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Friday, 1 June 2012

हाइकु...haiku...




साथ कोई 
ज़िन्दगी का सफ़र
ही तन्हाई


Translation:

None with me
in journey of life
even solitude

51 comments:

  1. Very nice...and its absolutely true...

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  2. ३ पंक्तियों में आप बहुत कुछ कह गए
    सुन्दर
    अमित जी

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    1. Thank you Manish, welcome here plz come again:)

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  4. Very nice, Amitji... did you sketch the pic?

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    1. Thank you Ash!...no the sketch is not mine:)

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  5. but this sketch is in tandem with your beautiful lines.

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    1. ...yeah that's why it's been put up there. Thank you Indu!

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  6. कोई न साथ
    खुद का मैं साथी हूँ
    सो तन्हा कहाँ??

    :-)

    अनु

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    1. Wow...great rejoinder...thank you Anu!

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  7. Wow, I didn't know a haiku could be written in Hindi too :) And The english version is awesome sir. :)

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  8. poignant

    beautifuly expressed

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  9. Very sad but written beautifully...

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  10. but sir its good ki tanhai nahin hai saath.. it wud be sad otherwise

    although i understand ki woh saath nahin hai to it feel tanhai

    Bikram's

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    1. ...That is the catch Bikram, that I'm in a crowd and yet none is with me, and since it is a crowd I'm not even alone!
      Thank you for caring to interpret and comment:)

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  11. Very true but feels some sadness also in it. . .

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    1. Hey Abhi...IT IS SAD...man! Thank you for feeling it:)

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  12. tanha safar hai , bus saanso ki awaaz hai mein kabhi kabhi un se baat kar leti hoon.

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    1. Thank you Alka for this beautiful rejoinder, but mere paas saanson ki aawaaz bhi nahi hai!

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  13. सुंदर...ज़िंदगी की हकीकत बयानी...
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com

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  14. Yeh zindagi tumhe kahen lekar aa gayi bhai!

    You packed a punch in those lines. Hats off!

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  15. Just became a member of Indiblogger...saw the word haiku and got intersted.. have been writing haiku for two years now..you have done well...I invite you to wvisit me,,

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    1. Thank you Ramesh for stopping by, and liking my Haiku. I shall come to your blog soon:)

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  16. reading haiku in hindi for the first time ! too good ..hats off to you !!!

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    1. Thank you Tangy...I'm obliged:)

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  17. I had written a few haiku in hindi, should look for them:)

    Very powerful one you got here~

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    1. welcome here Ghazala, and thank you for appreciating:) I'll reed your haikus soon...plz visit again:)

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  18. That's an interesting one. Isn't it a blessing if you don't feel lonely even when you are alone.
    Nicely crafted, Amit.

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    1. hey Divya...it's the other way round...I'm lonely even in a crowd 'coz no one is 'with' me...see the paradox...thank you:)

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  19. Life is so shallow and lonely at times. Very beautifully expressed...

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