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Sunday, 22 March 2015

निम्बोली


ताकें पखेरू
इतराये अकेली
कच्ची निम्बोली

                                                                                                      Image courtesy: Google



9 comments:

  1. I like the way the words create a pleasant feeling (as usually your poems create) , but, couldn't understand some of the words.... :(

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    1. Thanks a whole lot, Sindhu, for your lovely comment...I'm so glad to note that the 'pleasant feeling' was experienced by you, which is all that matters in haikus. It becomes even more important that you felt "it"
      even without fully knowing the meanings of some words. A definite positive sign that my haikus are creating the desired effect:):)

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  2. Lovely ! reminded me of an old rajasthani folk song neem ki nimboli :)

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  3. Beautiful words and a beautiful picture.

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