कहाँ गए वो पल जो बेताबी से
हमने साथ बिताए थे,
अब तो बस मायूसियों के
लम्बाते हुए साए हैं।
सब काट ही लेते हैं दिन
शाम की उम्मीदों में,
हमारे हिस्से तो रातों को भी
बस सिर्फ़ फ़ाके आये हैं।
रोज़ नया ग़म देती है
तोहफ़े में ज़िन्दगी,
अभी तो हम पुराने
सदमों से उबर न पाए हैं।
woops too poignant..Amit ji
ReplyDeleteThank you Khushbu:)
Deleteगम सहते सहते आदत सी हो गयी है ज़िंदगी को
ReplyDeleteसदमा न हो तो रात क्या दिन भी वीरान लगता है ।
बहुत खूब ।
wonderful rejoinder!!
DeleteThank you Sangeeta:)
hmmm maybe the new gifts life is giving us , we are not looking at them properly as we are still under the old sad moment .. I think its time to get up and accept the new gifts .. who knows what they have in store and we may be smiling till the D day :)
ReplyDeletelovely but sad poem ..
how are you doing Amit sir
Bikram's
Thank you Bikram sir:)
DeleteI'm good and hope the same for you:)
Well Said !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sanjay:)
Deleteati sundar pankhtiya Amitji!
ReplyDeleteThank you Titli:)
DeleteSad, simmering verses! beautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you Meenakshi:)
Deletejab sadme deti hai tab unse ubharne ka saahas bhi deti hai...
ReplyDeleteyahi to zindagi hoti hai...
Thank you Pooja:)
Deletebaat to aap sahi karte ho Amit g :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Kapil:)
DeleteVery sad & very true for so many.But how about changing the perspective?
ReplyDeleteThank you Indu:)
Delete"..mere mahboob mujhse pahle si muhabbat na maang"
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beautifully written as usual.
ReplyDeletewe never recover from our woes, we just get used to them.
Thank you Deb:)
Deletetrue and marvelous again
ReplyDeleteThank you Gunjan:)
Deletebeautiful piece of writing... speechless
ReplyDeleteThank you Ashish:)
Deletegood one Amitji.
ReplyDeleteThank you Roopa:)
DeleteLast two lines did it for me ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Ghazala:)
Deletesometimes life just uses us like a punching bag ... beautiful words Amit ...
ReplyDeleteThank you Tangy:)
Deleteबढिया रचना
ReplyDeleteThank you Manu:)
Deletevery nice...Life brings pain and failures.But, we have learnt to get on with it!
ReplyDeleteDeep n poignant lines, Amit.
Thank you Panchali:)
DeleteSimply profound!
ReplyDeleteThank you Uppal:)
DeleteThe pathos in your poetry shines. Always.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful work.
Thank you for your kind words Divya:)
DeleteI think You are remembering someone
ReplyDelete:) keep guessing:)
DeleteThank you Kirti:)
reading poems
ReplyDeletelike reading our own story.
feel very conected.
thnx sir for sharing.
Thank you Sunil:)
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