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Monday, 6 July 2015

जंग लगे सपने


                            दुखें हैं आँखें
                                जंग लगे सपने
          न, और नहीं 


Image from Google

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    1. No, it was taken from Google (credit is given on left below).
      The visual took over the haiku..?

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  2. दिल में इक दर्द उठा, आँख में आसु भर आयें
    बैठे-बैठे हमें क्या जानिए, क्या याद आये...

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    1. Waah, kyaa baat hai..! Thank you Manisha:)
      (क्या याद आये...;)??

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    2. Bahut hi badhiya Amit ji aur Manisha...par pls kavitao se aansu pochkar agli baar unme muskurahat le aayein. :-) :-)

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    3. Bohot khoob Manisha...you addition is superb!
      Aasoon bhari aankhe...ojhal hote sapne,
      ik adhuri muskurahat, umeed dil sune phir uski aahat :)

      we should have a kavi sammelan on FB :)

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    4. @ Somali- Thank you Somali for liking it, and your lovely demand hidden in which are your good wishes:) But a poet reflects their inside you know...
      @ Shweta- Yet another great rejoinder, Shweta! Thanks a lot:) Loved it:)

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  3. भावनाओं को व्यक्त करते सुन्दर शब्द श्री अमित जी !!

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    1. Thank you Yogi:)
      Kindly call me amit...shri and ji must be reserved for more worthy people;)
      We're friends man!

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  4. I left you a message on FB :( is it that you don't check it regularly?

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    1. I'm sorry Mridula:( Am not a regular on FB:(

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  5. awesome Manisha :-)
    Super Amitji... but jang lagne na dijiyega ;-)
    @Mridula - well that's right!!!! he doesn't :-(

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    1. Jang lagne na dene ka koi tareeka nahi hai...it's a natural process...that is why instead of a corrective action I have wished for a preventive plan here;)
      Thank you Archana:)
      Mridula se kaafi khayaal milte hain aapke...ek baar 'pyaaz' waale haiku par chop kiya tha aap dono ne mujhe:):):):)

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  6. Beege aasmaan mein abh indradanush ke aaney ka samay ho gaya :)

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    1. Waiting dear...thank you Suresh sir:)

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    1. Glad you felt it:) Thank you Indrani:)

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  8. Sapno ko Jung na lagne dijiye Amit Ji :) Loved it !

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    1. Aap theek kahti hain, Renu:)
      I have found out a solution...pls see above what I have replied to Archana's similar comment:)
      Thanks a lot for liking the thought in this haiku:)

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