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Monday, 8 February 2016

दीवार-1


कि कहीं अनधिकार चेष्टा
या अतिक्रमण की मंशा
मान बैठो
मैं कुछ बोला;
और तुमने हम दोनों के बीच
दीवार उगा दी,
पर उसके छोर पे
वो पैने-नुकीले काँच
रोपने ज़रूरी थे क्या?
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38 comments:

  1. emotional distances..
    Shabdon se khelna aapko khoob aata hai Amit Ji..beautifully expressed :)

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    1. शब्दों के परे जाकर आपने कविता का मर्म पढ़ लिया... मैं अभिभूत हूँ:) धन्यवाद आपका, रेनू:)

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  2. Wizardry of words.

    The picture is very apt and compliments the write. However, given my limited vocab, I think the word is spelt and pronounced as anadhikaar and NOT anaadhikaar.

    On the nuance of the verse : Courage lies in confronting rather than crying, cribbing or complaining behind later.

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  3. Rectified. Thank you!
    'Wizardry'...Thanks again:)
    'nuance'...True!

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  4. Emotional barrier, the height of this invisible yet highly palpable wall is unfathomable...
    Wonderful a always, Amitji... :-)

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  5. Valid question. Seems like there is no chance of reconciliation. :(

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    1. Depends on the one who raised it:) Thank you Indrani:)

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    1. Glad you read between the lines:) Thank you Ravish:)

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  7. रिश्तों में जब दरार पड़ती हैं तो उस दरार पर दीवार खड़ी होती ही हैं।

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  8. कुछ पहले बोल देते तो शायद दीवार एक मुंडेर ही रहती...अक्सर मन की बात जब मन में रह जाती है तो यूँ ही फासले बढ़ जाते हैं। मुझे यहाँ कोकिला की लिखी तुम बात करो तो बात चले याद आई। आपने अगर नहीं पढ़ी तो एक बार ज़रूर पढ़ें।

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    1. Zaroor parhi hogi. Dobaraa parhunga. Thank you Sunaina:)

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  9. I had to ask the meanings of some words :-p
    well expressed Amitji... :-)

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    1. Thank you for your interest and effort, Archana:)

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  10. Dilon ke darmiyan deewar aa jaye toh phir seemaon par nukile kaanch ug aate hai...phir woh seema chahe ghar ki ho ya phir desh ki.

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    1. Ji haan, Somali, bus mera khayaal itnaa hai ki wo kaanch zaroori nahi tthe, sanket roop mein deewar hi kaafi hoti..
      Thank you for your views:)

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  11. शब्दों को क्या खूबसूरती से पिरोया है...कमाल कर दिया अमित जी...

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    1. Thank you Amit:) Glad you liked the words too;)

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  12. Mesmerizing and thought provoking words.
    Thanks for sharing this amazing piece :)

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    1. Thank you Purba for your kind words:)

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  13. Amazing....we feel scared of ourselves...so not only wall, the glass pieces on that too...to protect ourselves...or to maintain the distance ?!!

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    1. The fear of trespassing perhaps..?
      But the futility of those broken glass pieces will stun you:) Please keep reading the coming parts too:)
      Thank you Ranjana:)

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  14. Bahut khoob ... Anjane hi sahi par dubara rishte banana mushkil ho jata hai aise mein ...

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    1. Ho saktaa hai...lekin rishton ki pechidgi aur bhavishya ke rahsya ko kaun jaanta hai bhalaa? Thank you Digambar:)

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  15. And such are shades of love beautifully painted.

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  16. Lovely words - and so true of human relationships

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  17. Ranjishon ki deewarein laakh sahi par kaanch ke tukde toh cheel hi sakte hain bus. Bohot khoonsurat Amitji.

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    1. Bilkul sahi! Pasand karne ke liye aapka aabhar, Shweta:)

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  18. ​जबरदस्त शब्द संयोजन अमित जी !

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    1. Glad you liked the composition too:) Thank you Yogendra bhaai:)

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