A reflective metaphor!
Yes, Thank you Uppal ma'am:)
Reality check .....should not let dreams become demons.....................and impulses be hindrances.....Every flight of fancy has to be imbued with the quote of caution.....that's how I have interpreted these lines Amitji..Perhaps it matches your thoughts....?
Oh wow! Wonderfully interpreted..even better than the thought behind this haiku!Can I have it compressed please? and your kind permission to put it beside my haiku to adorn it..
Your haiku itself is so ornamental, it does not require any adornment.....however, its your prerogative Amitji, you may use my interpretation as you wish....an honour for me, no less...
Thank you so much...I'm really obliged:)
Delighted to be of service Amitji :) and honoured to share space with the doyen of haikus
Please don't call it service, we're co-creating, and don't embarrass me by calling me the doyen etc. we're learning.. together:) Thank you once again:)
Wow, just wow :)
Thank you Manisha:)
It tickled and created the right not. I love itWhen the blade puncturesthrough the bark,The birds above cries,run for their life,The tree fallen from its rise;and dries!
Great lines...thank you Shams:)
Change of perspective over time!
...time! Thank you Deepak sir:)
oh my god... how ticklish :p nice one Amitji...
Thank you Archana:)
Thank you Rajesh:)
Things change over time, so do relationships. Nice one.
Thank you Somali:)
Another of your wise and satirical nugget . I repeat Somali's words - things change over time , so do relationships .
'wise and satirical' increases its USP...Thank you Kokila:)
Sardonic, Amit ji!
Thank you Lata:)
Thank you Yogi:)
wow.. things which are matter of joy to some might not be to others or in time it cease to bring joy.. great metaphor this one!!
Thank you Roohi:)
Thank you Suresh sir:)
it is sad when Relations turn like that ... Bikram's
Thank you Bikram sir:)