Reality check .....should not let dreams become demons.....................and impulses be hindrances.....Every flight of fancy has to be imbued with the quote of caution.....that's how I have interpreted these lines Amitji..Perhaps it matches your thoughts....?
Oh wow! Wonderfully interpreted..even better than the thought behind this haiku! Can I have it compressed please? and your kind permission to put it beside my haiku to adorn it..
Your haiku itself is so ornamental, it does not require any adornment.....however, its your prerogative Amitji, you may use my interpretation as you wish....an honour for me, no less...
Please don't call it service, we're co-creating, and don't embarrass me by calling me the doyen etc. we're learning.. together:) Thank you once again:)
A reflective metaphor!
ReplyDeleteYes, Thank you Uppal ma'am:)
DeleteReality check .....should not let dreams become demons.....................and impulses be hindrances.....Every flight of fancy has to be imbued with the quote of caution.....that's how I have interpreted these lines Amitji..Perhaps it matches your thoughts....?
ReplyDeleteOh wow! Wonderfully interpreted..even better than the thought behind this haiku!
ReplyDeleteCan I have it compressed please? and your kind permission to put it beside my haiku to adorn it..
Your haiku itself is so ornamental, it does not require any adornment.....however, its your prerogative Amitji, you may use my interpretation as you wish....an honour for me, no less...
DeleteThank you so much...I'm really obliged:)
DeleteDelighted to be of service Amitji :) and honoured to share space with the doyen of haikus
DeletePlease don't call it service, we're co-creating, and don't embarrass me by calling me the doyen etc. we're learning.. together:) Thank you once again:)
DeleteWow, just wow :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Manisha:)
DeleteIt tickled and created the right not. I love it
ReplyDeleteWhen the blade punctures
through the bark,
The birds above cries,
run for their life,
The tree fallen from its rise;
and dries!
Great lines...thank you Shams:)
DeleteChange of perspective over time!
ReplyDelete...time! Thank you Deepak sir:)
Deleteoh my god... how ticklish :p
ReplyDeletenice one Amitji...
Thank you Archana:)
DeleteThings change over time, so do relationships. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Somali:)
DeleteAnother of your wise and satirical nugget . I repeat Somali's words - things change over time , so do relationships .
ReplyDelete'wise and satirical' increases its USP...Thank you Kokila:)
DeleteSardonic, Amit ji!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lata:)
Deleteबहुत बढ़िया
ReplyDeleteThank you Yogi:)
Deletewow.. things which are matter of joy to some might not be to others or in time it cease to bring joy.. great metaphor this one!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Roohi:)
DeleteLovely lines
ReplyDeleteThank you Suresh sir:)
Deleteit is sad when Relations turn like that ...
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Thank you Bikram sir:)
DeleteThank you Rajesh:)
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