शुक्र है कि
साथ नहीं हो..
ज़िन्दा तो हूँ
मर ही न जाता
जो मिल गए होते.
I should be
at least alive
For I would’ve died
if you were!
Mmm! Dil ko sambhaliye Amitji! Zindagi ko intezaar karte hi bitaana padega varna :)ReplyDelete
...chaain aaye mere dil ko dua keejiye:)Delete
thank you Suresh:)
Thank you Nagini:)Delete
A different perspective to the pain of separation.. brilliant penning, Amit Ji :)ReplyDelete
Thank you Arti:) glad you liked:)Delete
Sir, how do you come up with all this? Great work! :)ReplyDelete
Thank you Vineet:)Delete
वाह! बेहद खुबसूरत... क्या बात है!!!ReplyDelete
Thank you Shah Nawaz:)Delete
बहुत खूब ....ReplyDelete
Beautiful as always :)ReplyDelete
Thank you Jayashree:)Delete
wah kaya kehne hainReplyDelete
ज़िन्दा तो हूँ जुस्तज़ू,औ इंतज़ार में.
मर ही न जाता ख़ुशी से जो मिल गए होते.
beautiful amit :)
Thank you Alka:)Delete
Wah janab :)ReplyDelete
wonderful Amitji..Hindi mein aur bhi acchi hogi but myReplyDelete
PC does not support Hindi version..
Thank you Ranita:) Plz do read the original Hindi version whenever you can:)Delete
आपकी इस सुन्दर प्रविष्टि की चर्चा कल २४/७/१२ मंगल वार को चर्चा मंच पर चर्चाकारा राजेश कुमारी द्वारा की जायेगी आप सादर आमंत्रित हैंReplyDelete
चार दिन की ज़िन्दगी....दो कटे आरज़ू में...दो इंतज़ार में...ReplyDelete
both the versions...hindi is better :-)
Thank you Anu:) glad you liked:)Delete
मर ही न जाताReplyDelete
जो मिल गए होते.
Amit ji this makes one think :))
Thank you Rajni:)Delete
Intezaar ka phal bhi toh milna chahiya na :).ReplyDelete
phal milna toh kisi ke vash ki baat nahi hai na?Delete
Thank you Rachna:)
WOW excellent !ReplyDelete
Thank you Tangy:)Delete
nahi to ye kavita nahi banti.....waaaaaaaaaaaahReplyDelete
..yes, you're right! Thank you Ana:)Delete
kya khub kahiReplyDelete
Thank you Ashu..pasand karne ka shukriya:)Delete
लाज़वाब अमित जी! अच्छा झटका दिया आपने|ReplyDelete
...झटका क्या है उमा भाई, बस यूँ कह लीजिये कि 'दिल बहलाने को ख़याल अच्छा है'.Delete
आप को पसंद आया इसके लिए शुक्रगुज़ार हूँ:)
brilliant again Amit! you come up with some unique verses every time!ReplyDelete
Thank you Deb:) happy that you liked again:)Delete
Crisp and intense, Amit!ReplyDelete
I said this to someone else yesterday and its appropriate to say it again here:
- A lot can be said in a few words!
Like Eli Wallach said in "The Good, the Bad and the Ugly" ... When you've got to shoot, Shoot!, don't talk!
Thank you Jayadevm for your appreciation:) and liking:)Delete
Thank you Shalu:)Delete
बहुत सुंदर !ReplyDelete
मिल भी लीजिये
नहीं मरेंगे खुशी से
हम रखेंगे खयाल आपका
कैसे रहेंगे दूर जिंदगी से !
सुझाव बहुत ख़ूब है सुशील, लेकिन अपने हाथ में तो नहीं..Delete
आपका पढ़ने और पसंद करने का शुक्रिया:)
बहुत खूब भाई जी ।।ReplyDelete
बहुत बहुत आभार है, नहीं हमसफ़र आप ।
साथ अगर मिलता कहीं, रस्ता लेता नाप ।।
आपके शेर में मेरा भी नाम आया फैज़ाबादी साहब, शुक्रिया!Delete
आपने पसंद किया इसका भी शुक्रिया:)
Zimdagi to hai ..justuju aur intezar me..ReplyDelete
Fabulous Amit sir. I am speechless on these verses :)
I fail to praise.
Thanks a lot Mak, your kind words inspire me..I'm grateful:)Delete
bhagwan kare woh apko kabhi na mile..:P :D, kyunki humlog aapko khona nahi chahte te ......sukhriya janab :P :D :)ReplyDelete
I too wish the same Saikat:P:D.. Amen! Thanks a lot for the reason given by you:):) and your liking it:)Delete
Bhaut khoob !ReplyDelete
Thank you Indu:) glad you liked:)Delete
Thank you Harshita for appreciating:)ReplyDelete
Thank you Kailash:) glad you liked:)Delete
Hello from FranceReplyDelete
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The more people will join, the more opportunities everyone will have. And yes, I confess, I need people to know this blog!
You are in some way the Ambassador of this blog in your Country.
This is not a personal blog, I created it for all to enjoy.
SO, you also have to make it known to your contacts and friends in your blog domain: the success of this blog depends on all Participants.
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Aapka bahut -bahut dhanyawad jo aapne mera likha huaa pasand kiya ..varna kafi log to padhkar chale jaate hain ki netaao ke khilaf likh rakha hai ..ReplyDelete
..the pleasure is mine Suresh! Thank you!Delete
Short & sweet verse.ReplyDelete
Thank you Indu:)for appreciating:)Delete
:) well said sir kya baat hai ..ReplyDelete
but on the other side woh marna bhi kitna haseen hota agar woh mil jaate :)
..definitely yes Bikram sahib, bas yeh nazm na likhi jaati:)aur shaayad kuchh aur bhi nazmen aapki tawajjoh chaahengi aage:) Thanks a lot for liking it:)Delete
Amit, it's very painful yet so beautiful!!:)ReplyDelete
Thank you Panchali:) glad you liked:)Delete
Simple yet so very lovely.ReplyDelete
Thank you Divya:)Delete
i have become a fan of your poems after joining indiblogger.ReplyDelete
Thank you Gunjan:) I'm honored:)Delete
sir,honour is totally mine..u r like a super super senior in the field of blogging .Delete
My dear Gunjan, let's leave this hierarchy thing in our offices only:) I believe we're all on equal footing here, so just relax:) Create and delight the fellow bloggers and take delight in their creations:) All the best:)Delete
magical lines :)ReplyDelete
Thank you Guru:)Delete
Thank you Mahi:)Delete
Beautiful and it stands out in both the languages.:)ReplyDelete
Thank you Saru:) I'm delighted:)Delete
Thank you Neha:)Delete