tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post3198454366431735840..comments2024-02-22T01:35:42.913-08:00Comments on Safarnaamaa... सफ़रनामा...: सुबह-1AmitAaghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-4078612165024200872014-06-10T04:31:48.462-07:002014-06-10T04:31:48.462-07:00ख़ामोश, लाचार देखती
जैसे बीत गए
बलात्कार के निश...ख़ामोश, लाचार देखती <br />जैसे बीत गए <br />बलात्कार के निशान। wah bilkul sahi kaha aapne...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018115802979429269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-21482640924158004922012-11-15T20:39:02.895-08:002012-11-15T20:39:02.895-08:00Thank you Divya:)Glad you liked:)Thank you Divya:)Glad you liked:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-16194707508176833072012-11-15T20:38:19.442-08:002012-11-15T20:38:19.442-08:00I'm so grateful Matheikal, for your efforts!
I...I'm so grateful Matheikal, for your efforts!<br />I wish I had more time to translate it for you.<br />However, since I earnestly want you to understand it completely and to its core, I suggest you take one of your Hindi teaching colleague's help for an explanation. I extend my sincere thanks to them in anticipation of their co-operation:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-50359775303931831522012-11-15T20:30:33.805-08:002012-11-15T20:30:33.805-08:00Bikram sir, no body is 'bad' after realiza...Bikram sir, no body is 'bad' after realization and remorse! Understanding is the first step towards improvement and betterment! So, let's pledge for next year and the rest of our lives:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-53634434449144222992012-11-15T17:10:02.343-08:002012-11-15T17:10:02.343-08:00You're so right!You're so right! <br />D.Nambiarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14567504529129900396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-12325762552077080232012-11-15T07:07:53.254-08:002012-11-15T07:07:53.254-08:00Amit, I tried my best with the Hindi I know to und...Amit, I tried my best with the Hindi I know to understand this.Tomichan Matheikalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05037872309096060126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-43311372033251483922012-11-15T04:39:06.939-08:002012-11-15T04:39:06.939-08:00Hmmm I dont know what to say .. as I guess I am on...Hmmm I dont know what to say .. as I guess I am one of those who have helped in the destruction .. <br /><br />I am a bad person :(<br /><br /><a href="http://mannbikram.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Bikram's</a>Bikramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17320753339263375295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-8089573340672026682012-11-15T01:30:16.422-08:002012-11-15T01:30:16.422-08:00Thank you Yashodhan:)Thank you Yashodhan:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-35336480836086072192012-11-15T01:29:21.312-08:002012-11-15T01:29:21.312-08:00Thank you Jay for giving it a wonderful name,"...Thank you Jay for giving it a wonderful name,"The morning-after" ..:):)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-40141204971325312832012-11-15T01:27:08.818-08:002012-11-15T01:27:08.818-08:00Thank you Amrita:)
I reciprocate!Thank you Amrita:)<br />I reciprocate!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-29823177330810918682012-11-15T01:26:07.450-08:002012-11-15T01:26:07.450-08:00Thank you Zephyr for feeling it:)Thank you Zephyr for feeling it:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-20524936484055083302012-11-15T00:39:15.364-08:002012-11-15T00:39:15.364-08:00too good....superb expression as ever..
regards
a...too good....superb expression as ever..<br />regards<br /><br />anu ANULATA RAJ NAIRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02386833556494189702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-79932540693112633422012-11-14T22:50:09.023-08:002012-11-14T22:50:09.023-08:00Isse kehte hai, the morning-after effect.
Raat k a...Isse kehte hai, the morning-after effect.<br />Raat k aatishbaazi ka manzar subah.<br />Lovely piece Amitji :)<br /><br />Regards<br /><br />Jay<br />http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/provoqdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00629557333176692247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-24223565457526458202012-11-14T20:26:06.963-08:002012-11-14T20:26:06.963-08:00सही कहा है..शुभकामना..सही कहा है..शुभकामना..Amrita Tanmayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06785912345168519887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-35902492648036171042012-11-14T20:14:48.761-08:002012-11-14T20:14:48.761-08:00The depth of the words can be experienced in your ...The depth of the words can be experienced in your verses Amit. The waste, the destruction and the helplessness are all there to feel....Zephyrhttp://cybernag.innoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-65952929319411392642012-11-14T20:12:40.775-08:002012-11-14T20:12:40.775-08:00Thank you Jayadevm:)Thank you Jayadevm:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-43530736844752115892012-11-14T20:12:08.716-08:002012-11-14T20:12:08.716-08:00Thank you Indu:)Thank you Indu:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-69001003054705169142012-11-14T07:03:31.116-08:002012-11-14T07:03:31.116-08:00Bravo! Well said .... money burnt away for transie...Bravo! Well said .... money burnt away for transient pleasure.<br /><br />At moments such as these one wonders ... Is man an intelligent being?<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-19920980374521039792012-11-14T05:48:01.825-08:002012-11-14T05:48:01.825-08:00OMG what a thought ,totally new perspective!OMG what a thought ,totally new perspective!indu chhibberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17755152757229783585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-74163700073370567402012-11-14T02:16:48.387-08:002012-11-14T02:16:48.387-08:00Thank you Rajni, for liking it:)Thank you Rajni, for liking it:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-11810766394736752732012-11-14T02:16:17.942-08:002012-11-14T02:16:17.942-08:00Thank you sir, for liking it:)Thank you sir, for liking it:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-6436853171154506352012-11-14T02:15:39.380-08:002012-11-14T02:15:39.380-08:00Thank you Sangeeta, for your appreciation:)Thank you Sangeeta, for your appreciation:)AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-37415989593062632692012-11-14T00:29:50.573-08:002012-11-14T00:29:50.573-08:00tasveer ka doosra rukh amit ji ---never thought th...tasveer ka doosra rukh amit ji ---never thought this way<br />but yes one has to agree <br />thanks for this Rajni Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08535246989455283777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-20694548308349922552012-11-13T23:45:20.683-08:002012-11-13T23:45:20.683-08:00Mmm! The devastation caused by the celebration - w...Mmm! The devastation caused by the celebration - well penned, Amit saab!C Sureshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07447144019185253116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-32920406122284458522012-11-13T21:19:50.116-08:002012-11-13T21:19:50.116-08:00चारों ओर बर्बादी का मंजर :
बेख़बर सोये बेशर्म, उद्...चारों ओर बर्बादी का मंजर :<br />बेख़बर सोये बेशर्म, उद्दण्ड व्यभिचारी !<br /><br />दीपावली के अगले दिन का सटीक चित्रण ..... बहुत संवेदनशील रचना <br /><br /><br />संगीता स्वरुप ( गीत )https://www.blogger.com/profile/18232011429396479154noreply@blogger.com