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Friday, 6 November 2015

प्यास


ख़ुश्क हो चले
थरथराते होंठ
किसी प्यास में

36 comments:

  1. hmmmm yes .. I know the feeling ... it Hurts


    Amit Sir Happy Diwali to you and family and Everyone around you .

    Bikram's

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    1. "मुझसे मत पूछ मेरे इश्क़ में क्या रखा है
      एक शोला है जो सीने में दबा रखा है "

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  3. Awesome line.एक लाइन में ही काफी कुछ कह दिया आपने

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  4. बहुत सुन्दर

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  5. It happens while trekking too, particularly when you don't get a water source for a while and you have consumed all the water you carried :D

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    1. You caught me, Mridula! In fact it was written during a trek:) ;) :D :P

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  6. बहुत ही सुन्दर !! अमित जी

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    1. Hey...look who's here...it's Alka!
      ...long time. Thank you:)

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  8. Made me feel romantic with the last line :)

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  9. Bahut khoob, Amitji! A real image of despondency! As Dagh once said...

    Naummeedi badh gayi hai is kadar,
    Aarzoo ki aarzoo hone lagi.

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    1. True! That keeps the world going:) but what if it is not quenched?
      Thank you ma'am:)

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  11. ... and what if one is unable to realize what the thirst is for ?
    Beautiful !

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  12. Realization will rob it of its romance:) Thank you Kokila:)

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