Wow! More than one layer of meaning in those few words! Sparkling laughter concealing a gloom-ridden heart; Riotous pleasure leaving behind only a residue of sorrow (Going by the fireworks metaphor)
A true happiness only releases when you are free of prejudices. A heart, which burns down all its attachment & detachment, is eligible for bliss. A multidimensional haiku indeed. :)
SO true and so well written as a haiku ...
ReplyDeletePS. If I am not wrong I have read similar sentiment in another full poem of yours !
Beautiful :)
Right ma'am! What a great memory:)
DeleteI converted it into a haiku for the new friends who have not read my earlier work...Thank you:):)
Welcome Sir .. :)
Deletehappy to read it again n again ... :)
You are very kind:) Thank you Kokila:) for liking old wine in new bottle
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DeleteSeene mein rakh kar de ....wah!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lata:)
DeleteLovely haiku sir :-)
ReplyDeleteA smile on the lips seals the heartburn.
Thank you Somali:)
DeleteKya baat hai wah!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
DeleteWell told in few words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani:)
DeleteWow! More than one layer of meaning in those few words! Sparkling laughter concealing a gloom-ridden heart; Riotous pleasure leaving behind only a residue of sorrow (Going by the fireworks metaphor)
ReplyDeleteYes, great interpretations! Thank you Suresh:)
Deleteबहुत खूब
ReplyDeleteThank you Yogi:)
DeleteBeautiful as usual.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mridula:)
DeleteA true happiness only releases when you are free of prejudices. A heart, which burns down all its attachment & detachment, is eligible for bliss. A multidimensional haiku indeed. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Manish:)
Deletesuper duper Amitji :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Archana:)
Deletebohot khoobsurat Amitji, again a brilliant play of words, I got to learn the art of using antithesis from you :)
ReplyDeleteI am learning too! Let's learn together:) Thank you Shweta:)
DeleteAmazing....Haiku...
ReplyDeleteThank you Ruchi:)
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Madhusudan:)
DeleteI'm explaining from the point of view of love...
ReplyDeletedazzling damsel
shimmering with all her beauty
my heart burns
Thank you Maniparna:)
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ReplyDeleteWah..Beautiful ! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Renu:)
DeleteYour haikus are so apt. I fail in this genre
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked:) Thank you ma'am:)
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