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Sunday, 1 July 2012

क्यों..?


कभी भागता है
कभी भगाता है.

अक्सर मेरे सीने पे,
कंधे पे,
कभी सर पे
चढ़ जाता है.

कभी कान पकड़ कर
उमेठता है,
कभी नाक में 
तिनका करता है.

कभी हाथ पकड़ कर
खींचता है,
कभी पैरों से
घसीटता है.

अक्सर आगे खड़ा हो
ललचाता है,
कभी-कभी पीछे से
अंगूठा दिखाता है.

चलता हूँ 
तो साथ चलता है,
दौड़ता हूँ 
तो पैर फँसा गिरा देता है.

चैन से जीने नहीं देता
ये वक़्त 
मेरा पीछा 
क्यों नहीं छोड़ता..?


42 comments:

  1. ha ha ha, beautifully written!!!

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    1. Thank you Deb:) glad you liked:)

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  2. Bahut acha, Amitji!!! Waqt aap se beintehah mohabbat karta hain. Jee lijiye!

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    1. Thank you Bhavana:)..but chaain se jeene nahi deta...:)?

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  3. ha ha ha and until the end I was wondering who it is ...

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    1. Thank you Tangy:) glad you liked:)

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  4. Maaf kar hi deejiye waqt ko kyonki kabhi aapse aise kavitayein bhi likwata hai:)

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    1. Thank you Suresh:)
      ..arey sahib maafi toh main maang rahaa hoon waqt se..:)

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  5. Is waqt bina translation ke , I understood it fully and Loved it ! Bahut khoob :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Jaish:)meri kavita ko waqt dene ke liye:)...happy that you made use of the word 'waqt' in your comment too..:)

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  6. C.Suresh & Bhavna are right-vakt to aapka dost hai.

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    1. ..chaliye toh ab maan hi leta hoon doctor sahiba:)
      aapki expert opinion is the last word:):)

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  7. Wah, wah! Amitji! Kya khoob kaha hai.. Some questions that make life what it is...

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  8. Welcome back Arti:) glad you liked and connected it with the real philosophy behind this verse:):)

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  9. Waqt peecha tab chhodega jab tum zindagi se pyar karna chhodenge...

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  10. Waqt hi toh hai jo bhagta hai, kabhi thkta nahi, harta nahi.

    Achchi lagi apki kavita :)

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  11. ah, yes...time hangs over us like that and makes us tremble at every stir :)) Loved this...Amit.

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  12. Very truely said...Waqt ke aage kisiki nahi chalti !

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    1. Thank you Vaishali:)
      Welcome here plz come again:)

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  13. Waqt ka aisa description, wah wah..another lovely one from you

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    1. Thank you Arnab:) glad you liked:)

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  14. great.....
    superb expression with a surprising end...
    regards

    anu

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    1. Thank you Anu:) glad you liked:)

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  15. सब वक्त का ही तो खेल है।

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  16. Kya kavita hai sirji. Dil khush kar dia.

    Aapke lie ek chota sa tohfa. Click kar ke dekh lijie
    http://www.liveuploud.blogspot.in/2012/07/something-awesome-and-sorry.html

    Ashwini

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  17. some questions are unanswered despite of all the effort made...
    and some questions should remain unanswered whether you make effort or not to find its solution... and one of that question is what you have asked in this beautiful poem...

    bahut achi kavita jo dil ko choo gayi...

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    1. Thanks a lot Ashish:) for liking it:)

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  18. it looks like a riddle.so many things come in mind.
    good expressions

    neerambuj

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    1. Thank you Neera:)
      ..welcome here, plz come again:)

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  19. apki yeh khoobsurat kavita padhte samay mere zehen me chand pantiya aayi hai , umeed hai apko pasand aayegi ...

    thehra sa hai mere saath ,
    na chalta hai na chalne deta,
    ruka bhi nhi hai ,
    lehro ki tarah mujhe sang le leta,
    ye waqt hi to wo,
    jo badha deta hai meri uljhane ,
    deta hai khud hi zakhm bhi ,
    khud hi marham bhi deta .

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    1. ...beautiful lines! Thank you Malay:)

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