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Saturday 24 March 2012

सेंर्यु-६

गिटार (का) दंभ
पतली है कमर
पुष्ट नितम्ब








Translation:
Senryu-6

Guitar(’s)arrogance
lean is waist
and butt plump

18 comments:

  1. I admit that the metaphor has crossed its limit and become a conceit figuratively.
    But a guitar is the most beautiful of all musical instruments literally too!

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  2. good one....
    yes, guitar is arrogant and so are the guitarists!!!!!
    may be not for the same reason..
    :-)

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    1. Thank you Anu,but you only appreciate and don't vote:(
      Plz don't forget this time:)
      Thanks!

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    2. i don't get u...whats this voting??? pls explain.

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  3. Nice one, Amit.

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  4. Nice one. never thought about it that way.

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    1. Thank you doc! That's the innovation of a poet!

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    1. Thanks a lot Latha! Happy na with the translation?

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  6. nice one Amit...it was a cute description... :)

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  7. Lovely description, innovative and different as always :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Arti for your generous words:)

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