ये सब मेरा है, ये सिर्फ़ मेरा
इसमें से कुछ नहीं दूँगा मैं
और ये
तो है
ही मेरा ..
बटोरता हूँ सब जल्दी-जल्दी
इक लम्बे सफ़र की है तैयारी
आना मेरे दोस्तों, भाईयों सभी
माफ़ करके पुरानी कहीसुनी
शानदार विदाई में
मेरी
देखना नए-नकोर कपड़े मेरे
सिलवाया है एक क़फ़न मैंने
कई सारी जेबों
वाला … !
Aah...this is good, Amit! Very good. The futility of this rush to accumulate and possess....
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked Beloo, thank you:)
Deleteतौबा, कफन में भी जेब सिलवा ली :)
ReplyDeleteआयें थे खाली हाथ
जाओगे भी खाली हाथ
फिर क्यों हो रहा हैं
लूट जाने का अहसास।
Ek jeb nahi, kai saari:):)
DeleteThank you Manisha:)
देखना नए-नकोर कपड़े मेरे
ReplyDeleteसिलवाया है एक क़फ़न मैंने
कई सारी जेबों वाला … !
कितनी सारी इच्छाएं , कितने सारे सपने ! फिर भी कफ़न की सब जेब खाली की खाली ही रह जाती हैं ! सुन्दर
Thank you Yogi...aabhaar!
DeleteVery well composed Amit ji,but next time a happy lyric?
ReplyDeleteBatorte batorte pahunch gaye vahan,
Khali haath jana tha jahan.
I'll try Indu ma'am...thank you:)
DeleteVery nice lines Amitji!
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani:)
Deletesatya wachan, parantoo ham sab bhool chuke hai yeh...
ReplyDeletewohi toh yaad rakhne ki koshish kar rahaa hoon, Prasad sahab:) Shukriya:)
DeleteWah!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
Deletelovely lines Amitji... I like the long poetry you write :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Archana:)
Deletevery deep and beautifully described the last moments to complete the journey :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shweta:)
DeleteI, me, myself , will hoard till the grave. So true Amitji.. where is the time to pause and think of the utility or futility?
ReplyDeleteExactly! Thank you Somali:)
Delete"aham" is not an easy thing to let go...it remains with us...till we meet the ashes... very profound words, Amitji...
ReplyDeleteThank you Maniparna:)
DeleteExperiences of life...some are worth pocketing and some are too much to retain in pocket....yet it is we who are ultimately accountable and answerable for what we carry along, our past, present, bags and baggages and most of all our own selves...and our journey is towards this realization...a journey which all of us are preparing and heading for....
ReplyDeleteYour poem has several interpretations...this is just one of them....it is quite futile to ask the poet...and wiser for readers to enjoy their own discretion in understanding
Your wonderful comments are always a value addition to my humble endeavors..thank you Geetashree:)
DeleteBeautiful lines!
ReplyDeleteThank you Madhusudan:)
Deleteसिलवाया है एक क़फ़न मैंने
ReplyDeleteकई सारी जेबों वाला .... ye line apne aap main bahut kuch kah deti hai... Awesome lines... Loved it.. :)
Thank you friend:)
DeleteVery profound and so beautiful -- like a mirror reflecting what so many of us are making out of our life.
ReplyDeleteThank you Arti:)
DeletePoignant. It moves the reader. Simply brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru:) Glad you liked:)
DeleteSo well written..our senseless need for material accumulations..:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Renu:) Glad you liked:)
Deletebahut sundar... liked it a lot...
ReplyDeleteThank you Ashish:) Glad you liked:)
Deletenice as always Amit ji
ReplyDeletebut please don't write such sad couplets ---let there be happy ones
Ha! Sametne se gayab aur baantne se badne wala ek hi cheez hai - Khushi
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