थे आप क़ातिल
और मैं मक़तूल,
बनाया फिर भी
ख़ुदा आपको अपना.
अब जब बिखर कर
टूट ही गए हैं फूट गए हैं,
अब तो कह लेने दो
उन अरमानों को बस सपना.
You are my slayer...
Although you were my assassin and I was destroyed by you, I still sat you on the pedestal of my heart and elevated to make a deity.
Now that all those fanciful hopes have completely shattered and smashed irreversibly, let us accept them as just dreams!
जिसे पाया था वो अपना था....जो टूट गया वो सपना था...
and beautifully translated!!!
Your comment is a beautiful compliment Anu. Thanks tons! Regards.Delete
Such a beautiful feeling expressed!ReplyDelete
Knowingly, we , at times, succumb to death and yet, never know!
Thanks a lot Kinara:)Delete
Very beautiful and truly profound!ReplyDelete
Thank you Rohu:)Delete
wow LET US ACCEPT THEM AS DREAMS (JUST) .. VERY PAINFUL BUT PRACTICAL WORD. Nice amit, hats off to u and to ur poem and the translation toolReplyDelete
Thanks loadz Latha, for your generosity!Delete
wow..that was so hopeful!! :) great pic,btw! :)ReplyDelete
Thanks a lot Jen for finding hope in despair!Delete
...the pic is from some other source, not mine!
Loved the Hindi poem.ReplyDelete
Thank you so much Uma!Delete
aur phir bhi kyun na ho sapna ho jab apna:-0 khoob likhi aapne- nice touchingReplyDelete
Thanks a whole lot Sush for liking!Delete
Wah, wah.. kya khoob likha hai! Loved the subtle feelings in the poetry, moving on and seeing the good in something broken is the best thing to do, indeed.. wonderful expressions!ReplyDelete
Thanks loadz, Arti, for your appreciation!Delete
Amazing piece. :-)ReplyDelete
Thank you Abhyu!Delete
bahut hi sunderReplyDelete
Thank you Seema!Delete
Thanks a lot Ashwini! The pic was picked up from somewhere as a symbol of dream(s)...ReplyDelete
I almost missed this one ... very beautiful :)ReplyDelete
Why Sangeeta thanks a lot!...but you wont miss anything if you be kind enough to visit my blog more often:):) thanks again!Delete
Yes I realised that yesterday !! I have to take out more time out in my day to read all the wonderful blogs my friends have :)Delete
Amit your hindi poetry is outstanding !! reminds of school n college reading poems in the literature books .. Keep up the good work :)
Thanks a whole lot Sangeeta for your support and encouragement...will strive to live up to it...Delete
Lovely. "let us accept them as just dreams!". True, we have to accept whatever we missed as dreams!ReplyDelete