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Tuesday, 14 July 2015

her voice



                                                              She chimes faintly
                                                  In quietude of my barren heart,
                                                              And I crumble in
                                                     Hollow trenches of my soul!




48 comments:

  1. Hollow trenches of my soul~ That's Beautiful!

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  2. Maar dala.... Allah! Awesome, Amit! :)

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    1. Thank you Ravish:)
      Feeling better ;)?

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  3. Beautiful Amitji. Btw I wanted to tell you that Chitakte Kaachghar is on my desk. I am not reading in a go just limiting myself to 2-3 poems a day, absorbing the essence of the poems.

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    1. Thank you Somali! Please extend the credit to Geetashree, if you like the book, who made you read it:)

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  4. oh my Amitji... am amazed... tis awesome :)

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  5. Ah, beauty of love and your words. :)

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    1. I'm blushing:) My tan won't show it though;)

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    1. ...means of your interest na:)? Thank you Bushra:)

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    1. I offer you the same reply Mridula :D

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  9. Very 'different' from your other haikus

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    1. Thank God...my readers got a break:)

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  10. Lovely, Amit.
    The 'crumble' says a lot! (quite like going weak in the knees. ;))

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    1. YOU know it Divya ;) Thank you:)

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  11. Beautifully written every word deep and meaningful :)

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  12. Each and every word is deep and meaningful.

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  13. Beautifully chosen words.
    But i would not give so much of power to anyone.

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    1. Thank you Indu ma'am:)
      ...that's why you're better off:)

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  14. The power of love..beautiful words Amit Ji :)

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