बरस रहा
चौमासा रात दिन
गाढ़ा व खारा
Translation credit: GC
Sheets pour
Thickened grief
Salt to taste
Thickened grief
Salt to taste
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एक बार खुल के बरस जाने दो
ReplyDeleteसुना है, हर बारिश के बाद आसमान ओर निखर जाता है :)
हाँ, सुना तो है... शायद !
Deleteबहुत खूब ... ये आंसू कभी कभी तो बारहमासी हो जाते हैं ...
ReplyDeleteअरे साहब, ज़्यादातर बारहमासी ही होते हैं … चौमासा तो एक बहाना है कहने का
Deleteokay, once in awhile!
ReplyDeleteI wish! Amen!
DeleteI have always loved your haikus and you have a way with words Amit Ji :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked...thank you Renu:)
DeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you Rupam:)
DeleteBeautifully written Amitji, but whatever be the reason don't allow tears for a season, allow them only occasionally. :-)
ReplyDeleteRight Somali:) Thank you:)
Deletesuper... but, why tears?? :-)
ReplyDeleteA great subject..no? Thank you Archana:)
DeleteNicely written. I guess it happens, tears too are a part of life.
ReplyDeleteThey sure are! Thank you Indrani:)
DeleteDil bheega ho to aansoo baraste hi hain
ReplyDeleteYou got me! Thank you Suresh:)
DeleteSentimental one.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of-
Dil ke armaan aansooon mein beh gaye...
Kaash ki bah jaatey... Thank you Anita:)
DeleteA soul-piercing piece!
ReplyDeleteHai na? Thank you Purba:)
DeletePoignant
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak for reaching the crux:)
DeleteJust like tears cleanses the eyes, the rains wash away the dust and dirt making this world a pleasant place to live in. Longing for those childhood days when we used to soak in the rains....
ReplyDeleteSabya The Environmentalist is right! Thank you sir:)
DeleteBahut Khoob!
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Deletebarsnedo baras ke tadap mit jayegi,
ReplyDeletena miti to sari khudai beh jaegi,
kyaa baat hai! Thank you shayar:)
Deletechoumasa barasna .. bada dukhdayi hai ...
ReplyDeleteChalo koii toh shaamil huaa iss dukhh mein...Thank you Kokila:)
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