Wow! Contrast and rhyme together. :)
Thank you Somali:)
Wow!
Thank you Manisha:)
So heart is where the 'mole' is.....:)
ha ha:) aisa hi lagtaa hai:) Thank you Geetashree:)
Things that attract!
:)
is haiku par salaam,salaam,salaam
Kashif sahab shukriya, shukriya, shukriya!!!
Wah wah!!
Thank you Deepak sir:)
Kya baat hai Amitji!! Loved it, can totally relate to it!!
Glad you did:) Thank you Hemant:)Actually 'वहाँ पे' will make many relate:):P
Aha! Pasand aaya yeh andaaz aapka :)
Thank you Beloo:) Glad you liked:) In fact kind readers like you make me:)Thanks tonz:)
Superb! :)
Thank you Ravish:)
Well said of emotions :)
Thank you Indrani:)
Superb!
Thank you Madhusudan:)
Kya baat hai, Amitji! Til pe to bahut kuchh likha gaya hai. This one was one of the really good ones! Loved the concept of dil hua ghulam!
Thank you Rakesh:) Glad you liked:)
Til pe dil laga diya aapne? :)
Ha ha:) Arre boss, all in imagination:) You know a poet's (absurd) flight of fancy:) But thank you for your 'til pe dil':):)
"गर सियाह-बख़्त ही होना था नसीबों में मेरेज़ुल्फ़ होता तेरे रुख़सार कि या तिल होता।"
Wow! Contrast and rhyme together. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Somali:)
DeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteThank you Manisha:)
DeleteSo heart is where the 'mole' is.....:)
ReplyDeleteha ha:) aisa hi lagtaa hai:) Thank you Geetashree:)
DeleteThings that attract!
ReplyDelete:)
Deleteis haiku par salaam,salaam,salaam
ReplyDeleteKashif sahab shukriya, shukriya, shukriya!!!
DeleteWah wah!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak sir:)
DeleteKya baat hai Amitji!! Loved it, can totally relate to it!!
ReplyDeleteGlad you did:) Thank you Hemant:)
DeleteActually 'वहाँ पे' will make many relate:):P
Aha! Pasand aaya yeh andaaz aapka :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Beloo:) Glad you liked:)
DeleteIn fact kind readers like you make me:)
Thanks tonz:)
Superb! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ravish:)
DeleteWell said of emotions :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani:)
DeleteSuperb!
ReplyDeleteThank you Madhusudan:)
DeleteKya baat hai, Amitji! Til pe to bahut kuchh likha gaya hai. This one was one of the really good ones! Loved the concept of dil hua ghulam!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rakesh:) Glad you liked:)
DeleteTil pe dil laga diya aapne? :)
ReplyDeleteHa ha:) Arre boss, all in imagination:) You know a poet's (absurd) flight of fancy:) But thank you for your 'til pe dil':):)
Delete"गर सियाह-बख़्त ही होना था नसीबों में मेरे
ReplyDeleteज़ुल्फ़ होता तेरे रुख़सार कि या तिल होता।"