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Saturday, 28 March 2015

शीशम


ठण्डी कुइआँ
धूप-प्यास बलैयाँ
शीशम छैयाँ
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37 comments:

  1. Cifar28 March 2015 at 03:46

    lajawab

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  2. Abhijit Ray10 May 2015 at 23:11

    So short, so beautiful.

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  3. Kokila gupta10 May 2015 at 23:21

    Beautiful !

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  4. Yogi Saraswat10 May 2015 at 23:31

    सुन्दर हाइकु

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  5. Indrani11 May 2015 at 01:15

    You are a master in this!

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    1. AmitAag12 May 2015 at 21:57

      I am an humble student learning this awesome metre...thank you Indrani:)

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  6. magiceye11 May 2015 at 01:18

    Wah bhai wah!

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  7. Anonymous11 May 2015 at 01:33

    superb Amitji... pic bhi bahut badhiya hai :-)

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  8. Bikram11 May 2015 at 03:06

    oh yes the lovely Sheesham trees .. they indeed make it cool in the hot sunny afternoon

    Bikram's

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  9. Unknown11 May 2015 at 03:53

    Such a Beautiful !

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  10. Roohi Bhatnagar11 May 2015 at 06:25

    Your Haikus stand apart in all.. Beautiful hindi and beautiful choice of words as well as topics..

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  11. Mridula11 May 2015 at 09:23

    Bahut hi sunder.

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  12. Manisha Sharma11 May 2015 at 09:27

    Totally out of the box. Really awesome!

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  13. C Suresh11 May 2015 at 09:55

    You keep getting better

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    1. AmitAag12 May 2015 at 22:02

      I hope so...with your good wishes and support:) Thank you Suresh:)

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  14. Kokila gupta11 May 2015 at 12:34

    Behatrin.... Theth shabd sunkar aatma prasann ho gayi ...

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    1. AmitAag12 May 2015 at 22:10

      Arre sahib, theth shabdon ka koi qadrdaan mila hamara bhi 'jee rajee ho gaya':)
      Thank you ma'am for recognizing and appreciating colloquialism in this post:) Aabhaar...

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  15. vanderloost11 May 2015 at 16:21

    Nice

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  16. Rachna11 May 2015 at 18:57

    Wah wah. Aap toh kamaal ho.

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  17. indu chhibber12 May 2015 at 00:17

    Very meaningful,so true.

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  18. Rajesh12 May 2015 at 20:35

    Very nice.

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  19. Unknown12 May 2015 at 21:59

    Lovely !

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