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Monday, 30 November 2015

सिलसिला


मुसलसल
है एक सिलसिला
तन्हाइयों का

Key:
मुसलसल = continuous


43 comments:

  1. Amit ji, there's something about the use of language in your poems that instantly accentuate and transmit the feeling conveyed through the poem.

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    1. You made my day Somali:) Thanks a ton:)

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  2. थोड़ा सा कोहराम मचा दे कोई
    ये खामोश मिजाजी हमें जीने नहीं देगी।

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    1. Great rejoinder Manisha:) Thank you:)

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  3. I see you've done away with symbolism in your haiku...

    Wonder what the sticklers for rules will say for that...

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    1. 'kuchh toh log kahenge..logon ka kaam hai kahna.."
      My apologies to hardliners:)

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  4. Manisha's lines worked as icing on the cake. Both, yours and her, together is good example of linked-poetry. It reminded me of ancient renga. :)

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    1. Yes! The opening verse in a Renga called hokku became the basis of the modern haiku..so your scholarly observation/suggestion is apt and correct..Thank you Ravish:)

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  5. Life is 'too much with us.'

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    1. In fact "The World Is Too Much With Us" :)

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  6. शानदार प्रस्तुति !!

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  7. Musalsal kya hota hai, though I get the feelings!

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    1. Thank you Mridula and Deepak for prompting me to provide key. Done:)

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  9. Bahut hi simple bhasha me bahut hi gahri baat! Very beautiful!

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  10. If one reads poetry like this, one will never feel alone....:)

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    1. Humbled! Thanks a lot Sunaina:) Glad you liked:)

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  11. Tanha rehna humare kismat mein hai; tanha mehsoos karna humari fitrat mein nahin :)

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    1. Sach kahaa, Suresh bhai! Thank you:)

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  12. Continuity of a single strain throughout eternity....wonderful....no words for it

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  13. beautiful.. but sir sometime tanhaiyaan are good in life :)


    Bikram's

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    1. Yes, they sure are! Thank you Bikram sir:)

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  14. Wow! That's beautiful! Bahut khoob! :)

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