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Monday, 30 November 2015

बे-लगाम


वहाँ पे तिल
ये दिल बे-लगाम
हुआ गुलाम

27 comments:

  1. So heart is where the 'mole' is.....:)

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    1. ha ha:) aisa hi lagtaa hai:) Thank you Geetashree:)

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  2. is haiku par salaam,salaam,salaam

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    1. Kashif sahab shukriya, shukriya, shukriya!!!

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  3. Kya baat hai Amitji!! Loved it, can totally relate to it!!

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    1. Glad you did:) Thank you Hemant:)
      Actually 'वहाँ पे' will make many relate:):P

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  4. Aha! Pasand aaya yeh andaaz aapka :)

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    1. Thank you Beloo:) Glad you liked:)
      In fact kind readers like you make me:)
      Thanks tonz:)

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  5. Kya baat hai, Amitji! Til pe to bahut kuchh likha gaya hai. This one was one of the really good ones! Loved the concept of dil hua ghulam!

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    1. Ha ha:) Arre boss, all in imagination:) You know a poet's (absurd) flight of fancy:) But thank you for your 'til pe dil':):)

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  7. "गर सियाह-बख़्त ही होना था नसीबों में मेरे
    ज़ुल्फ़ होता तेरे रुख़सार कि या तिल होता।"

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