किसी परिपक्व, सुशीला,
प्रेमिल, मजबूर माँ की तरह
एक खीज भरी, फीकी,
सतही, निस्तेज मुस्कराहट के साथ,
जिसमें साफ़ झलकती है
उसकी असहमति, विरोध और पीड़ा,
प्रकृति देती है
ताज़ी हवा के कुछ झोंके
जंगलों, पहाड़ों, खेतोँ और बाग़ानों से
कहते हुए जैसे
कि माफ़ तो कर नहीं सकती
साफ़ दिल से
जघन्य पापों को हमारे;
पर मरने भी नहीं दे सकती
आतंकी, आततायी, अपराधी
बेटों को अपने!
हम प्रकृति के साथ कितना ही व्यभिचार कर लें पर वो हमेशा ही एक माँ की तरह हमें सुकून पहुंचाती है ... सुंदर प्रस्तुति
ReplyDeleteThank you Sangeeta, for appreciating its core:)
DeleteI wish I could read it, but I know it is beautifully written, Amit! Hope your week is going well!
ReplyDeleteI'm so grateful Sylvia, for your trust in me:)
DeleteThis poem is about man's atrocities on environment and mother nature's benevolence!
I'll try to provide you with an English translation whenever time permits. I'm sure you, a great nature lover, will like it!
Thank you for being here:)
it is so amazingly put sir. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vineet for liking it:)
DeleteYes it is true we play havoc with our environment.
ReplyDeleteSo sensitively understood and so deftly portrayed, congratulations Amit Sir!
ReplyDeleteThank you Meenakshi:)
Deleteअति सुंदर...
ReplyDeleteThank you Amrita:)
DeleteSatyavachan Amitji.
ReplyDeleteYe hawa kuch to kehti hai.
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
Thank you Jay:) Mother Nature's benevolence..!
Deleteआपकी किसी नयी -पुरानी पोस्ट की हल चल बृहस्पतिवार 15 - 11 -2012 को यहाँ भी है
ReplyDelete.... आज की नयी पुरानी हलचल में ....
कुछ पटाखे , कुछ फुलझड़ियाँ और कुछ उदास चुप्पियाँ.. .
हलचल में स्थान देने के लिए आपका हार्दिक धन्यवाद, संगीता जी! आभारी हूँ!
Deleteबहुत गहन और सटीक !
ReplyDeleteThank you Pratibha:)
Deleteबहुत सराहनीय प्रस्तुति.
ReplyDeleteबहुत सुंदर बात कही है इन पंक्तियों में. दिल को छू गयी. आभार !
Thank you Madan:)
DeleteMmm! Strongly disapproving, yet unable to hate - that is true of mothers as well as Mother Nature. Lovely verbalizing of what we do to our environment, Amit!
ReplyDeleteThank you Suresh sir:)
DeleteNature has always been kind to us. It's only when we reach the extreme, she does us harm.
ReplyDelete...exactly! Thank you Diwakar:)
DeleteWonderful poem... Loved it..
ReplyDeleteThank you Vinay:)
DeleteThis is agree that man has treated nature without care , but with all that is happening around the world , nature is hitting back with anger now ..
ReplyDeleteBikram's
She retaliates when we stretch it beyond limits!
DeleteBut then again continues to soothe and provide solace...
Thank you Bikram:)
दोनों ही कविता ...अलग अंदाज़ और अलग सी सोच से लिखी गई ..बहुत खूब
ReplyDeleteThank you Anju, for liking and appreciating them:)
DeleteAmitjee, itni khoobsurati se aapne hawa ki peeda kahi hai. "maaf to kar nahin sakti par marne bhi nahin de sakti."
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked:) Thank you Rachna:)
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ReplyDeleteThank you Rahul:)
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This is a great post thanks for the information.
Thank you!
Deleteअमित जी, कम शब्दों में बहुत गहरी बात कह दी आपने। बधाई।
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‘की—बोर्ड वाली औरतें!’
...shukriya Zakir Sahib:)
DeleteExcellent Amit Ji ! Excellent. Aur ye sau pratisht sach hai jo aapne likha hai. Wah !
ReplyDeleteThank you AJ:)
DeleteYour poems are always so warm and nice appealing to the senses... Yet I request you to translate your poems as and when possible ji :) I had to use translation tool to read it.. Excellent :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Hari, for liking my work and bearing with me:) I shall try my best to manage time to translate! Thank you for your effort and time:)
DeleteI am speechless ..... Well written
ReplyDeleteThank you Khushbu:)
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