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Wednesday, 26 August 2015

फिसल जाए… मचल जाये !


उदास शीशे  आँखें मेरी
मखमली किरक  सूरत तेरी
कैसे निकालूँ  फिसल-फिसल जाए!

लहू का फूल  दिल मेरा
रेशम की फाँस याद तेरी
कैसे उभारूं मचल-मचल जाये !!

30 comments:

  1. wah wah... hum to fisal gaye!!! :-)

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  2. Such a perfect description in so few words!... :-)

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    1. Thank you Maniparna for finding it perfect:)

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    1. Arre Suresh sahab, kirak aur phaans toh nikaalni hi padtii hai...chaahe kitni bhi mazedaar ho;)

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  4. This is so intense. Loved the poem :)

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    1. Indu ma'am, aapki farmaaish par hi likha tha ye 'happy one' :):)

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  6. Wonderful rhyming, sounds pleasing to ear.

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    1. Thank you Indrani:) Glad you liked:)

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  7. sheeshe aur makhmal ka saath fisalte rahna aur judaa na ho sakna ---waah Amit ji beautiful thoughts

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  8. The first word that came into my mind after reading this, "Amazing.."

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    1. Thank you Manisha:) Glad you liked:)

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  9. Amit, if only lyrics like yours would come back into Bollywood songs:)

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    1. Thanks a lot, Lata, for this compliment:)
      (But then where will Sheela and Chameli go?:))

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  10. Makhmali kirak, Resham ki phaans - loved the contrasting usage of words. But Amit ji your question is interesting too ..where will Sheela and Chameli go? :-)

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