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Friday 1 May 2015

निशानी


ओस निशानी
पाक़ीज़ा मुहब्बत
दूब चाँद की       
                                                                                                        Image courtesy Google


Key:
ओस = dew drops
निशानी = souvenir
पाक़ीज़ा = pious
मुहब्बत = love
दूब = grass
    

36 comments:

  1. Loved it, especially the second line Amitji! Pakeezah meri fav movie hai :p

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  2. khamosh khoobsurat tasveer ..
    your words draw as vivid and emotional image as your clicks !
    Beautiful ....

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    1. 'khamosh khoobsurat' says it all...
      Thanks a lot Kokila:)

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  3. Beautiful and vivid image portrayed... :-)

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  4. All the three ladies have said something beautfiul that it fully deserves. What I would like to add is the key that Amit has mentioned here. Good, great.

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  5. With key it became so easy to understand these beautiful lines...i believe the picture could have been enlarged a bit. good work sir.

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    1. The images with all my haiku are being purposely kept small,sir. First, that they must not shift the focus from the text, and the second because these are not mine! Hope you agree:)
      Thank you Alok for your kind understanding and support:)

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  6. Sir, you should publish your haiku book. Whenever I am in literary mood, I read your mother's books you gifted to me. Would love to read yours too.

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    1. Your continued support is my strength!
      Thank you Saru:)

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  7. Wow!!! Very beautiful your imagination is! Yes, I understood it reading the keys :) I am coming across with some of the words for the first time...
    TC... Keep smiling :)

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    1. The effort you make Sindhu keeps me going:) Thanks a lot:)

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  8. सचमूच बहुत सुदंर

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  9. Very beautiful lines for the image.

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    1. Thank you Indrani:)
      It's the other way round though:)

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  10. Perfect words for the beautiful picture

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  11. You've defined dew drops so romantically!

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  12. Wow! Dew the Taj Mahal of the Grass-Moon love story? :) What a thought

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    1. Wow! You have placed the humble dew in the class of the Taj!
      Arre sir, thought toh aapka hai;):)
      Thank you:)

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  13. The keys are of great help...
    Beautiful lines...

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    1. Thank you Lancelot for being here:) do come more often:)

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  14. now this one is lovely for sure :)

    Bikram's

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  15. Kitna kuch keh jaate hain ye chand shabd.

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