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Friday, 30 March 2012

मेरे क़ातिल आप हैं...

थे आप क़ातिल
और मैं मक़तूल,
बनाया फिर भी
ख़ुदा आपको अपना.

अब जब बिखर कर
टूट ही गए हैं फूट गए हैं,
अब तो कह लेने दो
उन अरमानों को बस सपना.
Translation:

You are my slayer...

Although you were my assassin and I was destroyed by you, I still sat you on the pedestal of my heart and elevated to make a deity.

Now that all those fanciful hopes have completely shattered and smashed irreversibly, let us accept them as just dreams!

27 comments:

  1. बहुत बढ़िया....

    जिसे पाया था वो अपना था....जो टूट गया वो सपना था...
    nice lines...
    and beautifully translated!!!
    regards
    anu

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    1. Your comment is a beautiful compliment Anu. Thanks tons! Regards.

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  2. Such a beautiful feeling expressed!
    Knowingly, we , at times, succumb to death and yet, never know!

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  3. Very beautiful and truly profound!

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  4. wow LET US ACCEPT THEM AS DREAMS (JUST) .. VERY PAINFUL BUT PRACTICAL WORD. Nice amit, hats off to u and to ur poem and the translation tool

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    1. Thanks loadz Latha, for your generosity!

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  5. wow..that was so hopeful!! :) great pic,btw! :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Jen for finding hope in despair!
      ...the pic is from some other source, not mine!

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  6. Very nicely written. As someone said, Practical. Nice pic too

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    1. Thanks a lot Ashwini! The pic was picked up from somewhere as a symbol of dream(s)...

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  7. aur phir bhi kyun na ho sapna ho jab apna:-0 khoob likhi aapne- nice touching

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    1. Thanks a whole lot Sush for liking!

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  8. Wah, wah.. kya khoob likha hai! Loved the subtle feelings in the poetry, moving on and seeing the good in something broken is the best thing to do, indeed.. wonderful expressions!

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    1. Thanks loadz, Arti, for your appreciation!

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  9. I almost missed this one ... very beautiful :)

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    1. Why Sangeeta thanks a lot!...but you wont miss anything if you be kind enough to visit my blog more often:):) thanks again!

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    2. Yes I realised that yesterday !! I have to take out more time out in my day to read all the wonderful blogs my friends have :)

      Amit your hindi poetry is outstanding !! reminds of school n college reading poems in the literature books .. Keep up the good work :)

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    3. Thanks a whole lot Sangeeta for your support and encouragement...will strive to live up to it...

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  10. Lovely. "let us accept them as just dreams!". True, we have to accept whatever we missed as dreams!

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