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Wednesday, 15 April 2015

कैनवस


रंगों नहाये
सफ़ेद कैनवस
दर्द उकेरे                         
                                                                   Image courtesy Google


Approximate translation:

stark canvass
arrayed in regalia
replicates agony

38 comments:

  1. The first and third lines tell tales!

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  2. And a masterpiece is born. Beautiful.

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    1. Thank you Saru for your generous words:)

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  3. Wah bhai wah! Kya baat hai!!

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  4. Wonderful, Amitji... Your poetry has 'Aag' just as your pen name :) Just read those I missed in last days... Some I understood, some I didn't. Thanks for giving meanings of difficult terms...
    TC... Keep smiling :)

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    1. You and all other non-hindi friends oblige me by reading my hindi ones...I'm grateful Sindhu for your generous support! Thanks a whole lot:)

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  5. the same white canvas that has the ability to absorb all the colors painted on it, beautifully penned!

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  6. Beautiful lines, but sorrowful.

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  7. why so SAD amit sir ...

    have a smile I am back :) he he he he

    Bikram's

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    1. Now that you are back I am grinning from ear to ear Bikram sir:):):)

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  8. So few words, so beautiful message. God bless.

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    1. Thank you Suresh for reading:)

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  10. Regalia and agony - interesting collocation.

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    1. Thank you Tom for observing this:)

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  11. "Arrayed in regalia" is a wonderful phrase and the next line implies a lot. A great haiku, Amitji...you are a master... :-) Thanks for leaving the link on my blog.

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  12. Am honoured, Maniparna, and humbled! Thanks a whole lot:)
    It was my pleasure to give you a link as the subject was the same with two absolutely different approaches. Your gorgeous haiku reminded me of mine...our treatments are incongruous but the results are great!!

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