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Tuesday, 30 June 2015

डायस्पोरा...diaspora


दिल आवारा
तंग-गली जहान
डायस्पोरा

Key:
आवारा = vagabond
तंग = narrow 
जहान = world
डायस्पोरा = diaspora
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26 comments:

  1. Ranita Sinha1 July 2015 at 00:09

    Khubsurat haiku Amitji..

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  2. indu chhibber1 July 2015 at 00:26

    Amit ji your poems are difficult to understand for a dense person like me.

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    1. Amit Agarwal3 July 2015 at 00:07

      I am embarrassed, Indu:( for I know the altitude of your intelligence...
      I seek consultation from you: Have I started writing obscure or absurd? Am I becoming senile? In my opinion I am about 25 years away from the usual age of senility...

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    2. indu chhibber3 July 2015 at 19:59

      Oh no.never!I You and senile-it is a joke.In fact i am very near it.
      Pardon me if i made you feel this way.
      I do find it difficult to get to the subtle meanings

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    3. Amit Agarwal4 July 2015 at 00:18

      Am even more embarrassed this time..I look up to you as a guide and mentor...kindly, kindly DO NOT ask pardon. Thank you for your feedback, shall try to write less complicated in future:):) Regards...

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  3. vanderloost3 July 2015 at 11:33

    Yes, the world is too small at times...

    Geetashree

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    1. Amit Agarwal4 July 2015 at 00:25

      Thank you Geetashree for finding it so:)
      I haven't seen the world geographically but 'my world' seems very narrow and stifling hence this verse!

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  4. Unknown8 July 2015 at 05:25

    thank god for the translation Amitji :p

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  5. Kokila gupta8 July 2015 at 10:20

    Irony made Beautiful and real !loved it ..as always :)

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  6. Unknown8 July 2015 at 10:53

    Though the emotion conveyed is different, somehow I am reminded on the old song --Choti si yeh duniya pehchane raaste hai.. I loved listening to old hindi movie songs maybe that's why.

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    1. AmitAag9 July 2015 at 10:18

      तंग-गली जहान...Chhoti si yeh duniya pehchane raaste hai...they are like siblings:)
      Thank you Somali:)

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  7. Ravish Mani8 July 2015 at 14:28

    I guess, first Hinglish Haiku! Loved it, Amit :)

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    1. Amit Agarwal8 July 2015 at 23:25

      nahin, is se pahle bhi hai:)
      Please read it here: http://amitaag.blogspot.in/2015/06/surrogate.html
      aur shayad aage bhi aayenge:)
      Thank you Ravish for liking this daring act:) I'm afraid conservative Hindi veterans will rebuke it;)

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  8. C Suresh8 July 2015 at 20:33

    Constrained by the limits of this narrow world, Amit?

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  9. Noopur8 July 2015 at 23:01

    Beautiful Haiku Amit ji :)

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  10. Yogi Saraswat9 July 2015 at 04:43

    बहुत सटीक और शानदार हाइकू अमित जी

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  11. magiceye9 July 2015 at 05:33

    World has shrunk!

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  12. Unknown11 July 2015 at 03:35

    A deep hidden meaning in your haiku... Super :)

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    1. AmitAag23 July 2015 at 22:43

      Thank you Shweta:) for your interpretation:)

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