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Monday, 30 November 2015

शायद


देखो सुबह
शायद मुस्कुराये
मेरा भी दिन

32 comments:

  1. Hope and a hint of despondency are there together in this haiku.

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    1. Exactly! Glad you spotted it:) Thank you Somali:)

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  2. जरूर :) क्यों नहीं

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  3. Hope is an illusion we cannot stay without

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    1. Very nicely said:) Thank you Geetashree:)

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  4. I wish I could write like this. I am a big fan of your work. Crisp, profound and playful.

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    1. I'm humbled! Coming from a great writer like you it really means a lot!!
      Thank you Saru:)

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  5. खूबसूरत शब्द ! खूबसूरत अंदाज़

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  6. Ummeed par duniya kayam hai. This poem shows the despondency of a pained heart, which refuses to bow down.

    Another good one, Amitji.

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  7. Hope brings in smiles, and one is deemed to smile after reading your lines. Crisp, beautiful and intense.

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  8. Wishing you a lot of smiles throughout he day and everyday!

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  9. Beshaq ! Aisa lagta hai har raat, kal aisa hoga ..
    :)

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    1. :) You got it right, Kokila:) Thanks tonz:)

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  10. The power of hope! Love how you say so much in so few words.

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  11. shayad nahin, yakinan mukurayega :) Lovely words, Amit, but then what else does one expect from you :)

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  12. You make me proud of you Suresh:) Thank you:)

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