Beautiful concept and well written!
Thank you Abhinav:)
Hats off to your imagination skills
Thank you Ranjana:)
It is lovely, Amitji :D Mira’s Talent Gallery
Thank you Mira:)
so beautiful. Dhanyabad.
Thank you Rupam:)
Thank you Jaleela:)
Oh double torture for the poor shell!
Wohi toh..!Thank you Indu:)
Thank you Shah Nawaz:)
Lovely capture, beautiful words, Amit! Always a wonderful way to begin my day!
Thank you Sylvia:) but the capture is not mine, it's from the net!
waah sir ji kam shabdo me hi bahut badhiya likh diya aapne..
Thank you Suresh:)
Thank you Latha:)
Thank you Follygirl:)
Ah! Amit! What a poem and what imagination to draw the idea from shells in the sand of a desert.
Thank you Suresh:) glad you liked:)
wow..what an imagination...!hats off..
Thank you Titli:) glad you liked:)
Thank you Navin:)
Thank you Rajesh:)
The shell still manages to mother a lovely pearl(read poem). :)
The shell won't be able to mother a pearl without the drop it yearns for! Thank you Divya:)
Thank you Deepak:)
Great lines again!
amazing ! yesterday only i was teaching my son a hindi poem where a drop falls from sky and ends up as pearl . and today i get to read these amazing lines ...
:)what a co incidence!Thank you Tangy:)
concrete and abstract juxtaposed.:)
Thank you Uppal:)Sorry your comment was in spam:(
Amit jiBeautiful composition ---फ़र्क़ फ़क़त इतना कितलहटी समन्दर नहीं,दफ़्न था मैंख़ुश्क रेगिस्तान में!irony of life---excellent is the only word I can use
Thank you Rajni:)
Wow! Superb! I feel sorry for that shell!
Thank you Jaish for sympathy and liking:)
Thank you Jaideep:)
the hindi version is more appealing than the english :) after a long time on your page :) :)
Thank you Jayant:) Plz do come more often:)
Wow! Hats off Amitji! The idea is so awesome
Thank you Rajrupa:)glad you liked:)
under the sand it will take longer to find the pearl i think sorry i went on a tangent Bikram's
Under the dry sand the desired drop will never reach it!Thank you Bikram:)
Its like Haiku .... liked it very much
Thank you Ritz:)
loved it !
Thank you Vimla:)
Nice, To write in both languages keeeping in both the same integrity in lines, I liked it.
Thank you Gokul:) Glad you noticed, and liked:)
Amit ji.. bahut khoob. Bahut bahut badhiya..
Thank you Surabhi:)
wow so beautiful amit nice
Thank you Brad:)
Beautiful imagination.. I hope it rains.
Thank you Tulika for your good wishes, and appreciation:)