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Tuesday, 13 November 2012

सुबह-2



किसी परिपक्व, सुशीला,
प्रेमिल, मजबूर माँ की तरह 
एक खीज भरी, फीकी,
सतही, निस्तेज मुस्कराहट के साथ,
जिसमें साफ़ झलकती है 
उसकी असहमति, विरोध और पीड़ा,
प्रकृति देती है 
ताज़ी हवा के कुछ झोंके 
जंगलों, पहाड़ों, खेतोँ और बाग़ानों से 
कहते हुए जैसे 
कि माफ़ तो कर नहीं सकती 
साफ़ दिल से 
जघन्य पापों को हमारे;
पर  मरने भी नहीं दे सकती 
आतंकी, आततायी, अपराधी 
बेटों को अपने!


प्रसंग: इस कविता की गहनता अनुभव कीजिये   सुबह-1  के साथ 
   


44 comments:

  1. हम प्रकृति के साथ कितना ही व्यभिचार कर लें पर वो हमेशा ही एक माँ की तरह हमें सुकून पहुंचाती है ... सुंदर प्रस्तुति

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    1. Thank you Sangeeta, for appreciating its core:)

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  2. I wish I could read it, but I know it is beautifully written, Amit! Hope your week is going well!

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    1. I'm so grateful Sylvia, for your trust in me:)
      This poem is about man's atrocities on environment and mother nature's benevolence!
      I'll try to provide you with an English translation whenever time permits. I'm sure you, a great nature lover, will like it!
      Thank you for being here:)

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  3. Yes it is true we play havoc with our environment.

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  4. So sensitively understood and so deftly portrayed, congratulations Amit Sir!

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  5. Satyavachan Amitji.
    Ye hawa kuch to kehti hai.


    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Thank you Jay:) Mother Nature's benevolence..!

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    1. हलचल में स्थान देने के लिए आपका हार्दिक धन्यवाद, संगीता जी! आभारी हूँ!

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  7. बहुत सराहनीय प्रस्तुति.
    बहुत सुंदर बात कही है इन पंक्तियों में. दिल को छू गयी. आभार !

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  8. Mmm! Strongly disapproving, yet unable to hate - that is true of mothers as well as Mother Nature. Lovely verbalizing of what we do to our environment, Amit!

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  9. Nature has always been kind to us. It's only when we reach the extreme, she does us harm.

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  10. This is agree that man has treated nature without care , but with all that is happening around the world , nature is hitting back with anger now ..


    Bikram's

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    1. She retaliates when we stretch it beyond limits!
      But then again continues to soothe and provide solace...
      Thank you Bikram:)

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  11. दोनों ही कविता ...अलग अंदाज़ और अलग सी सोच से लिखी गई ..बहुत खूब

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    1. Thank you Anju, for liking and appreciating them:)

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  12. Amitjee, itni khoobsurati se aapne hawa ki peeda kahi hai. "maaf to kar nahin sakti par marne bhi nahin de sakti."

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    1. Glad you liked:) Thank you Rachna:)

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  13. nice lines sir...........frnds YADI AAP SUBAH UTHNA CHAHTE HO THO AAP YE POST JARUR PADHEIN.... ..http://rahul65.blogspot.in/2012/11/7-benefits-of-rising-early-and-how-to.html...

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  14. http://www.hinditime.blogspot.in/

    This is a great post thanks for the information.

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  15. अमित जी, कम शब्‍दों में बहुत गहरी बात कह दी आपने। बधाई।
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    ‘की—बोर्ड वाली औरतें!’

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  16. Excellent Amit Ji ! Excellent. Aur ye sau pratisht sach hai jo aapne likha hai. Wah !

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  17. Your poems are always so warm and nice appealing to the senses... Yet I request you to translate your poems as and when possible ji :) I had to use translation tool to read it.. Excellent :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Hari, for liking my work and bearing with me:) I shall try my best to manage time to translate! Thank you for your effort and time:)

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  18. I am speechless ..... Well written

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