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Thursday, 11 February 2016

दीवार-2


कभी उचक कर
या  लपक  कर
देख भर लेता तुम्हें
बाल सुखाते
या बस आते - जाते;
पर ये काँच..!

नहीं कर पाऊँगा
कोई बेजा हरकत
नहीं छिलें - कटेंगे
हाथ - पाँव
दिल मेरा लेकिन
है लहूलुहान .

Image courtesy: Google





28 comments:

  1. इस दीवार को परदे की मांदिद सरका दो :)

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    1. hmmm...good idea if only it were possible..Thank you Manisha:)

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  2. क्या बात है अमित जी ! बहुत खूब

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  3. Wow! Can't imagine a picture like that could inspire such meaningful lines!

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    1. Glad you found it meaningful, Indrani:) Thank you:)

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  4. I smiled as I imagined a pining lover.....I am sure love will crush these glasses to pieces in the next part...:)

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    1. Great Expectations! ..and true too:) Please keep reading, am sure you'll like the following parts too:) Thank you Sunaina:)

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    1. Thank you Chaitali:) There's more to come...

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  6. kamzor mohabbat hai jo kanch ki diwar se lahulohan hone se dar gaye, achcha likha hai

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  7. Touching lines, Amitji.
    Heart has seen bloodshed! Glass is on the facade..

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    1. Great rhyming comment, Anita:) Thank you:):)

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    1. Glad you didn't miss the soul! Thank you Rajni:)

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  9. Wah wah...Zakhm kiye bina dil lahuluhaan bohot khoob.

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    1. :)
      Thank you Shweta:) Glad you liked:)

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