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Friday, 30 March 2012

मेरे क़ातिल आप हैं...

थे आप क़ातिल
और मैं मक़तूल,
बनाया फिर भी
ख़ुदा आपको अपना.

अब जब बिखर कर
टूट ही गए हैं फूट गए हैं,
अब तो कह लेने दो
उन अरमानों को बस सपना.
Translation:

You are my slayer...

Although you were my assassin and I was destroyed by you, I still sat you on the pedestal of my heart and elevated to make a deity.

Now that all those fanciful hopes have completely shattered and smashed irreversibly, let us accept them as just dreams!
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26 comments:

  1. ANULATA RAJ NAIR31 March 2012 at 00:01

    बहुत बढ़िया....

    जिसे पाया था वो अपना था....जो टूट गया वो सपना था...
    nice lines...
    and beautifully translated!!!
    regards
    anu

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    1. AmitAag31 March 2012 at 00:24

      Your comment is a beautiful compliment Anu. Thanks tons! Regards.

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  2. Kinara :)31 March 2012 at 00:54

    Such a beautiful feeling expressed!
    Knowingly, we , at times, succumb to death and yet, never know!

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  3. Rohini31 March 2012 at 05:56

    Very beautiful and truly profound!

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  4. SATYA LAKSHMI31 March 2012 at 06:55

    wow LET US ACCEPT THEM AS DREAMS (JUST) .. VERY PAINFUL BUT PRACTICAL WORD. Nice amit, hats off to u and to ur poem and the translation tool

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    1. AmitAag1 April 2012 at 22:32

      Thanks loadz Latha, for your generosity!

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  5. Jen..The Butterfly Effect31 March 2012 at 13:04

    wow..that was so hopeful!! :) great pic,btw! :)

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    1. AmitAag1 April 2012 at 22:34

      Thanks a lot Jen for finding hope in despair!
      ...the pic is from some other source, not mine!

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  6. umashankar1 April 2012 at 09:21

    Loved the Hindi poem.

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  7. Sushma Harish1 April 2012 at 11:18

    aur phir bhi kyun na ho sapna ho jab apna:-0 khoob likhi aapne- nice touching

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  8. Arti1 April 2012 at 21:45

    Wah, wah.. kya khoob likha hai! Loved the subtle feelings in the poetry, moving on and seeing the good in something broken is the best thing to do, indeed.. wonderful expressions!

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    1. AmitAag1 April 2012 at 22:39

      Thanks loadz, Arti, for your appreciation!

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  9. Abhyudaya1 April 2012 at 22:07

    Amazing piece. :-)

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  10. Seema1 April 2012 at 22:27

    bahut hi sunder

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  11. AmitAag1 April 2012 at 22:36

    Thanks a lot Ashwini! The pic was picked up from somewhere as a symbol of dream(s)...

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  12. Sangrywords9 April 2012 at 10:32

    I almost missed this one ... very beautiful :)

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    1. AmitAag9 April 2012 at 23:22

      Why Sangeeta thanks a lot!...but you wont miss anything if you be kind enough to visit my blog more often:):) thanks again!

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    2. Sangrywords10 April 2012 at 00:45

      Yes I realised that yesterday !! I have to take out more time out in my day to read all the wonderful blogs my friends have :)

      Amit your hindi poetry is outstanding !! reminds of school n college reading poems in the literature books .. Keep up the good work :)

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    3. AmitAag10 April 2012 at 23:05

      Thanks a whole lot Sangeeta for your support and encouragement...will strive to live up to it...

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  13. Ranjana's craft blog30 April 2013 at 03:51

    Lovely. "let us accept them as just dreams!". True, we have to accept whatever we missed as dreams!

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