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Monday, 26 March 2012

हवा का एक झोंका...

वो ख़लिश वो तपिश वो जुत्सजू
नहीं रही
एक बेसाख्ता सा झोंका
सब कुछ भुला गया.

वो ख़्वाब वो रंग वो ख़ुशबू
नहीं रही
एक बेसाख्ता सा झोंका
सब उड़ा ले गया.

वो ख्वाहिश वो तमन्ना वो आरज़ू
नहीं रही
एक बेसाख्ता सा झोंका
सब कुछ मिटा गया.

वो हसरतें जो झेल चुकी थीं
तूफाँ कई-कई
एक बेसाख्ता सा झोंका
उन्हें साथ ले गया.











Translation:
A blast of wind...

The severity the warmth the yearning
are no more as they used to be
an abrupt gust of wind
took everything along.

The dreams the colours the fragrance
are no more as they used to be
an abrupt gust of wind
flew everything along.

The craving the desire the hope
are no more as they used to be
an abrupt gust of wind
erased everything along.

The inclination which had withstood
many adversities since long
is no more as it used to be
a sudden blast of wind
took everything along.

81 comments:

  1. वो कशिश, वो उलझन, वो दर्द
    एक कविता की पंक्तियों में कैसे समा गयी?
    :)

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  2. God's greatness doc.,and your kind compliments! Thanks a lot!

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  3. बड़ा गज़ब ढाया इस झोंके ने.....
    :-)
    beautiful.... in both the forms.

    regards
    anu

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    1. Thanks loadz Anu! Gazab comment too:)

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  4. beautifully written and thanx for the translation.

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    1. Thanks a lot Deba! you're welcome too!

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  5. Sabki life mein aisa jhonka kabhi na kabhi aata hai... aur jab aata hai toh kasam se bas maza aa jata hai

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  6. वाह! बेहतरीन लिखा है!!!

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  7. da first line itself says so much, loud and clear... awesome..

    pls visit if time permits,..
    www.soul-n-heart.blogspot.com

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    1. Thanks a whole lot Bhargav!
      Will visit soon and feed you back too!

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  8. This is so beautiful :).
    I wish I could have read in Hindi itself :(. It would have probably meant much more :D.

    Just loved it Amit Jhi :). It had a very soul-ly feeling in it :).

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    1. Thanks loadz Princess jhi! yes...you're right the translation howsoever closely matching with the original can not carry with it the particular 'feel' of a language. I've however tried my best to preserve the essence in translation too. Thanks again for liking and appreciating!

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  9. Amit - your words are so beautiful ... truely enjoyed reading it ..

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    1. Thanks a ton Sangeeta, I'm grateful!

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  10. nice blog Amit, I will keep returning!

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    1. Thanks a lot Gayatri for liking and following too!

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  11. Very beautiful words Amitji. First time on your blog. very beautiful blog too.

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    1. Thanks loadz Mohinee! Plz keep visiting!

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