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Tuesday, 13 November 2012

सुबह-1



रात भर के शोरीले  ताण्डव 
के परिप्रेक्ष्य में और भी वीरान लगती है 
दीवाली से अगले दिन की सुबह।

धुएँ  और कुहासे की 
मोटी चादर ओढ़े 
ख़ामोश, लाचार  देखती 
जैसे बीत गए 
बलात्कार के निशान।

बेशुमार आतिशबाज़ी से पैदा 
बेहिसाब चिन्दियाँ कागज़ की 
राख, डंडियाँ, खोल, रैपर्स, प्लास्टिक 
चारों ओर बर्बादी का मंजर :
बेख़बर सोये बेशर्म, उद्दण्ड व्यभिचारी !

प्रसंग : इस कविता का मर्म देखिये   सुबह-2   के साथ  

27 comments:

  1. चारों ओर बर्बादी का मंजर :
    बेख़बर सोये बेशर्म, उद्दण्ड व्यभिचारी !

    दीपावली के अगले दिन का सटीक चित्रण ..... बहुत संवेदनशील रचना


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    1. Thank you Sangeeta, for your appreciation:)

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  2. Mmm! The devastation caused by the celebration - well penned, Amit saab!

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  3. tasveer ka doosra rukh amit ji ---never thought this way
    but yes one has to agree
    thanks for this

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  4. OMG what a thought ,totally new perspective!

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  5. Bravo! Well said .... money burnt away for transient pleasure.

    At moments such as these one wonders ... Is man an intelligent being?

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  6. The depth of the words can be experienced in your verses Amit. The waste, the destruction and the helplessness are all there to feel....

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  7. सही कहा है..शुभकामना..

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  8. Isse kehte hai, the morning-after effect.
    Raat k aatishbaazi ka manzar subah.
    Lovely piece Amitji :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Thank you Jay for giving it a wonderful name,"The morning-after" ..:):)

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  9. too good....superb expression as ever..
    regards

    anu

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  11. Hmmm I dont know what to say .. as I guess I am one of those who have helped in the destruction ..

    I am a bad person :(

    Bikram's

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    1. Bikram sir, no body is 'bad' after realization and remorse! Understanding is the first step towards improvement and betterment! So, let's pledge for next year and the rest of our lives:)

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  12. Amit, I tried my best with the Hindi I know to understand this.

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    1. I'm so grateful Matheikal, for your efforts!
      I wish I had more time to translate it for you.
      However, since I earnestly want you to understand it completely and to its core, I suggest you take one of your Hindi teaching colleague's help for an explanation. I extend my sincere thanks to them in anticipation of their co-operation:)

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  13. ख़ामोश, लाचार देखती
    जैसे बीत गए
    बलात्कार के निशान। wah bilkul sahi kaha aapne...

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