wah wah... hum to fisal gaye!!! :-)
Thank you Archana:) Take care:)
Such a perfect description in so few words!... :-)
Thank you Maniparna for finding it perfect:)
Wah! Abh nikaalna bhi kyon? :)
Arre Suresh sahab, kirak aur phaans toh nikaalni hi padtii hai...chaahe kitni bhi mazedaar ho;)
This is so intense. Loved the poem :)
Am glad Purba:) Thank you:)
la-ilaj marj :(
Indu ma'am, aapki farmaaish par hi likha tha ye 'happy one' :):)
Bahut khoob!
Thank you Deepak:)
waah! shaandar!
Thank you Madhusudan:)
Wonderful rhyming, sounds pleasing to ear.
Thank you Indrani:) Glad you liked:)
sheeshe aur makhmal ka saath fisalte rahna aur judaa na ho sakna ---waah Amit ji beautiful thoughts
Glad you saw it..Thank you Rajni:)
Beautiful
Thank you Rupam:)
The first word that came into my mind after reading this, "Amazing.."
Thank you Manisha:) Glad you liked:)
I love it. deslizar indeed
Gracias, Shams:)
aha.....laah-javaab!
Thank you Panchali:)
Amit, if only lyrics like yours would come back into Bollywood songs:)
Thanks a lot, Lata, for this compliment:)(But then where will Sheela and Chameli go?:))
Makhmali kirak, Resham ki phaans - loved the contrasting usage of words. But Amit ji your question is interesting too ..where will Sheela and Chameli go? :-)
:):) ha..ha:) Thank you Somali:)
wah wah... hum to fisal gaye!!! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Archana:) Take care:)
DeleteSuch a perfect description in so few words!... :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Maniparna for finding it perfect:)
DeleteWah! Abh nikaalna bhi kyon? :)
ReplyDeleteArre Suresh sahab, kirak aur phaans toh nikaalni hi padtii hai...chaahe kitni bhi mazedaar ho;)
DeleteThis is so intense. Loved the poem :)
ReplyDeleteAm glad Purba:) Thank you:)
Deletela-ilaj marj :(
ReplyDeleteIndu ma'am, aapki farmaaish par hi likha tha ye 'happy one' :):)
DeleteBahut khoob!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
Deletewaah! shaandar!
ReplyDeleteThank you Madhusudan:)
DeleteWonderful rhyming, sounds pleasing to ear.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani:) Glad you liked:)
Deletesheeshe aur makhmal ka saath fisalte rahna aur judaa na ho sakna ---waah Amit ji beautiful thoughts
ReplyDeleteGlad you saw it..Thank you Rajni:)
DeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you Rupam:)
DeleteThe first word that came into my mind after reading this, "Amazing.."
ReplyDeleteThank you Manisha:) Glad you liked:)
DeleteI love it. deslizar indeed
ReplyDeleteGracias, Shams:)
Deleteaha.....laah-javaab!
ReplyDeleteThank you Panchali:)
DeleteAmit, if only lyrics like yours would come back into Bollywood songs:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Lata, for this compliment:)
Delete(But then where will Sheela and Chameli go?:))
Makhmali kirak, Resham ki phaans - loved the contrasting usage of words. But Amit ji your question is interesting too ..where will Sheela and Chameli go? :-)
ReplyDelete:):) ha..ha:) Thank you Somali:)
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