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Friday, 7 August 2015

गुदगुदी


नाख़ून मेरे
चुभने लगे हैं क्या
गुदगुदी में

Translation credit: GC
Fingers caress
A symphony of
Prickly notes

32 comments:

  1. Reality check .....should not let dreams become demons.....................and impulses be hindrances.....Every flight of fancy has to be imbued with the quote of caution.....that's how I have interpreted these lines Amitji..Perhaps it matches your thoughts....?

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  2. Oh wow! Wonderfully interpreted..even better than the thought behind this haiku!
    Can I have it compressed please? and your kind permission to put it beside my haiku to adorn it..

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    1. Your haiku itself is so ornamental, it does not require any adornment.....however, its your prerogative Amitji, you may use my interpretation as you wish....an honour for me, no less...

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    2. Thank you so much...I'm really obliged:)

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    3. Delighted to be of service Amitji :) and honoured to share space with the doyen of haikus

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    4. Please don't call it service, we're co-creating, and don't embarrass me by calling me the doyen etc. we're learning.. together:) Thank you once again:)

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  3. It tickled and created the right not. I love it

    When the blade punctures
    through the bark,
    The birds above cries,
    run for their life,
    The tree fallen from its rise;
    and dries!

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  4. Change of perspective over time!

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  5. oh my god... how ticklish :p
    nice one Amitji...

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  6. Things change over time, so do relationships. Nice one.

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  7. Another of your wise and satirical nugget . I repeat Somali's words - things change over time , so do relationships .

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    1. 'wise and satirical' increases its USP...Thank you Kokila:)

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  8. wow.. things which are matter of joy to some might not be to others or in time it cease to bring joy.. great metaphor this one!!

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  9. it is sad when Relations turn like that ...


    Bikram's

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