Followers

Sunday, 22 July 2012

शुक्रिया..


शुक्र है कि
साथ नहीं हो..

ज़िन्दा तो  हूँ
जुस्तज़ू,
और
इंतज़ार में.

मर ही  जाता
ख़ुशी से
जो मिल गए होते.



Translation:

I should be
rather thankful
that you’re
not mine...

I’m
at least alive
hopefully waiting.

For I would’ve died
in ecstasy,
if you were!


82 comments:

  1. Mmm! Dil ko sambhaliye Amitji! Zindagi ko intezaar karte hi bitaana padega varna :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ...chaain aaye mere dil ko dua keejiye:)
      thank you Suresh:)

      Delete
  2. A different perspective to the pain of separation.. brilliant penning, Amit Ji :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Arti:) glad you liked:)

      Delete
  3. Sir, how do you come up with all this? Great work! :)

    ReplyDelete
  4. वाह! बेहद खुबसूरत... क्या बात है!!!

    ReplyDelete
  5. wah kaya kehne hain
    ज़िन्दा तो हूँ जुस्तज़ू,औ इंतज़ार में.
    मर ही न जाता ख़ुशी से जो मिल गए होते.
    beautiful amit :)

    ReplyDelete
  6. wonderful Amitji..Hindi mein aur bhi acchi hogi but my
    PC does not support Hindi version..

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Ranita:) Plz do read the original Hindi version whenever you can:)

      Delete
  7. आपकी इस सुन्दर प्रविष्टि की चर्चा कल २४/७/१२ मंगल वार को चर्चा मंच पर चर्चाकारा राजेश कुमारी द्वारा की जायेगी आप सादर आमंत्रित हैं

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद!

      Delete
  8. चार दिन की ज़िन्दगी....दो कटे आरज़ू में...दो इंतज़ार में...
    :-)

    बहुत सुन्दर...
    both the versions...hindi is better :-)
    regards

    anu

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Anu:) glad you liked:)

      Delete
  9. मर ही न जाता
    ख़ुशी से
    जो मिल गए होते.


    Amit ji this makes one think :))

    ReplyDelete
  10. Intezaar ka phal bhi toh milna chahiya na :).

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. phal milna toh kisi ke vash ki baat nahi hai na?
      Thank you Rachna:)

      Delete
  11. nahi to ye kavita nahi banti.....waaaaaaaaaaaah

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ..yes, you're right! Thank you Ana:)

      Delete
  12. Replies
    1. Thank you Ashu..pasand karne ka shukriya:)

      Delete
  13. लाज़वाब अमित जी! अच्छा झटका दिया आपने|

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ...झटका क्या है उमा भाई, बस यूँ कह लीजिये कि 'दिल बहलाने को ख़याल अच्छा है'.
      आप को पसंद आया इसके लिए शुक्रगुज़ार हूँ:)

      Delete
  14. brilliant again Amit! you come up with some unique verses every time!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Deb:) happy that you liked again:)

      Delete
  15. Crisp and intense, Amit!

    I said this to someone else yesterday and its appropriate to say it again here:

    - A lot can be said in a few words!

    Like Eli Wallach said in "The Good, the Bad and the Ugly" ... When you've got to shoot, Shoot!, don't talk!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Jayadevm for your appreciation:) and liking:)

      Delete
  16. बहुत सुन्दर......

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. धन्यवाद सुरेश:)

      Delete
  17. बहुत सुंदर !

    मिल भी लीजिये
    नहीं मरेंगे खुशी से
    हम रखेंगे खयाल आपका
    कैसे रहेंगे दूर जिंदगी से !

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. सुझाव बहुत ख़ूब है सुशील, लेकिन अपने हाथ में तो नहीं..
      आपका पढ़ने और पसंद करने का शुक्रिया:)

      Delete
  18. बहुत खूब भाई जी ।।

    बहुत बहुत आभार है, नहीं हमसफ़र आप ।

    साथ अगर मिलता कहीं, रस्ता लेता नाप ।।

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. आपके शेर में मेरा भी नाम आया फैज़ाबादी साहब, शुक्रिया!
      आपने पसंद किया इसका भी शुक्रिया:)

      Delete
  19. Zimdagi to hai ..justuju aur intezar me..
    Fabulous Amit sir. I am speechless on these verses :)
    I fail to praise.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks a lot Mak, your kind words inspire me..I'm grateful:)

      Delete
  20. bhagwan kare woh apko kabhi na mile..:P :D, kyunki humlog aapko khona nahi chahte te ......sukhriya janab :P :D :)
    grt poetry...........

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I too wish the same Saikat:P:D.. Amen! Thanks a lot for the reason given by you:):) and your liking it:)

      Delete
  21. Replies
    1. Thank you Indu:) glad you liked:)

      Delete
  22. Thank you Harshita for appreciating:)

    ReplyDelete
  23. Replies
    1. Thank you Kailash:) glad you liked:)

      Delete
  24. Hello from France
    I am very happy to welcome you!
    Your blog has been accepted in Asia India ______113 a minute!
    We ask you to follow the blog "Directory"
    Following our blog will gives you twice as many possibilities of visits to your blog!
    Thank you for your understanding.
    On the right side, in the "green list", you will find all the countries and if you click them, you will find the names of blogs from that Country.
    Invite your friends to join us in the "directory"!
    The creation of this new blog "directory" allows a rapprochement between different countries, a knowledge of different cultures and a sharing of different traditions, passions, fashion, paintings, crafts, cooking,
    photography and poetry. So you will be able to find in different countries other people with passions similar to your ones.
    We are fortunate to be on the Blogspot platform that offers the opportunity to speak to the world.
    The more people will join, the more opportunities everyone will have. And yes, I confess, I need people to know this blog!
    You are in some way the Ambassador of this blog in your Country.
    This is not a personal blog, I created it for all to enjoy.
    SO, you also have to make it known to your contacts and friends in your blog domain: the success of this blog depends on all Participants.
    So, during your next comments with your friends, ask them to come in the 'Directory' by writing in your comments:
    *** I am in the directory come join me! http://world-directory-sweetmelody.blogspot.com/ ***
    You want this directory to become more important? Help me to make it grow up!
    Your blog is in the list Asia India ______113 and I hope this list will grow very quickly
    Regards
    Chris
    We ask that you follow our blog and place a badge of your choice on your blog, in order to introduce the "directory" to your friends.
    http://nsm05.casimages.com/img/2012/03/19/120319072128505749603643.gif
    http://nsm05.casimages.com/img/2012/03/24/1203240217091250289621842.png
    http://nsm05.casimages.com/img/2012/03/28/120328020518505749640557.gif
    http://nsm05.casimages.com/img/2012/03/26/1203260602581250289633006.gif

    If you want me to know the blog of your friends, send me their urls

    ReplyDelete
  25. Aapka bahut -bahut dhanyawad jo aapne mera likha huaa pasand kiya ..varna kafi log to padhkar chale jaate hain ki netaao ke khilaf likh rakha hai ..

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ..the pleasure is mine Suresh! Thank you!

      Delete
  26. Replies
    1. Thank you Indu:)for appreciating:)

      Delete
  27. :) well said sir kya baat hai ..

    but on the other side woh marna bhi kitna haseen hota agar woh mil jaate :)


    Bikram's

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ..definitely yes Bikram sahib, bas yeh nazm na likhi jaati:)aur shaayad kuchh aur bhi nazmen aapki tawajjoh chaahengi aage:) Thanks a lot for liking it:)

      Delete
  28. Amit, it's very painful yet so beautiful!!:)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Panchali:) glad you liked:)

      Delete
  29. i have become a fan of your poems after joining indiblogger.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Gunjan:) I'm honored:)

      Delete
    2. sir,honour is totally mine..u r like a super super senior in the field of blogging .

      Delete
    3. My dear Gunjan, let's leave this hierarchy thing in our offices only:) I believe we're all on equal footing here, so just relax:) Create and delight the fellow bloggers and take delight in their creations:) All the best:)

      Delete
  30. Beautiful and it stands out in both the languages.:)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Saru:) I'm delighted:)

      Delete