इस दीवार को परदे की मांदिद सरका दो :)
hmmm...good idea if only it were possible..Thank you Manisha:)
bahut khoob amit sir Bikram's
Thank you Bikram sir:)
क्या बात है अमित जी ! बहुत खूब
Thank you Yogendra:)
Wow! Can't imagine a picture like that could inspire such meaningful lines!
Glad you found it meaningful, Indrani:) Thank you:)
Bahut sunder Pankttiyan
Thank you Geeta:)
I smiled as I imagined a pining lover.....I am sure love will crush these glasses to pieces in the next part...:)
Great Expectations! ..and true too:) Please keep reading, am sure you'll like the following parts too:) Thank you Sunaina:)
beautiful lines Amitji :-)
Thank you Archana:)
Poignant desires and its play
Thank you Chaitali:) There's more to come...
Thank you Suresh:)
Beautiful and poignant :)
Thank you Purba:)
kamzor mohabbat hai jo kanch ki diwar se lahulohan hone se dar gaye, achcha likha hai
:) Thank you Kashif:)
Touching lines, Amitji.Heart has seen bloodshed! Glass is on the facade..
Great rhyming comment, Anita:) Thank you:):)
loved the last line Amit ji
Glad you didn't miss the soul! Thank you Rajni:)
Wah wah...Zakhm kiye bina dil lahuluhaan bohot khoob.
:)Thank you Shweta:) Glad you liked:)