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Friday, 10 April 2015

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24 comments:

  1. Beautiful haiku. if I have understood it correctly, it means
    Like splinters of glass, broken dreams hurt the eyes..

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    1. Absolutely correct!
      the splinters of broken dreams hurt the eyes.. as those were made of glass only!
      Thank you Somali:)

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    2. Thank you, Somali...helped me better understand.

      Beautiful, Amit....these short forms from you are too good.

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  2. Awesome! I'm now starting to understand these things :) :)

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    1. I'm delighted:):) Thank you Manisha:)

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  3. Wow! Broken dreams hurt like broken shards of glass in the eyes

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  4. Sabdon ki behatareen bazigari. Sheesha aur sapne dono bahut chubhte hain tutne par. :)

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    1. Glad you liked:) Thank you Ravish:)

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  5. wow... I had to ask Desh the meaning of some of these words Amitji :-)

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    1. God bless him! Thank you Archana and Desh:)

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  6. ap shabdon ke jaadugar hain... ati uttam...

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    1. Main shabdon ka ghulaam hoon:) Thank you Ashish:)

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  7. Thanks for the your interpretation, very good meaning.

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  8. Perhaps you're referring to fleeting dreams!

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    1. ...broken, to be precise! Thank you Uppal:)

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