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Saturday, 28 March 2015

चमेली


भोली चमेली
तारों भरी थी रात
सुबह सूनी 


26 comments:

  1. वाह क्या बात है!

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  2. Now that's quite a lovely thought! Nicely said.

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  3. I read it a few times sometimes smiled sometimes pondered, power of your words Amitji :)

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    1. Thank you for giving it time and thought, Shweta:) Glad you liked:)

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  4. Great thinking ...always loved your Hindi haiku....you should compile them... :-)

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    1. Thank you you Maniparna, for your kind support:)

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  5. गहरे अर्थ से भरी पंक्तियाँ। बहुत खूबसूरत।

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    1. ऊपर से साधारण दिखने वाली रचना में गूढ़ अर्थ समझने के लिए आपका बहुत-बहुत आभार, नम्रता:)

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    1. Thank you Suresh for liking the thought:)

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  7. Nice thought well presented.

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