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Friday, 17 July 2015

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बरस  रहा
चौमासा रात दिन
गाढ़ा व खारा                          
                       


                          

Translation credit: GC

Sheets pour
Thickened grief
Salt to taste


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32 comments:

  1. एक बार खुल के बरस जाने दो
    सुना है, हर बारिश के बाद आसमान ओर निखर जाता है :)

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    1. हाँ, सुना तो है... शायद !

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  2. बहुत खूब ... ये आंसू कभी कभी तो बारहमासी हो जाते हैं ...

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    1. अरे साहब, ज़्यादातर बारहमासी ही होते हैं … चौमासा तो एक बहाना है कहने का

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  3. I have always loved your haikus and you have a way with words Amit Ji :)

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    1. Glad you liked...thank you Renu:)

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  4. Beautifully written Amitji, but whatever be the reason don't allow tears for a season, allow them only occasionally. :-)

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    1. A great subject..no? Thank you Archana:)

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  6. Nicely written. I guess it happens, tears too are a part of life.

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  7. Dil bheega ho to aansoo baraste hi hain

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  8. Sentimental one.
    Reminds me of-
    Dil ke armaan aansooon mein beh gaye...

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    1. Kaash ki bah jaatey... Thank you Anita:)

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    1. Thank you Deepak for reaching the crux:)

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  10. Just like tears cleanses the eyes, the rains wash away the dust and dirt making this world a pleasant place to live in. Longing for those childhood days when we used to soak in the rains....

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    1. Sabya The Environmentalist is right! Thank you sir:)

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  11. barsnedo baras ke tadap mit jayegi,
    na miti to sari khudai beh jaegi,

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  12. choumasa barasna .. bada dukhdayi hai ...

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    1. Chalo koii toh shaamil huaa iss dukhh mein...Thank you Kokila:)

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