Arre Suresh bhai! Bas phir toh aap sab-kuchh samajh gaye...you are almost there!! The four haikus are four stages of human life: Infancy, Youth, Middle-age and Old-age. Hope you liked...
Wonderful haiku :) I loved the way you have connected emotions with each of them (sunrise, noon, sunset and midnight)... They are so apt! Looked for the meaning of some words in Hinkhoj :)
Beautiful! I liked the last one most!
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Deletebohot sundar rachnayen, shaam ka tara man chhu gayi :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shweta:)
DeleteTitle mehes haiku na ho aur asliyat mein in haikuon mein koi paheli chipi ho tho main nahin samaj paaya, Amit :) Shama prarti hoon.
ReplyDeleteNever mind sir! Read it again after sometime and the Truth will dawn upon you...
DeleteThank you for giving it your time:):)
PS: Even the title is a hiku;)
I realized that the title is a haiku, though :) Which is what I meant when I said "Title mehes haiku na ho aur..." :)
DeleteArre Suresh bhai! Bas phir toh aap sab-kuchh samajh gaye...you are almost there!!
DeleteThe four haikus are four stages of human life: Infancy, Youth, Middle-age and Old-age.
Hope you liked...
excellent
ReplyDeleteThank you IB:)
DeleteBeautiful! Loved each one of them.
ReplyDeleteWelcome back to blogging, sir.
Thank you Saru:)
Deletewow, Haiku in a title too. Beautiful Haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kiran:)
DeleteHaiku in hindi makes a nice concept too! You have beautifully depicted the moods changing with time of the day.
ReplyDeleteThank you Somali:)
DeleteBeautiful set, Amit.. I am in love with all !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Panchali:)
DeleteLoved them all Amitji :) Great read!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepa:)
Deleteडूबा सूरज
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खूबसूरत हाइकू अमित जी
Thank you Yogendra:)
DeleteWonderful haiku :) I loved the way you have connected emotions with each of them (sunrise, noon, sunset and midnight)... They are so apt!
ReplyDeleteLooked for the meaning of some words in Hinkhoj :)
Glad you liked:) Thank you Sindhu:)
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