Us paar ke baag se aayi hui mehek is paar mitti ko saundha kar jaati hai. Aapki kavita ke har lafz mein lutf hota hai Amit ji. Abhi hindi padhne ki bilkul aadat nahi rahi par beech beechme aapki kavita padhkar phir se hindi ke shandon me mein likhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon.
बहुत बढ़िया अमित जी ! खुशबू और पवन के झोंके , कोई कैसे भला इन्हें रोके !!
ReplyDeleteKyaa baat hai Yogendra bhai:) Couplet banaa daala:) Thank you:)
DeleteProfound indeed :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ravish:) Glad that the depth is felt..
Deleteरहने दो उन कांच के टुकड़ों को दीवार के ऊपर
ReplyDeleteआप दीवार के बीच में से कुछ ईटों को हटा दो।:)
Ha ha:) Thank you Manisha:) Yeh zabardasti ka sauda nahi hai...
DeleteZindagi mein rukhavatein ho sakte hain, zindagi ki ras lenese koi rukhavat rok nahin sakta, siwaye apne man ke :)
ReplyDeleteRight Suresh:) Thank you:)
DeleteReally touching.
ReplyDeleteMay the fragrance of love and memories always linger.
Amen! Thank you Anita:)
Deletewow.. u r int longer poems now Amitji... awesome :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Archana:)
Deletememoriessssssssssssssssssssss :)
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Yes! Thank you Bikram:)
DeleteGood one again.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani:)
DeleteAbsolutely beautiful. Words that echo in the heart :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Purba:) Glad you liked:)
Deletesuperb Amit ji ,bahut - bahut under
ReplyDeleteThank you Geeta:)
DeleteSuperb
ReplyDeleteThank you Ila:)
DeleteYes, yes....triumph over that which pricks.....waiting for more to come....:)
ReplyDeleteAm so glad you are keeping track:) There are 2 more to come in this series...pls do read:) Thank you for your support, Sunaina:)
DeleteAmit, loved this one. Khub kahi!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lata:) khush hoon ki aapko pasand aaii:):)
DeleteVery intense, beautiful as always!
ReplyDeleteThank you Alok:)
DeleteIt is beautiful...especially the closing lines!
ReplyDeleteYou got it right! Thank you Sreeja:)
ReplyDeleteWah saundhi khooshbuon ko kaanch ke tukde kaat nahi paate ....behtareen Amitji.
ReplyDeleteTheek likha hai na? Thank you Shweta:)
Deleteइन कांच के टुकड़ों में गहरा प्रेम बसा है ताज़ा सा प्रेम ...
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Delete...aur majboor bhi!
Thank you sir:)
Us paar ke baag se aayi hui mehek is paar mitti ko saundha kar jaati hai.
ReplyDeleteAapki kavita ke har lafz mein lutf hota hai Amit ji. Abhi hindi padhne ki bilkul aadat nahi rahi par beech beechme aapki kavita padhkar phir se hindi ke shandon me mein likhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon.
Bahut sundar vichaar hai Somali; aapki Hindi kavita ke intezaar mein hoon!
DeleteAur mere lafzon mein lutf lene ka bahut-bahut shukriya:)
बेहतरीन रचना प्रस्तुति .
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