कभी भागता है
कभी भगाता है.
अक्सर मेरे सीने पे,
कंधे पे,
कभी सर पे
चढ़ जाता है.
कभी कान पकड़ कर
उमेठता है,
कभी नाक में
तिनका करता है.
कभी हाथ पकड़ कर
खींचता है,
कभी पैरों से
घसीटता है.
अक्सर आगे खड़ा हो
ललचाता है,
कभी-कभी पीछे से
अंगूठा दिखाता है.
चलता हूँ
तो साथ चलता है,
दौड़ता हूँ
तो पैर फँसा गिरा देता है.
चैन से जीने नहीं देता
ये वक़्त
मेरा पीछा
क्यों नहीं छोड़ता..?
ha ha ha, beautifully written!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deb:) glad you liked:)
DeleteNicely compiled, Amit ji!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Dheeraj:)
Deleteha..ha..sweet..:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Nagini:)
DeleteBahut acha, Amitji!!! Waqt aap se beintehah mohabbat karta hain. Jee lijiye!
ReplyDeleteThank you Bhavana:)..but chaain se jeene nahi deta...:)?
Deleteha ha ha and until the end I was wondering who it is ...
ReplyDeleteThank you Tangy:) glad you liked:)
DeleteMaaf kar hi deejiye waqt ko kyonki kabhi aapse aise kavitayein bhi likwata hai:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Suresh:)
Delete..arey sahib maafi toh main maang rahaa hoon waqt se..:)
Is waqt bina translation ke , I understood it fully and Loved it ! Bahut khoob :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Jaish:)meri kavita ko waqt dene ke liye:)...happy that you made use of the word 'waqt' in your comment too..:)
DeleteC.Suresh & Bhavna are right-vakt to aapka dost hai.
ReplyDelete..chaliye toh ab maan hi leta hoon doctor sahiba:)
Deleteaapki expert opinion is the last word:):)
Wah, wah! Amitji! Kya khoob kaha hai.. Some questions that make life what it is...
ReplyDeleteWelcome back Arti:) glad you liked and connected it with the real philosophy behind this verse:):)
ReplyDeleteThat was brilliant Amit!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
DeleteWaqt peecha tab chhodega jab tum zindagi se pyar karna chhodenge...
ReplyDelete...I guess yes..:)
DeleteWaqt hi toh hai jo bhagta hai, kabhi thkta nahi, harta nahi.
ReplyDeleteAchchi lagi apki kavita :)
Thank you Ghazala:)
Deleteah, yes...time hangs over us like that and makes us tremble at every stir :)) Loved this...Amit.
ReplyDeleteThank you Panchali:)
DeleteVery truely said...Waqt ke aage kisiki nahi chalti !
ReplyDeleteThank you Vaishali:)
DeleteWelcome here plz come again:)
Waqt ka aisa description, wah wah..another lovely one from you
ReplyDeleteThank you Arnab:) glad you liked:)
Deletegreat.....
ReplyDeletesuperb expression with a surprising end...
regards
anu
Thank you Anu:) glad you liked:)
Deleteसब वक्त का ही तो खेल है।
ReplyDeleteThank you Pallavi:)
DeleteKya kavita hai sirji. Dil khush kar dia.
ReplyDeleteAapke lie ek chota sa tohfa. Click kar ke dekh lijie
http://www.liveuploud.blogspot.in/2012/07/something-awesome-and-sorry.html
Ashwini
Thank you Ashwini:)
Deletesome questions are unanswered despite of all the effort made...
ReplyDeleteand some questions should remain unanswered whether you make effort or not to find its solution... and one of that question is what you have asked in this beautiful poem...
bahut achi kavita jo dil ko choo gayi...
Thanks a lot Ashish:) for liking it:)
Deleteit looks like a riddle.so many things come in mind.
ReplyDeletegood expressions
neerambuj
Thank you Neera:)
Delete..welcome here, plz come again:)
apki yeh khoobsurat kavita padhte samay mere zehen me chand pantiya aayi hai , umeed hai apko pasand aayegi ...
ReplyDeletethehra sa hai mere saath ,
na chalta hai na chalne deta,
ruka bhi nhi hai ,
lehro ki tarah mujhe sang le leta,
ye waqt hi to wo,
jo badha deta hai meri uljhane ,
deta hai khud hi zakhm bhi ,
khud hi marham bhi deta .
...beautiful lines! Thank you Malay:)
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