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Monday, 12 March 2012

कुछ सेनर्यु ...

१.
राजधानी में
है बलात्कारी नेता
अवाम रोता

२.
ऊँगली काली
मतदान दिवस
है सरकारी

३.
बनी सड़कें
फिर से खुदवाएं
टैक्स बढ़ाएं

४.
सभ्य समाज
कन्या भ्रूण की ह्त्या
है शर्मसार

५.
जनतंत्र का
मतदान दिवस
है उपहास
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13 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 March 2012 at 00:53

    sach se rubaru karati hai'n aapki panktiyaa'n...

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  2. AmitAag12 March 2012 at 01:02

    Thanks a lot Indu! I'm grateful!

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  3. A Homemaker's Utopia12 March 2012 at 01:54

    Bahuth achha likhaa hai appne Amit Jee..:-)

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  4. ANULATA RAJ NAIR12 March 2012 at 03:56

    बहुत बढ़िया हायेकु....
    थोड़े से शब्दों में बहुत सारी बातें....

    excellent sir.
    regards.

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    1. AmitAag12 March 2012 at 04:39

      Thanks a lot!...but these are senryu(s), not haiku(s). There's a difference between the two. Anyways thanks again for liking them!

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  5. Seema12 March 2012 at 07:17

    Bilkul sach likha hai aapne.

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  6. Sushma Harish12 March 2012 at 11:51

    truth composed so well-

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  7. Seema13 March 2012 at 20:39

    bilkul sahi kaha aapne...

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