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Monday 19 November 2012

रेलगाड़ी


एक ट्रेन हूँ मैं,
बस चलती जाती .
स्टेशनों पे रूकती,
जंगल में खड़ी होती,
कभी रोक दी जाती .

या, एक स्टेशन हूँ मैं,
अपनी जगह स्थिर .
देखता रहता आती-जाती गाड़ियाँ,
मर्द-औरत, काले-गोरे, अमीर - ग़रीब,
बेशुमार मुसाफ़िर .

नहीं, चाय -कॉफ़ी वैंडर हूँ मैं,
पूरब से पश्चिम, उत्तर से दक्षिण 
गर्मी - सर्दी - बरसात 
यहाँ से वहाँ, वहाँ से यहाँ:
अनवरत, अन्तहीन !!


इसके साथ ये भी पढ़िए :  पटरियाँ 







20 comments:

  1. Yes...poignant one, Amit! And they continue...until something extraordinary happens :D
    Very nice :)

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    1. Nice rejoinder, Panchali,"until something extraordinary happens":) I liked it:D
      Thank you so much for making it deeper with a new dimension!

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  2. You do have the most original thoughts & they all jell with our life conditions--well said once again!

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    1. Thanks a lot Indu, for recognizing my originality:) This attestation coming from a competent authority like you, is a cherished testimonial! Thanks again:)

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  3. वाह....
    अपनी पहचान खोजता हुआ भटक रहा हूँ ...
    बहुत गहरी बात अमित जी...

    अनु

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    1. Thank you Anu! Appreciation of depth in my very ordinary words by a profound person and writer like you, is my award:)

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  4. very poignant ! yes that is life ...

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  5. sir but what a lovely life the tea vendor has , north to south east to west .. if they are paid good money I would not mind doing it ..

    Beautiful lovely poem , Reality it depicts

    Bikram's

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  6. Amit,

    Passei pra lhe visitar e deixar um abraço, e encontro um lindo poema. Parabéns!
    Um lindo e abençoado final de semana!

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  7. Como muita sorte eu sou Lucinha para ser abençoado com um amigo maravilhoso, amável como você!
    Obrigado por suas amáveis ​​palavras, eu sou grato a você!
    Estará de volta em breve com fotos novas no meu blog e compartilhá-los com vários sites de hospedagem meme :)
    Tenha um ótimo tempo em frente! abraços ...

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  8. बेचारे कवि की ये हालात है .. कि लोगो को ना जाने क्या क्या बनाकर समझाता है .... जब लोगो के समझ में गयी .. यही बात सीधे -2 नहीं कह सकता था !!...

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    1. seedhe-seedhe mein kyaa mazaa hai bhalaa?
      Thank you Kirti:):)

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