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Sunday, 14 February 2016

दीवार- 3


हाँ, तुम्हारी तरफ़ हैं फूल,
मेरी तरफ़ खरपतवार.
पर जब कभी-कभार
चलती है हवा उस रुख़ से
तो ले आती है  ख़ुश्बुएं
मिट्टी पर पानी की
यादों पर मिट्टी की
बिलकुल ताज़ी
अक्षत, अनछुई !
ये काँच के टुकड़े
उसे काट नहीं पाते..
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37 comments:

  1. बहुत बढ़िया अमित जी ! खुशबू और पवन के झोंके , कोई कैसे भला इन्हें रोके !!

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    1. Kyaa baat hai Yogendra bhai:) Couplet banaa daala:) Thank you:)

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    1. Thank you Ravish:) Glad that the depth is felt..

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  3. रहने दो उन कांच के टुकड़ों को दीवार के ऊपर
    आप दीवार के बीच में से कुछ ईटों को हटा दो।:)

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    1. Ha ha:) Thank you Manisha:) Yeh zabardasti ka sauda nahi hai...

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  4. Zindagi mein rukhavatein ho sakte hain, zindagi ki ras lenese koi rukhavat rok nahin sakta, siwaye apne man ke :)

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  5. Really touching.
    May the fragrance of love and memories always linger.

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  6. wow.. u r int longer poems now Amitji... awesome :-)

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  7. Absolutely beautiful. Words that echo in the heart :)

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  8. superb Amit ji ,bahut - bahut under

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  9. Yes, yes....triumph over that which pricks.....waiting for more to come....:)

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    1. Am so glad you are keeping track:) There are 2 more to come in this series...pls do read:) Thank you for your support, Sunaina:)

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    1. Thank you Lata:) khush hoon ki aapko pasand aaii:):)

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  11. Very intense, beautiful as always!

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  12. It is beautiful...especially the closing lines!

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  13. You got it right! Thank you Sreeja:)

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  14. Wah saundhi khooshbuon ko kaanch ke tukde kaat nahi paate ....behtareen Amitji.

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    1. Theek likha hai na? Thank you Shweta:)

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  15. इन कांच के टुकड़ों में गहरा प्रेम बसा है ताज़ा सा प्रेम ...

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  16. Us paar ke baag se aayi hui mehek is paar mitti ko saundha kar jaati hai.
    Aapki kavita ke har lafz mein lutf hota hai Amit ji. Abhi hindi padhne ki bilkul aadat nahi rahi par beech beechme aapki kavita padhkar phir se hindi ke shandon me mein likhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon.

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    1. Bahut sundar vichaar hai Somali; aapki Hindi kavita ke intezaar mein hoon!
      Aur mere lafzon mein lutf lene ka bahut-bahut shukriya:)

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  17. बेहतरीन रचना प्रस्तुति .

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