@ Somali- Thank you Somali for liking it, and your lovely demand hidden in which are your good wishes:) But a poet reflects their inside you know... @ Shweta- Yet another great rejoinder, Shweta! Thanks a lot:) Loved it:)
Jang lagne na dene ka koi tareeka nahi hai...it's a natural process...that is why instead of a corrective action I have wished for a preventive plan here;) Thank you Archana:) Mridula se kaafi khayaal milte hain aapke...ek baar 'pyaaz' waale haiku par chop kiya tha aap dono ne mujhe:):):):)
Aap theek kahti hain, Renu:) I have found out a solution...pls see above what I have replied to Archana's similar comment:) Thanks a lot for liking the thought in this haiku:)
Is the portrait by you?
ReplyDeleteNo, it was taken from Google (credit is given on left below).
DeleteThe visual took over the haiku..?
दिल में इक दर्द उठा, आँख में आसु भर आयें
ReplyDeleteबैठे-बैठे हमें क्या जानिए, क्या याद आये...
Waah, kyaa baat hai..! Thank you Manisha:)
Delete(क्या याद आये...;)??
Bahut hi badhiya Amit ji aur Manisha...par pls kavitao se aansu pochkar agli baar unme muskurahat le aayein. :-) :-)
DeleteBohot khoob Manisha...you addition is superb!
DeleteAasoon bhari aankhe...ojhal hote sapne,
ik adhuri muskurahat, umeed dil sune phir uski aahat :)
we should have a kavi sammelan on FB :)
@ Somali- Thank you Somali for liking it, and your lovely demand hidden in which are your good wishes:) But a poet reflects their inside you know...
Delete@ Shweta- Yet another great rejoinder, Shweta! Thanks a lot:) Loved it:)
भावनाओं को व्यक्त करते सुन्दर शब्द श्री अमित जी !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Yogi:)
DeleteKindly call me amit...shri and ji must be reserved for more worthy people;)
We're friends man!
I left you a message on FB :( is it that you don't check it regularly?
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry Mridula:( Am not a regular on FB:(
Deleteawesome Manisha :-)
ReplyDeleteSuper Amitji... but jang lagne na dijiyega ;-)
@Mridula - well that's right!!!! he doesn't :-(
Jang lagne na dene ka koi tareeka nahi hai...it's a natural process...that is why instead of a corrective action I have wished for a preventive plan here;)
DeleteThank you Archana:)
Mridula se kaafi khayaal milte hain aapke...ek baar 'pyaaz' waale haiku par chop kiya tha aap dono ne mujhe:):):):)
Beege aasmaan mein abh indradanush ke aaney ka samay ho gaya :)
ReplyDeleteWaiting dear...thank you Suresh sir:)
Deletebahut khuub
ReplyDeleteThank you IB:)
DeleteVery intense.
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it:) Thank you Indrani:)
DeleteBeautiful and moving!
ReplyDeleteThank you Purba:)
DeleteBeautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak sir:)
Deletebahut hi sundar... :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ashish:)
DeleteSapno ko Jung na lagne dijiye Amit Ji :) Loved it !
ReplyDeleteAap theek kahti hain, Renu:)
DeleteI have found out a solution...pls see above what I have replied to Archana's similar comment:)
Thanks a lot for liking the thought in this haiku:)
Thank you Madhusudan:)
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