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Thursday 26 March 2015

सपने


आँखें उनींदी
जितने चाहो बुनो
सपनों का क्या

13 comments:

  1. I am sure, this poem must be very good... But, I couldn't understand it probably because I don't know the words 'Uneedi' and 'buno'...

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    1. Thank you Sindhu for your kind words:)
      उनींदी=sleepy
      बुनो=knit
      Plz read again and realise the unsaid...thanks again:)

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    2. PS: The unsaid is the crux!

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  2. Beautiful.... slumberous eyes... a dreamy haiku indeed... :-)

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  3. बहुत सुन्दर

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  4. Aha! sapne bunna bhi har ek ki bus ki baat nahin, Amit bhai :)

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    1. sach kahaa aapne Suresh sir:) Thank you!

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  5. Mushkil hai kehna--sapne bunne chahiye ya nahin.

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