शुक्र है कि
साथ नहीं हो..
ज़िन्दा तो हूँ
जुस्तज़ू,
और
इंतज़ार में.
मर ही न जाता
ख़ुशी से
जो मिल गए होते.
Translation:
I should be
rather thankful
that you’re
not mine...
I’m
at least alive
hopefully waiting.
For I would’ve died
in ecstasy,
if you were!
Mmm! Dil ko sambhaliye Amitji! Zindagi ko intezaar karte hi bitaana padega varna :)
ReplyDelete...chaain aaye mere dil ko dua keejiye:)
Deletethank you Suresh:)
Wow..really awesome..:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Nagini:)
DeleteA different perspective to the pain of separation.. brilliant penning, Amit Ji :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Arti:) glad you liked:)
DeleteSir, how do you come up with all this? Great work! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vineet:)
Deleteवाह! बेहद खुबसूरत... क्या बात है!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shah Nawaz:)
Deleteबहुत खूब ....
ReplyDeletedhanyawaad Geet:)
DeleteBeautiful as always :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Jayashree:)
Deletewah kaya kehne hain
ReplyDeleteज़िन्दा तो हूँ जुस्तज़ू,औ इंतज़ार में.
मर ही न जाता ख़ुशी से जो मिल गए होते.
beautiful amit :)
Thank you Alka:)
DeleteWah janab :)
ReplyDeleteShukriyaa huzoor:)
Deletewonderful Amitji..Hindi mein aur bhi acchi hogi but my
ReplyDeletePC does not support Hindi version..
Thank you Ranita:) Plz do read the original Hindi version whenever you can:)
Deleteआपकी इस सुन्दर प्रविष्टि की चर्चा कल २४/७/१२ मंगल वार को चर्चा मंच पर चर्चाकारा राजेश कुमारी द्वारा की जायेगी आप सादर आमंत्रित हैं
ReplyDeleteबहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद!
Deleteचार दिन की ज़िन्दगी....दो कटे आरज़ू में...दो इंतज़ार में...
ReplyDelete:-)
बहुत सुन्दर...
both the versions...hindi is better :-)
regards
anu
Thank you Anu:) glad you liked:)
Deleteमर ही न जाता
ReplyDeleteख़ुशी से
जो मिल गए होते.
Amit ji this makes one think :))
Thank you Rajni:)
DeleteIntezaar ka phal bhi toh milna chahiya na :).
ReplyDeletephal milna toh kisi ke vash ki baat nahi hai na?
DeleteThank you Rachna:)
WOW excellent !
ReplyDeleteThank you Tangy:)
Deletenahi to ye kavita nahi banti.....waaaaaaaaaaaah
ReplyDelete..yes, you're right! Thank you Ana:)
Deletekya khub kahi
ReplyDeleteThank you Ashu..pasand karne ka shukriya:)
Deleteलाज़वाब अमित जी! अच्छा झटका दिया आपने|
ReplyDelete...झटका क्या है उमा भाई, बस यूँ कह लीजिये कि 'दिल बहलाने को ख़याल अच्छा है'.
Deleteआप को पसंद आया इसके लिए शुक्रगुज़ार हूँ:)
brilliant again Amit! you come up with some unique verses every time!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deb:) happy that you liked again:)
DeleteCrisp and intense, Amit!
ReplyDeleteI said this to someone else yesterday and its appropriate to say it again here:
- A lot can be said in a few words!
Like Eli Wallach said in "The Good, the Bad and the Ugly" ... When you've got to shoot, Shoot!, don't talk!
Thank you Jayadevm for your appreciation:) and liking:)
DeleteBahaut badhiya.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shalu:)
Deleteबहुत सुन्दर......
ReplyDeleteधन्यवाद सुरेश:)
Deleteबहुत सुंदर !
ReplyDeleteमिल भी लीजिये
नहीं मरेंगे खुशी से
हम रखेंगे खयाल आपका
कैसे रहेंगे दूर जिंदगी से !
सुझाव बहुत ख़ूब है सुशील, लेकिन अपने हाथ में तो नहीं..
Deleteआपका पढ़ने और पसंद करने का शुक्रिया:)
बहुत खूब भाई जी ।।
ReplyDeleteबहुत बहुत आभार है, नहीं हमसफ़र आप ।
साथ अगर मिलता कहीं, रस्ता लेता नाप ।।
आपके शेर में मेरा भी नाम आया फैज़ाबादी साहब, शुक्रिया!
Deleteआपने पसंद किया इसका भी शुक्रिया:)
Zimdagi to hai ..justuju aur intezar me..
ReplyDeleteFabulous Amit sir. I am speechless on these verses :)
I fail to praise.
Thanks a lot Mak, your kind words inspire me..I'm grateful:)
Deletebhagwan kare woh apko kabhi na mile..:P :D, kyunki humlog aapko khona nahi chahte te ......sukhriya janab :P :D :)
ReplyDeletegrt poetry...........
I too wish the same Saikat:P:D.. Amen! Thanks a lot for the reason given by you:):) and your liking it:)
DeleteBhaut khoob !
ReplyDeleteThank you Indu:) glad you liked:)
DeleteWow...beautifully written
ReplyDeleteThank you Harshita for appreciating:)
ReplyDeleteबहुत खूब!
ReplyDeleteThank you Kailash:) glad you liked:)
DeleteHello from France
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ReplyDelete..the pleasure is mine Suresh! Thank you!
DeleteShort & sweet verse.
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ReplyDeletebut on the other side woh marna bhi kitna haseen hota agar woh mil jaate :)
Bikram's
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DeleteAmit, it's very painful yet so beautiful!!:)
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DeleteSimple yet so very lovely.
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Deletemagical lines :)
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Deleteamazing line...
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