Me a thirsty shell
longing for a drop
divine.
The matter merely:
not a sea bottom,
buried was I
under sand dunes dry!
प्यासा...
मैं इक प्यासा सीप
तरसा किया हमेशा
इक बूँद ख़ास को.
फ़र्क़ फ़क़त इतना कि
तलहटी समन्दर नहीं,
दफ़्न था मैं
ख़ुश्क रेगिस्तान में!
Beautiful concept and well written!
ReplyDeleteThank you Abhinav:)
DeleteHats off to your imagination skills
ReplyDeleteThank you Ranjana:)
DeleteIt is lovely, Amitji :D
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Thank you Mira:)
Deleteso beautiful. Dhanyabad.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rupam:)
DeleteNice poetry
ReplyDeleteThank you Jaleela:)
DeleteOh double torture for the poor shell!
ReplyDeleteWohi toh..!
DeleteThank you Indu:)
वाह.....
ReplyDeleteThank you Shah Nawaz:)
DeleteLovely capture, beautiful words, Amit! Always a wonderful way to begin my day!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sylvia:) but the capture is not mine, it's from the net!
Deletewaah sir ji kam shabdo me hi bahut badhiya likh diya aapne..
ReplyDeleteThank you Suresh:)
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ReplyDeleteThank you Latha:)
ReplyDeleteAh! Amit! What a poem and what imagination to draw the idea from shells in the sand of a desert.
ReplyDeleteThank you Suresh:) glad you liked:)
Deletewow..what an imagination...!hats off..
ReplyDeleteThank you Titli:) glad you liked:)
DeleteNicely written!
ReplyDeleteThank you Navin:)
DeleteNice one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajesh:)
DeleteThe shell still manages to mother a lovely pearl(read poem). :)
ReplyDeleteThe shell won't be able to mother a pearl without the drop it yearns for! Thank you Divya:)
DeleteThank you Deepak:)
ReplyDeleteGreat lines again!
ReplyDeleteamazing ! yesterday only i was teaching my son a hindi poem where a drop falls from sky and ends up as pearl . and today i get to read these amazing lines ...
ReplyDelete:)what a co incidence!
DeleteThank you Tangy:)
concrete and abstract juxtaposed.:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Uppal:)
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Amit ji
ReplyDeleteBeautiful composition ---
फ़र्क़ फ़क़त इतना कि
तलहटी समन्दर नहीं,
दफ़्न था मैं
ख़ुश्क रेगिस्तान में!
irony of life---
excellent is the only word I can use
Thank you Rajni:)
DeleteWow! Superb! I feel sorry for that shell!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jaish for sympathy and liking:)
Deleteso gooooooooooood!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jaideep:)
Deletethe hindi version is more appealing than the english :) after a long time on your page :) :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Jayant:) Plz do come more often:)
DeleteWow! Hats off Amitji! The idea is so awesome
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajrupa:)glad you liked:)
Deleteunder the sand it will take longer to find the pearl i think
ReplyDeletesorry i went on a tangent
Bikram's
Under the dry sand the desired drop will never reach it!
DeleteThank you Bikram:)
Its like Haiku .... liked it very much
ReplyDeleteThank you Ritz:)
Deleteloved it !
ReplyDeleteThank you Vimla:)
DeleteNice, To write in both languages keeeping in both the same integrity in lines, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gokul:) Glad you noticed, and liked:)
DeleteAmit ji.. bahut khoob. Bahut bahut badhiya..
ReplyDeleteThank you Surabhi:)
Deletewow so beautiful amit nice
ReplyDeleteThank you Brad:)
DeleteBeautiful imagination.. I hope it rains.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tulika for your good wishes, and appreciation:)
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