बेबाक़ आती है
तुम्हारे रियाज़ की आवाज़
देर रात या अलस्सुबह;
तुम्हारी खनकती हँसी-
सुरमई शामों को दोस्तों के बीच से.
दीग़र है ये बात कि मैं
‘आलाप’ कम सुनूँ और ‘कोमल’ ज़्यादा,
खिलखिलाहट कम
और बीच की ख़ामोशी लगातार.
ये काँच के टुकड़े
उसे छील नहीं पाते...
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So intense and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sreeja:) Glad you liked:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Archana:)
DeleteBeautifully penned, each word is carved to a perfect sculpture Amitji :)
ReplyDeleteAm glad you analyse my poems so beautifully:) Grateful:) Thank you Shweta:)
Deletebeautifully penned Amit Sir... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Arpita:)
DeleteI am surprised and lost as always. So nicely written !! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked:) Thank you Shraddha:)
DeleteBeautiful! So intense and emotional.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nisha:)
DeleteHindi thodi kamzor hai sir ji...achcha hota agar aap kuch meanings bhi batate...kuch kuch hi samajh mein aaya.
ReplyDeleteAwwe...am sorry Alok:(
DeleteBut still, thank you for caring to comment:)
Deep! Love the way your poetry makes one think!
ReplyDeleteGlad! Thank you Rakesh:)
DeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteI loved all the poems in this series :)
Am happy you liked, Purba:) There's one last one coming up soon...
DeleteNice
ReplyDeleteThank you Rupam:)
Deleteदर्द और दीवानगी !
ReplyDeletePrecisely! Kewal teen shabdon mein bayaan kar di aapne meri poori kavita...
ReplyDeleteWhat brevity!! Thank you Sunaina:)
प्रेम का गहरा एहसास दिला जाती है रचना ...
ReplyDeleteTahedil se shukriya aapka, Digamber sahab:)
Deleteबहुत सुन्दर ! बेहतरीन शब्द
ReplyDeleteThank you Yogendra:)
DeleteRomance across the border :) Lovely.
ReplyDelete:):) Thank you Beloo:)
DeleteLovely Amit! The melancholy of love :)
ReplyDeleteYou felt it and said it! Thank you Suresh:)
DeleteKaanch ke tukde khamoshi ho cheel nahi paate ..aaur deewar awaaz ko rok nahi paati.
ReplyDeleteTheek kaha hai na Somali?
DeleteThank you for reading:)
Heart touching
ReplyDeleteThank you Harshita:) Glad you liked:)
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