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Saturday, 28 March 2015

शीशम


ठण्डी कुइआँ
धूप-प्यास बलैयाँ
शीशम छैयाँ

                                                                                              Image courtesy: Google



38 comments:

  1. सुन्दर हाइकु

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  2. You are a master in this!

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    1. I am an humble student learning this awesome metre...thank you Indrani:)

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  3. superb Amitji... pic bhi bahut badhiya hai :-)

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  4. oh yes the lovely Sheesham trees .. they indeed make it cool in the hot sunny afternoon

    Bikram's

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  5. Your Haikus stand apart in all.. Beautiful hindi and beautiful choice of words as well as topics..

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  6. Totally out of the box. Really awesome!

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    1. I hope so...with your good wishes and support:) Thank you Suresh:)

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  8. Behatrin.... Theth shabd sunkar aatma prasann ho gayi ...

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    1. Arre sahib, theth shabdon ka koi qadrdaan mila hamara bhi 'jee rajee ho gaya':)
      Thank you ma'am for recognizing and appreciating colloquialism in this post:) Aabhaar...

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  9. Wah wah. Aap toh kamaal ho.

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