुदा
बस थोड़ी सी और
मोहलत दे दे
डरता नहीं हूँ मौत से
औ' डूब जाना चाहता हूँ
तेरी रहमत की
ख़ामोश, पुरसुकून पनाहों
में सदा के लिए
बस कुछ देर और
इस बेमुरौव्वत दुनिया का
'मज़ा' लेने दे
ताकि फिर वापस
यहाँ आने का
दिल ही न करे!
Translation:
(...and at last) To God!
O lord
Please give me some more(life)
I’m not afraid of death
and wish to sleep eternally
in your comforting arms,
but just a few days more
let me ‘enjoy’
this trying world
so that
I don’t feel like coming here again!
yeah.............
ReplyDeleteonce is enough.............
in this ruthless world.
nice poem...
anu
Thank you so much Anu, for your liking and appreciating it!
Deletebrilliant again!! and this time i understood the Hindi version. slowly getting there :)
ReplyDelete...am so happy to note that Deb:) Thanks a lot!
DeleteBrilliant. It touched both the philosophical and spiritual chords of my mind! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a whole lot Monita for truly understanding the write's mind:)
DeleteAchha bahana hai !
ReplyDeleteNow to be serious please visit this link,there is a surprise for you http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2012/04/wow-this-is-truly-awesome.html
...only YOU can make that out:)aapse achhi brain mapping kaun kar sakta hai doc!
DeleteThanks a big lot Indu for the award. I'm truly grateful of your finding me worthy of it!
Nice poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank you sooo much Valli:)
Delete'taaki phir yahaan wapas aane ka dil na kare' bohat sahi hai Amit sir.
ReplyDeleteYEah! Agree with Mak! the best line it is! DO u really not fear of death, Amit ?
Delete@Mak Bahut bahut shukriya aapka Mak!
Delete@ JKHoNa Thank you so much for your appreciation!
Please read "Main Mritu Sikhaata Hoon" by Osho:)
Nice Poem...Great...
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Thank you so much Rajnish:)
DeleteSometimes few lines can convey a lot! Nice poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks loadz Jaish:)
DeleteWell written... Quiet interesting indeed.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Vijay:)
Delete:) cynical
ReplyDelete:)one can't create if one is not!
DeleteThank you Deepak, I agree:)
Beautiful lines. Speaks a lot of human desires.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rama:)
DeleteAmit ji
ReplyDeletebahut hi gahri hai aapki kavita ---insaan ki fitrat hi hai ye ---ek lalak aur virakti bhi.
very nice poem
...sach toh yehi hai. Lalak aur virakti ek doosre ke poorak hain. Thanks a whole lot Rajni for your kind words!
DeleteLovely words!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rahul!
Deleteबस कुछ देर और
Deleteइस बेमुरौव्वत दुनिया का
'मज़ा' लेने दे
ताकि फिर वापस
यहाँ आने का
दिल ही न करे!
शानदार,जीने का कोई तो बहाना हो.
Beautiful and powerful as ever. This time is simplicity in the english version amazed me...
ReplyDeleteThanks loadz Saru for your generous words:)
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shesha!
Deleteमंगलवार 11/06/2013 को आपकी यह बेहतरीन पोस्ट http://nayi-purani-halchal.blogspot.in पर लिंक की जा रही हैं ....
ReplyDeleteआपके सुझावों का स्वागत है ....
धन्यवाद !!
Beautiful expression.First time I visited your blog.Impressed.Request your visit to mine .
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LATEST POST जन्म ,मृत्यु और मोक्ष !
सुन्दर.बहुत बढ़िया लिखा है .शुभकामनायें आपको .
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