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Friday, 10 April 2015

किरक


आँखों किरकेँ
टूटे हुए सपने
शीशा ही जो थे 


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24 comments:

  1. Unknown3 July 2015 at 01:47

    Beautiful haiku. if I have understood it correctly, it means
    Like splinters of glass, broken dreams hurt the eyes..

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    1. Amit Agarwal3 July 2015 at 02:08

      Absolutely correct!
      the splinters of broken dreams hurt the eyes.. as those were made of glass only!
      Thank you Somali:)

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    2. Alok singhal3 July 2015 at 07:43

      Thank you, Somali...helped me better understand.

      Beautiful, Amit....these short forms from you are too good.

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    3. Amit Agarwal6 July 2015 at 08:01

      Thank you Alok:)

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  2. Manisha Sharma3 July 2015 at 02:45

    Awesome! I'm now starting to understand these things :) :)

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  3. C Suresh3 July 2015 at 05:15

    Wow! Broken dreams hurt like broken shards of glass in the eyes

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  4. magiceye3 July 2015 at 05:29

    Wah bhai wah!!

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  5. Ravish Mani3 July 2015 at 08:07

    Sabdon ki behatareen bazigari. Sheesha aur sapne dono bahut chubhte hain tutne par. :)

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  6. Teamgsquare3 July 2015 at 09:16

    Superb...

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  7. Unknown3 July 2015 at 14:51

    wow... I had to ask Desh the meaning of some of these words Amitji :-)

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    1. Amit Agarwal6 July 2015 at 08:04

      God bless him! Thank you Archana and Desh:)

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  8. M S Mahawar3 July 2015 at 20:52

    Bahut khoob!

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  9. Ashish Kumar4 July 2015 at 02:15

    ap shabdon ke jaadugar hain... ati uttam...

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    1. Amit Agarwal6 July 2015 at 08:06

      Main shabdon ka ghulaam hoon:) Thank you Ashish:)

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  10. Indrani4 July 2015 at 02:39

    Thanks for the your interpretation, very good meaning.

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  11. Uppal4 July 2015 at 23:04

    Perhaps you're referring to fleeting dreams!

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    1. Amit Agarwal6 July 2015 at 08:07

      ...broken, to be precise! Thank you Uppal:)

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