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Wednesday, 15 April 2015

छपाक


सूरज लाल                                           
नीलाभ अलौकिक
सिंधु छपाक    
                                                                  Image courtesy Google
Approximate translation:

bloodshot sun  
ocean indigo Divine
plunged in
                           
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24 comments:

  1. Kokila gupta5 May 2015 at 01:44

    manmohak .. dhwanyaatmak !

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    1. Amit Agarwal26 May 2015 at 23:07

      Thank you Kokila:) dhwani sun ne ke liye:):)

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  2. Saru Singhal5 May 2015 at 18:12

    Wah! Bahut khoob. You are indeed the master of writing haiku.

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  3. Anonymous26 May 2015 at 23:35

    Lovely... esp the chapak part!! :)

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  4. Unknown27 May 2015 at 00:09

    Beautiful!!!

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  5. C Suresh27 May 2015 at 00:10

    The bloodshot sun dives into the unworldly indigo of the ocean? Lovely words for that divine pic.

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  6. Mridula27 May 2015 at 03:17

    What an imagination! particularly the chapak bit :D

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  7. Uppal27 May 2015 at 03:19

    Your three lines subsume a lot.

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  8. Unknown27 May 2015 at 06:40

    The sun and the ocean merge. Divine !!

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  9. M S Mahawar27 May 2015 at 20:47

    Beautiful!

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  10. magiceye28 May 2015 at 03:46

    Merging of colours! Lovely!

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  11. Unknown28 May 2015 at 05:53

    Equating the sunset to sindhoor! Wah, kya khoob kahin

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  12. Rajesh29 May 2015 at 00:02

    Beautiful.

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