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Sunday, 22 March 2015

हाइकु छिपी / लम्बी एक पहेली / खेलो तो ज़रा


भोर की बेला
सावन की बरखा
मन मयूर

भरी दुपैरी
अब बस भी करो
कितना हुआ

डूबा सूरज
विचलित, बेचैन
शाम का तारा

घिरी रात
कहाँ है मेरा खाना
कहाँ बिस्तर



24 comments:

  1. bohot sundar rachnayen, shaam ka tara man chhu gayi :)

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  2. Title mehes haiku na ho aur asliyat mein in haikuon mein koi paheli chipi ho tho main nahin samaj paaya, Amit :) Shama prarti hoon.

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    1. Never mind sir! Read it again after sometime and the Truth will dawn upon you...
      Thank you for giving it your time:):)
      PS: Even the title is a hiku;)

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    2. I realized that the title is a haiku, though :) Which is what I meant when I said "Title mehes haiku na ho aur..." :)

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    3. Arre Suresh bhai! Bas phir toh aap sab-kuchh samajh gaye...you are almost there!!
      The four haikus are four stages of human life: Infancy, Youth, Middle-age and Old-age.
      Hope you liked...

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  3. Beautiful! Loved each one of them.

    Welcome back to blogging, sir.

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  4. wow, Haiku in a title too. Beautiful Haiku.

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  5. Haiku in hindi makes a nice concept too! You have beautifully depicted the moods changing with time of the day.

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  6. Beautiful set, Amit.. I am in love with all !!

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  7. Loved them all Amitji :) Great read!

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  8. डूबा सूरज
    विचलित, बेचैन
    शाम का तारा
    खूबसूरत हाइकू अमित जी

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  9. Wonderful haiku :) I loved the way you have connected emotions with each of them (sunrise, noon, sunset and midnight)... They are so apt!
    Looked for the meaning of some words in Hinkhoj :)

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    1. Glad you liked:) Thank you Sindhu:)

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