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Saturday, 24 March 2012

सेंर्यु-६

गिटार (का) दंभ
पतली है कमर
पुष्ट नितम्ब








Translation:
Senryu-6

Guitar(’s)arrogance
lean is waist
and butt plump
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18 comments:

  1. AmitAag24 March 2012 at 00:09

    I admit that the metaphor has crossed its limit and become a conceit figuratively.
    But a guitar is the most beautiful of all musical instruments literally too!

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  2. ANULATA RAJ NAIR24 March 2012 at 00:12

    good one....
    yes, guitar is arrogant and so are the guitarists!!!!!
    may be not for the same reason..
    :-)

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    1. AmitAag24 March 2012 at 00:21

      Thank you Anu,but you only appreciate and don't vote:(
      Plz don't forget this time:)
      Thanks!

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    2. ANULATA RAJ NAIR24 March 2012 at 06:44

      i don't get u...whats this voting??? pls explain.

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  3. Anonymous24 March 2012 at 00:53

    Nice one, Amit.

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  4. LeoPaw24 March 2012 at 09:36

    Nice one. never thought about it that way.

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    1. AmitAag25 March 2012 at 21:19

      Thank you doc! That's the innovation of a poet!

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  5. SATYA LAKSHMI24 March 2012 at 09:43

    Short and sweet amit

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    1. AmitAag25 March 2012 at 21:20

      Thanks a lot Latha! Happy na with the translation?

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  6. CYNOSURE25 March 2012 at 11:54

    nice one Amit...it was a cute description... :)

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  7. Arti25 March 2012 at 21:20

    Lovely description, innovative and different as always :)

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    1. AmitAag25 March 2012 at 21:23

      Thanks a lot Arti for your generous words:)

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  8. magiceye25 March 2012 at 21:48

    neat!

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  9. Santosh Namby26 March 2012 at 09:39

    beautiful....

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