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Monday, 10 August 2015

सलीक़ा



                              प्यासे - सूखे होठों को
                            सिखाते हो पीने का सलीक़ा,
                             चलो अब फेंक दो प्याला
                             सुराही मेरे मुँह से लगा दो.

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26 comments:

  1. Insaan ki fitrat par ek sachhi baat :

    Sukhe honthon se hi hoti hai meethi baatein Pyaas bujh jaye to Alfaaz aur Insaan dono badal jaate hain !!

    Take Care !!

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    1. Hmmm...shaayad aisa bhi hota ho:) Thank you Manisha:)

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  2. Amitji, insatiable thirst leads us to seeking..............if we had our fill we wouldn't be evolving............

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    1. Eternal quest for a seeker to evolve...kyaa baat hai! Thank you Geetashree:)

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    2. I found it so too! Thank you Somali:)

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  3. Somehow this reminded me of a ghazal by Pankaj Udhas "Maza lena hai peene ka toh, kam kam dheere dheere pi..mitega haule haule ye tera gham, dheere dheere pi.." :)

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    1. Pankaj Udhas bhi theek kahte hain...lekin pyaas se marne wala kaise 'kam-kam-dheere-dheere' piye?
      Thank you Renu:)

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  4. Aha...I know what you mean! Sometimes one just needs all of it :)

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    1. Thank you Beloo for observing it from the writer's view:) Glad you did:)

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  5. great one... It reminded me the great poem "Madhushala" by Harivansha rai Bachhan... The starting line of that poem says...
    " Madirayala jane ko ghar se chalta hai peene wala.
    Kis path pe jaye asmanjas me hai wo bhola-bhala.
    Alag alag path batlate sab par main ye batlata hun.
    Raah pakar ek chala chal pa jaiyega madhushala. "

    very nice creation sir...

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    1. Lines from the legendary Madhushala alongside my humble creation...I'm humbled and honoured!
      Thank you Ashish:)

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  6. Beautiful perspective, don't teach the thirsty 'how to', just give and he shall know!

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    1. Thank you Arti for attesting my view point...means that I'm not all wrong:)

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  7. I see many perspectives here. alighting on me...Thanks for sharing

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  8. wah wah bohot khoob Amitji, I see you changed the theme of your blog....awesome as your words :)

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  9. wah Amitji... am sure many can relate with this one :-)

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