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Thursday, 26 March 2015

सपने


आँखें उनींदी
जितने चाहो बुनो
सपनों का क्या

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  1. Sindhu Devi K27 March 2015 at 02:00

    I am sure, this poem must be very good... But, I couldn't understand it probably because I don't know the words 'Uneedi' and 'buno'...

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    1. AmitAag27 March 2015 at 08:48

      Thank you Sindhu for your kind words:)
      उनींदी=sleepy
      बुनो=knit
      Plz read again and realise the unsaid...thanks again:)

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    2. AmitAag27 March 2015 at 08:49

      PS: The unsaid is the crux!

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  2. Maniparna27 March 2015 at 02:06

    Beautiful.... slumberous eyes... a dreamy haiku indeed... :-)

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  3. Yogi Saraswat27 March 2015 at 02:28

    बहुत सुन्दर

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  4. Beloo Mehra27 March 2015 at 03:47

    Lovely!

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  5. C Suresh27 March 2015 at 04:23

    Aha! sapne bunna bhi har ek ki bus ki baat nahin, Amit bhai :)

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    1. AmitAag28 March 2015 at 04:33

      sach kahaa aapne Suresh sir:) Thank you!

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  6. indu chhibber27 March 2015 at 05:29

    Mushkil hai kehna--sapne bunne chahiye ya nahin.

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