एक ट्रेन हूँ मैं,
बस चलती जाती .
स्टेशनों पे रूकती,
जंगल में खड़ी होती,
कभी रोक दी जाती .
या, एक स्टेशन हूँ मैं,
अपनी जगह स्थिर .
देखता रहता आती-जाती गाड़ियाँ,
मर्द-औरत, काले-गोरे, अमीर - ग़रीब,
बेशुमार मुसाफ़िर .
नहीं, चाय -कॉफ़ी वैंडर हूँ मैं,
पूरब से पश्चिम, उत्तर से दक्षिण
गर्मी - सर्दी - बरसात
यहाँ से वहाँ, वहाँ से यहाँ:
Yes...poignant one, Amit! And they continue...until something extraordinary happens :D
ReplyDeleteVery nice :)
Nice rejoinder, Panchali,"until something extraordinary happens":) I liked it:D
DeleteThank you so much for making it deeper with a new dimension!
You do have the most original thoughts & they all jell with our life conditions--well said once again!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Indu, for recognizing my originality:) This attestation coming from a competent authority like you, is a cherished testimonial! Thanks again:)
Deleteवाह....
ReplyDeleteअपनी पहचान खोजता हुआ भटक रहा हूँ ...
बहुत गहरी बात अमित जी...
अनु
Thank you Anu! Appreciation of depth in my very ordinary words by a profound person and writer like you, is my award:)
Deletevery poignant ! yes that is life ...
ReplyDeleteThank you Tangy:) That is life...
DeleteHow well you have written!
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani:)
Deletesir but what a lovely life the tea vendor has , north to south east to west .. if they are paid good money I would not mind doing it ..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lovely poem , Reality it depicts
Bikram's
Thank you Bikram:)
Deleteबहुत सुंदर रचना
ReplyDeleteआखिर क्यों नहीं पहुँचती हमारी पोस्ट गूगल सर्च तक?
Thank you Vinay:)
DeleteWonderful imagery!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
DeleteAmit,
ReplyDeletePassei pra lhe visitar e deixar um abraço, e encontro um lindo poema. Parabéns!
Um lindo e abençoado final de semana!
Como muita sorte eu sou Lucinha para ser abençoado com um amigo maravilhoso, amável como você!
ReplyDeleteObrigado por suas amáveis palavras, eu sou grato a você!
Estará de volta em breve com fotos novas no meu blog e compartilhá-los com vários sites de hospedagem meme :)
Tenha um ótimo tempo em frente! abraços ...
बेचारे कवि की ये हालात है .. कि लोगो को ना जाने क्या क्या बनाकर समझाता है .... जब लोगो के समझ में गयी .. यही बात सीधे -2 नहीं कह सकता था !!...
ReplyDeleteseedhe-seedhe mein kyaa mazaa hai bhalaa?
DeleteThank you Kirti:):)