I am sure, this poem must be very good... But, I couldn't understand it probably because I don't know the words 'Uneedi' and 'buno'...
Thank you Sindhu for your kind words:)उनींदी=sleepy बुनो=knitPlz read again and realise the unsaid...thanks again:)
PS: The unsaid is the crux!
Beautiful.... slumberous eyes... a dreamy haiku indeed... :-)
Thank you Maniparna:)
Thank you Yogendra:)
Thank you Beloo:)
Aha! sapne bunna bhi har ek ki bus ki baat nahin, Amit bhai :)
sach kahaa aapne Suresh sir:) Thank you!
Mushkil hai kehna--sapne bunne chahiye ya nahin.
...right ma'am!Thank you:)