Followers

Saturday, 11 April 2015

राख


हसीं शरारा
आसमाँ पे चमके
सीने में राख 


Key:
हसीं = gorgeous
शरारा =  spark / fireworks   
राख = ash  

37 comments:

  1. SO true and so well written as a haiku ...
    PS. If I am not wrong I have read similar sentiment in another full poem of yours !
    Beautiful :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Right ma'am! What a great memory:)
      I converted it into a haiku for the new friends who have not read my earlier work...Thank you:):)

      Delete
    2. Welcome Sir .. :)
      happy to read it again n again ... :)

      Delete
  2. You are very kind:) Thank you Kokila:) for liking old wine in new bottle

    ReplyDelete
  3. Seene mein rakh kar de ....wah!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Lovely haiku sir :-)
    A smile on the lips seals the heartburn.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Wow! More than one layer of meaning in those few words! Sparkling laughter concealing a gloom-ridden heart; Riotous pleasure leaving behind only a residue of sorrow (Going by the fireworks metaphor)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yes, great interpretations! Thank you Suresh:)

      Delete
  6. A true happiness only releases when you are free of prejudices. A heart, which burns down all its attachment & detachment, is eligible for bliss. A multidimensional haiku indeed. :)

    ReplyDelete
  7. bohot khoobsurat Amitji, again a brilliant play of words, I got to learn the art of using antithesis from you :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I am learning too! Let's learn together:) Thank you Shweta:)

      Delete
  8. I'm explaining from the point of view of love...

    dazzling damsel
    shimmering with all her beauty
    my heart burns

    ReplyDelete
  9. This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  10. This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  11. Your haikus are so apt. I fail in this genre

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Glad you liked:) Thank you ma'am:)

      Delete