Amit ji, there's something about the use of language in your poems that instantly accentuate and transmit the feeling conveyed through the poem.
You made my day Somali:) Thanks a ton:)
Thank you Rupam:)
थोड़ा सा कोहराम मचा दे कोईये खामोश मिजाजी हमें जीने नहीं देगी।
Great rejoinder Manisha:) Thank you:)
I see you've done away with symbolism in your haiku...Wonder what the sticklers for rules will say for that...
'kuchh toh log kahenge..logon ka kaam hai kahna.."My apologies to hardliners:)
Manisha's lines worked as icing on the cake. Both, yours and her, together is good example of linked-poetry. It reminded me of ancient renga. :)
Yes! The opening verse in a Renga called hokku became the basis of the modern haiku..so your scholarly observation/suggestion is apt and correct..Thank you Ravish:)
Life is 'too much with us.'
In fact "The World Is Too Much With Us" :)
शानदार प्रस्तुति !!
Thank you Yogendra:)
Adorable.... :)
Thank you Shraddha:)
Musalsal kya hota hai, though I get the feelings!
What is Musalsal?
Thank you Mridula and Deepak for prompting me to provide key. Done:)
Bahut hi simple bhasha me bahut hi gahri baat! Very beautiful!
Thank you Rakesh:)
If one reads poetry like this, one will never feel alone....:)
Humbled! Thanks a lot Sunaina:) Glad you liked:)
Behatreen!!
Thank you Madhusudan:)
Thank you Purba:)
Tanha rehna humare kismat mein hai; tanha mehsoos karna humari fitrat mein nahin :)
Sach kahaa, Suresh bhai! Thank you:)
Too good, Sir.
Thank you Saru:) Glad you liked:)
Thank you Indrani:)
Thank you Rajesh:)
Continuity of a single strain throughout eternity....wonderful....no words for it
Thank you Datta:)
beautiful.. but sir sometime tanhaiyaan are good in life :) Bikram's
Yes, they sure are! Thank you Bikram sir:)
बहुत सुंदर .नई पोस्ट : तनहा सफ़र जिंदगी का
Thank you Rajeev:)
Wow! That's beautiful! Bahut khoob! :)
Thank you Deepa:)
Amit ji, there's something about the use of language in your poems that instantly accentuate and transmit the feeling conveyed through the poem.
ReplyDeleteYou made my day Somali:) Thanks a ton:)
DeleteThank you Rupam:)
ReplyDeleteथोड़ा सा कोहराम मचा दे कोई
ReplyDeleteये खामोश मिजाजी हमें जीने नहीं देगी।
Great rejoinder Manisha:) Thank you:)
DeleteI see you've done away with symbolism in your haiku...
ReplyDeleteWonder what the sticklers for rules will say for that...
'kuchh toh log kahenge..logon ka kaam hai kahna.."
DeleteMy apologies to hardliners:)
Manisha's lines worked as icing on the cake. Both, yours and her, together is good example of linked-poetry. It reminded me of ancient renga. :)
ReplyDeleteYes! The opening verse in a Renga called hokku became the basis of the modern haiku..so your scholarly observation/suggestion is apt and correct..Thank you Ravish:)
DeleteLife is 'too much with us.'
ReplyDeleteIn fact "The World Is Too Much With Us" :)
Deleteशानदार प्रस्तुति !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Yogendra:)
DeleteAdorable.... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shraddha:)
DeleteMusalsal kya hota hai, though I get the feelings!
ReplyDeleteWhat is Musalsal?
ReplyDeleteThank you Mridula and Deepak for prompting me to provide key. Done:)
DeleteBahut hi simple bhasha me bahut hi gahri baat! Very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rakesh:)
DeleteIf one reads poetry like this, one will never feel alone....:)
ReplyDeleteHumbled! Thanks a lot Sunaina:) Glad you liked:)
DeleteBehatreen!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Madhusudan:)
DeleteThank you Purba:)
ReplyDeleteTanha rehna humare kismat mein hai; tanha mehsoos karna humari fitrat mein nahin :)
ReplyDeleteSach kahaa, Suresh bhai! Thank you:)
DeleteToo good, Sir.
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru:) Glad you liked:)
DeleteThank you Indrani:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajesh:)
ReplyDeleteContinuity of a single strain throughout eternity....wonderful....no words for it
ReplyDeleteThank you Datta:)
Deletebeautiful.. but sir sometime tanhaiyaan are good in life :)
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Yes, they sure are! Thank you Bikram sir:)
Deleteबहुत सुंदर .
ReplyDeleteनई पोस्ट : तनहा सफ़र जिंदगी का
Thank you Rajeev:)
DeleteWow! That's beautiful! Bahut khoob! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepa:)
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