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Wednesday, 17 February 2016

दीवार-4


बेबाक़ आती है
तुम्हारे रियाज़ की आवाज़
देर रात या अलस्सुबह;
तुम्हारी खनकती  हँसी-
सुरमई शामों को  दोस्तों के बीच से.
दीग़र है ये बात कि मैं
‘आलाप’ कम  सुनूँ  औरकोमल’  ज़्यादा,
खिलखिलाहट  कम
और  बीच  की  ख़ामोशी  लगातार.
ये  काँच के टुकड़े
उसे  छील  नहीं पाते...
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                                                              ये भी पढ़ें:  दीवार-1 / दीवार-2 / दीवार-3 / दीवार-5 


34 comments:

  1. Thank you Sreeja:) Glad you liked:)

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  2. Beautifully penned, each word is carved to a perfect sculpture Amitji :)

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    1. Am glad you analyse my poems so beautifully:) Grateful:) Thank you Shweta:)

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  3. beautifully penned Amit Sir... :)

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  4. I am surprised and lost as always. So nicely written !! :)

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    1. Glad you liked:) Thank you Shraddha:)

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  5. Beautiful! So intense and emotional.

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  6. Hindi thodi kamzor hai sir ji...achcha hota agar aap kuch meanings bhi batate...kuch kuch hi samajh mein aaya.

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    1. Awwe...am sorry Alok:(
      But still, thank you for caring to comment:)

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  7. Deep! Love the way your poetry makes one think!

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  8. Beautiful :)
    I loved all the poems in this series :)

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    1. Am happy you liked, Purba:) There's one last one coming up soon...

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  9. दर्द और दीवानगी !

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  10. Precisely! Kewal teen shabdon mein bayaan kar di aapne meri poori kavita...
    What brevity!! Thank you Sunaina:)

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  11. प्रेम का गहरा एहसास दिला जाती है रचना ...

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    1. Tahedil se shukriya aapka, Digamber sahab:)

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  12. बहुत सुन्दर ! बेहतरीन शब्द

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  13. Romance across the border :) Lovely.

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  14. Lovely Amit! The melancholy of love :)

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    1. You felt it and said it! Thank you Suresh:)

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  15. Kaanch ke tukde khamoshi ho cheel nahi paate ..aaur deewar awaaz ko rok nahi paati.

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    1. Theek kaha hai na Somali?
      Thank you for reading:)

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    1. Thank you Harshita:) Glad you liked:)

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