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Friday, 23 November 2012

सदमा...


कहाँ गए वो पल जो बेताबी से 
हमने साथ बिताए थे,
अब तो बस मायूसियों के 
लम्बाते हुए साए हैं।

सब काट ही लेते हैं दिन
शाम की उम्मीदों में,
हमारे हिस्से तो रातों को भी 
बस सिर्फ़ फ़ाके आये हैं।

रोज़ नया ग़म देती है 
तोहफ़े  में ज़िन्दगी,
अभी तो हम पुराने 
सदमों से उबर पाए हैं।  

42 comments:

  1. गम सहते सहते आदत सी हो गयी है ज़िंदगी को
    सदमा न हो तो रात क्या दिन भी वीरान लगता है ।

    बहुत खूब ।

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    1. wonderful rejoinder!!
      Thank you Sangeeta:)

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  2. hmmm maybe the new gifts life is giving us , we are not looking at them properly as we are still under the old sad moment .. I think its time to get up and accept the new gifts .. who knows what they have in store and we may be smiling till the D day :)


    lovely but sad poem ..

    how are you doing Amit sir

    Bikram's

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    1. Thank you Bikram sir:)
      I'm good and hope the same for you:)

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  3. jab sadme deti hai tab unse ubharne ka saahas bhi deti hai...
    yahi to zindagi hoti hai...

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  4. baat to aap sahi karte ho Amit g :)

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  5. Very sad & very true for so many.But how about changing the perspective?

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    1. Thank you Indu:)
      "..mere mahboob mujhse pahle si muhabbat na maang"
      (quoted):)

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  6. beautifully written as usual.

    we never recover from our woes, we just get used to them.

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  7. beautiful piece of writing... speechless

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  8. sometimes life just uses us like a punching bag ... beautiful words Amit ...

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  9. very nice...Life brings pain and failures.But, we have learnt to get on with it!
    Deep n poignant lines, Amit.

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  10. The pathos in your poetry shines. Always.
    Beautiful work.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words Divya:)

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  11. I think You are remembering someone

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    1. :) keep guessing:)
      Thank you Kirti:)

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  12. reading poems
    like reading our own story.
    feel very conected.
    thnx sir for sharing.

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