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Thursday 12 March 2015

कुछ हाइकु : फूलों पर…


1.
गुलमोहर
दहकता बैसाख
बेबुझी प्यास

2.
अमलतास
गुच्छे गुच्छे महक
मीठी कसक ।

3.
हरसिंगार     
खुशबू  का सफ़र
ज़मीन  तक

4.      
सुर्ख पलाश
वीरान पहाड़ियाँ
दिल में आग ।

5.
बेला चमेली
ख़ुशबू के जँगल     
जागती रात ।

6.  
लाल गुलाब
शबाब लबालब
बेमतलब ।

7.
रजनीगन्धा
मुजस्सिम ख़ामोशी
रंग-ओ-बू की ।

8.
जपाकुसुम
करती फ़ाश राज़
पंखुरी पाँच ।

PS:13.03.2015- Some add-ons...(as the 'blues' come later;)) 

9.
नीली छतरी
आँखों को दे ठंडक
जैकेरण्डा की । 

10.
सिर झुकाये
दर्द भरी दास्तान
जंगली लिली । 

11. 
फीकी रंगत
उदास इन्तज़ार
है कचनार  । 


24 comments:

  1. Beautiful and fragrant bunch of haiku! Some of them I understood and some I didn't. But, the words even if not understood, create a wonderful impact... Probably that's the greatness of the language and your poetry? I felt the same while reading haiku of Kokila... Kokila Gupta. You both have 'jaadu' in your poetry.

    Was waiting for your update, now I understand the meaning of 'sabar ka phal meetha hota hai' :)

    TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. Awww...thanks a whole lot Sindhu, for such a 'meetha' comment:):)
      I'm honored!

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  2. अति सुन्दर . आपकी कविता मैं वसंत छिपा है

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  3. Each one is brilliant beyond words.

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    1. Thank you Indu:)
      Yes, the brilliance is of nature...flowers! I only play around with words.
      Glad you liked:):)

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  4. बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद डॉ. शास्त्री।
    आभारी हूँ!!

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  5. Hard to choose now. :)
    Great to see you back.

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  6. Good to see you back with this wonderful post!

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  7. मानव मनोदशा को फूलों के माध्यम से व्यक्त कराती सुंदर हाइकु .

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  8. Lovely set of fragrant haiku. I liked the fourth one most!

    Glad to see you back after a long hiatus .... :-)

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  9. LOVED them all Amitji...so Beautifully written :)

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  10. Amit back with a bouquet of flowers! Lovely!

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  11. Loved all haikus..Beautifully written Amit Jee :)

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  12. "khushboodaar, khoobsurat phoolon ka guldasta"..it seemed like this to me! :)

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