Amit ji, there's something about the use of language in your poems that instantly accentuate and transmit the feeling conveyed through the poem.
You made my day Somali:) Thanks a ton:)
Thank you Rupam:)
थोड़ा सा कोहराम मचा दे कोईये खामोश मिजाजी हमें जीने नहीं देगी।
Great rejoinder Manisha:) Thank you:)
I see you've done away with symbolism in your haiku...Wonder what the sticklers for rules will say for that...
'kuchh toh log kahenge..logon ka kaam hai kahna.."My apologies to hardliners:)
Manisha's lines worked as icing on the cake. Both, yours and her, together is good example of linked-poetry. It reminded me of ancient renga. :)
Yes! The opening verse in a Renga called hokku became the basis of the modern haiku..so your scholarly observation/suggestion is apt and correct..Thank you Ravish:)
Life is 'too much with us.'
In fact "The World Is Too Much With Us" :)
शानदार प्रस्तुति !!
Thank you Yogendra:)
Thank you Shraddha:)
Musalsal kya hota hai, though I get the feelings!
What is Musalsal?
Thank you Mridula and Deepak for prompting me to provide key. Done:)
Bahut hi simple bhasha me bahut hi gahri baat! Very beautiful!
Thank you Rakesh:)
If one reads poetry like this, one will never feel alone....:)
Humbled! Thanks a lot Sunaina:) Glad you liked:)
Thank you Madhusudan:)
Thank you Purba:)
Tanha rehna humare kismat mein hai; tanha mehsoos karna humari fitrat mein nahin :)
Sach kahaa, Suresh bhai! Thank you:)
Too good, Sir.
Thank you Saru:) Glad you liked:)
Thank you Indrani:)
Thank you Rajesh:)
Continuity of a single strain throughout eternity....wonderful....no words for it
Thank you Datta:)
beautiful.. but sir sometime tanhaiyaan are good in life :) Bikram's
Yes, they sure are! Thank you Bikram sir:)
बहुत सुंदर .नई पोस्ट : तनहा सफ़र जिंदगी का
Thank you Rajeev:)
Wow! That's beautiful! Bahut khoob! :)
Thank you Deepa:)