Hope and a hint of despondency are there together in this haiku.
Exactly! Glad you spotted it:) Thank you Somali:)
जरूर :) क्यों नहीं
:):)
Hope is an illusion we cannot stay without
Very nicely said:) Thank you Geetashree:)
I wish I could write like this. I am a big fan of your work. Crisp, profound and playful.
I'm humbled! Coming from a great writer like you it really means a lot!!Thank you Saru:)
खूबसूरत शब्द ! खूबसूरत अंदाज़
Thank you Yogendra:)
Ummeed par duniya kayam hai. This poem shows the despondency of a pained heart, which refuses to bow down. Another good one, Amitji.
Thank you Rakesh:)
Wow !! :)
Thank you Shraddha:)
Hope brings in smiles, and one is deemed to smile after reading your lines. Crisp, beautiful and intense.
Thank you Sangeeta:)
best lines
Thank you Harshita:)
Good lines
Thank you Archana:)
Wishing you a lot of smiles throughout he day and everyday!
Thank you Mridula:)
Beshaq ! Aisa lagta hai har raat, kal aisa hoga ..:)
:) You got it right, Kokila:) Thanks tonz:)
U said a lot in few words!
Thank you Shaivi:)
Wow...definitely ...why not?
Thank you Ranjana:)
The power of hope! Love how you say so much in so few words.
Glad you liked:) Thank you Beloo:)
shayad nahin, yakinan mukurayega :) Lovely words, Amit, but then what else does one expect from you :)
You make me proud of you Suresh:) Thank you:)
Hope and a hint of despondency are there together in this haiku.
ReplyDeleteExactly! Glad you spotted it:) Thank you Somali:)
Deleteजरूर :) क्यों नहीं
ReplyDelete:):)
DeleteHope is an illusion we cannot stay without
ReplyDeleteVery nicely said:) Thank you Geetashree:)
DeleteI wish I could write like this. I am a big fan of your work. Crisp, profound and playful.
ReplyDeleteI'm humbled! Coming from a great writer like you it really means a lot!!
DeleteThank you Saru:)
खूबसूरत शब्द ! खूबसूरत अंदाज़
ReplyDeleteThank you Yogendra:)
DeleteUmmeed par duniya kayam hai. This poem shows the despondency of a pained heart, which refuses to bow down.
ReplyDeleteAnother good one, Amitji.
Thank you Rakesh:)
DeleteWow !! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shraddha:)
DeleteHope brings in smiles, and one is deemed to smile after reading your lines. Crisp, beautiful and intense.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sangeeta:)
Deletebest lines
ReplyDeleteThank you Harshita:)
DeleteGood lines
ReplyDeleteThank you Archana:)
DeleteWishing you a lot of smiles throughout he day and everyday!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mridula:)
DeleteBeshaq ! Aisa lagta hai har raat, kal aisa hoga ..
ReplyDelete:)
:) You got it right, Kokila:) Thanks tonz:)
DeleteU said a lot in few words!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shaivi:)
DeleteWow...definitely ...why not?
ReplyDeleteThank you Ranjana:)
DeleteThe power of hope! Love how you say so much in so few words.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked:) Thank you Beloo:)
Deleteshayad nahin, yakinan mukurayega :) Lovely words, Amit, but then what else does one expect from you :)
ReplyDeleteYou make me proud of you Suresh:) Thank you:)
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