Friends avoid asking
about
my wellbeing these
days
is it pain reflecting
on my face
or are they afraid I
might
tell the truth as
well?
हाल...
हाल अब मेरा
पूछने से
कतराने लगे हैं लोग..
दर्द या तो झलकने लगा
है चेहरे पे
या सच ही न बता दूँ कहीं
ये सोच के घबराने लगे
हैं दोस्त!
These lines are so pricking.. Hindi is a magical language and your words make it even more beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteSo true..Hindi is a magical language, and I'm an humble servant..Ye toh aapki qadradaani hai Sonia ki aapko mera likha pasand aata hai:) Behad shukraguzaar hoon:)
DeleteI loved the one in Hindi too....Its stronger!
ReplyDeleteSo glad Jaish that you have started liking the originals better! Thanks a lot:)
DeleteOnly when its beyond my Hindi vocab do I resort to the translations Amitji :) Having said that your blog is really strengthening my Hindi actually , thanks to your translations :)
DeleteThank you Jaish:) I'm delighted:)
Deleteloved the one in hindi too....a parody of emotions!
ReplyDeleteThank you Titli:)
Deleteक्या किसीने
ReplyDeleteखुदके मन का शटर स्पीड
और
अपने आँखों का अपर्चर
इतना कम किया
की मेरे चेहरे पर इतना अच्छा फोकस मिला ?
या में इतना पागल
की मुझे लगा
सब लोग ओटोमैटिक मन से देखेंगे ?
:) Even when people ask they barely listen to replies
ReplyDelete:)Yes, Thank you Deepak.
DeleteBrilliant once again-magiceye is right.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indu:)
DeleteI remembered this from a long ago.. source not known
ReplyDeleteUnko dekhe se jo aatee hai chehre pe ronak,
woh samajhte hai ke beemar kaa haal acha hai... if any body knows the full one please share with me thanks.
This is a complete sher, Prasad, and I believe it is written by Ghalib Sahib.
DeleteSad, but true words, Amit, and yes, magiceye is right -- unfortunately. Far too many people are better at talking than listening! Have a lovely evening!
ReplyDelete:) Thank you Sylvia:)
DeleteReally sad. But beautifully written sir! I am going through the exact same thing now so I know exactly what it feels like!
ReplyDeleteOnce again nicely done :)
Thank you Anil:) Smile man!!
Delete✌ Very Nice ♡♡♡
ReplyDelete☞
गुलाबी कोंपलें
Thank you Vinay:)
DeleteHope all is well with you..profound..
ReplyDeleteI'm fine:) Thank you Latha:)
DeleteWah! bahut sundar, Galib ke yaad aa gaye.:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru:)
DeleteStrong lines, well said!
ReplyDeleteWhen in need/pain is the time to sort out the true friends from the rest.
Thank you Meoww:)
DeleteSukh ke kayi saathi, dhukh mein na koi - hai na, Amit!! You have reproduced that emotion with almost the same magic!
ReplyDeleteIn a way yes..thank you Suresh:)
DeleteDeep thoughts... nice one sir
ReplyDeleteThank you Manjulika:)
DeleteHow true, everyone is busy in their own worlds... very beautifully expressed, Amitji! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Arti:)
DeleteThe Hindi one is more apt:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Rahul:)
Deletefeelings expressed at its best -amazing one sir
ReplyDeletebeautiful as always
ReplyDeleteThank you Alka:)
Deleteदर्द या तो झलकने लगा है चेहरे पे
ReplyDeleteया सच ही न बता दूँ कहीं
ये सोच के घबराने लगे हैं दोस्त!
zindagi ki kadwi haqeeqat Amit ji
very beautifully depicted
Thank you Rajni:)
DeleteA painfully honest and tender poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you ladyfi:)
DeleteVery beautiful !!
ReplyDeletehindi wala bhut accha hai amit g ... shi bhi hai ..:)
Thank you Anu:)
DeleteThis is so true..the profound meaning behind the words comes out so beautifully. Bohot achha likha hai :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Mahima:)
DeleteToo good Amitji :)
ReplyDeleteHaal-e-dil through these lines expressed aptly.
That's a good initiative of giving both the English as well as Hindi versions of it.
Keep posting, looking forward to more of these thought provoking lines
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
Thank you Jay:)
DeleteThank you Rajesh:)
ReplyDeleteWell written again.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani:)
DeleteBeyond beautiful....and rings so true!
ReplyDeleteThank you Nilanjana:)
DeleteBeautifully put. However, I always like the Hindi ones better.. they seem to have more feeling. To get the apt translation is quite something.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tulika:) You're absolutely right!
DeleteAap maun wakai aag hai.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shivendra:)
Deletekya khoob !
ReplyDeleteThank you Vimla:)
Deletewah
ReplyDeleteThank you Archana:)
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