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Friday, 1 June 2012

हाइकु...haiku...




न साथ कोई 
ज़िन्दगी का सफ़र
न ही तन्हाई


Translation:

None with me
in journey of life
even solitude
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49 comments:

  1. Ranjana's craft blog1 June 2012 at 01:19

    Very nice...and its absolutely true...

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  2. Shashiprakash Saini1 June 2012 at 01:20

    ३ पंक्तियों में आप बहुत कुछ कह गए
    सुन्दर
    अमित जी

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  3. AmitAag1 June 2012 at 02:03

    Thank you Manish, welcome here plz come again:)

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  4. Ash1 June 2012 at 02:06

    Very nice, Amitji... did you sketch the pic?

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    1. AmitAag1 June 2012 at 02:09

      Thank you Ash!...no the sketch is not mine:)

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  5. muni1 June 2012 at 04:30

    superb and true lines........

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  6. indu chhibber1 June 2012 at 06:43

    but this sketch is in tandem with your beautiful lines.

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    1. AmitAag1 June 2012 at 20:56

      ...yeah that's why it's been put up there. Thank you Indu!

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  7. ANULATA RAJ NAIR1 June 2012 at 07:34

    कोई न साथ
    खुद का मैं साथी हूँ
    सो तन्हा कहाँ??

    :-)

    अनु

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    1. AmitAag1 June 2012 at 20:58

      Wow...great rejoinder...thank you Anu!

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  8. Neha1 June 2012 at 07:37

    Wow, I didn't know a haiku could be written in Hindi too :) And The english version is awesome sir. :)

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  9. Panchali1 June 2012 at 10:24

    immaculate!

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  10. magiceye1 June 2012 at 17:09

    poignant

    beautifuly expressed

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  11. Sri Valli2 June 2012 at 03:01

    Very sad but written beautifully...

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  12. Bikram2 June 2012 at 04:17

    but sir its good ki tanhai nahin hai saath.. it wud be sad otherwise

    although i understand ki woh saath nahin hai to it feel tanhai

    Bikram's

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    1. AmitAag2 June 2012 at 05:01

      ...That is the catch Bikram, that I'm in a crowd and yet none is with me, and since it is a crowd I'm not even alone!
      Thank you for caring to interpret and comment:)

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  13. abhinavr2 June 2012 at 04:32

    Very true but feels some sadness also in it. . .

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    1. AmitAag2 June 2012 at 05:02

      Hey Abhi...IT IS SAD...man! Thank you for feeling it:)

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  14. Unknown2 June 2012 at 04:50

    tanha safar hai , bus saanso ki awaaz hai mein kabhi kabhi un se baat kar leti hoon.

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    1. AmitAag2 June 2012 at 05:06

      Thank you Alka for this beautiful rejoinder, but mere paas saanson ki aawaaz bhi nahi hai!

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  15. Unknown2 June 2012 at 09:51

    WOW great one sir :)

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  16. Rajnish3 June 2012 at 00:35

    सुंदर...ज़िंदगी की हकीकत बयानी...
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com

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  17. kirti desai3 June 2012 at 04:18

    Yeh zindagi tumhe kahen lekar aa gayi bhai!

    You packed a punch in those lines. Hats off!

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  18. Ramesh Sood3 June 2012 at 11:01

    Just became a member of Indiblogger...saw the word haiku and got intersted.. have been writing haiku for two years now..you have done well...I invite you to wvisit me,,

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    1. AmitAag3 June 2012 at 21:08

      Thank you Ramesh for stopping by, and liking my Haiku. I shall come to your blog soon:)

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  19. AmitAag3 June 2012 at 21:05

    Thank you Rajesh!

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  20. vagabondmind3 June 2012 at 21:43

    Neatly represented. Good Work

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  21. TTT4 June 2012 at 08:42

    reading haiku in hindi for the first time ! too good ..hats off to you !!!

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  22. Unknown4 June 2012 at 23:23

    I had written a few haiku in hindi, should look for them:)

    Very powerful one you got here~

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    1. AmitAag5 June 2012 at 00:38

      welcome here Ghazala, and thank you for appreciating:) I'll reed your haikus soon...plz visit again:)

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  23. D.Nambiar4 June 2012 at 23:38

    That's an interesting one. Isn't it a blessing if you don't feel lonely even when you are alone.
    Nicely crafted, Amit.

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    1. AmitAag5 June 2012 at 00:44

      hey Divya...it's the other way round...I'm lonely even in a crowd 'coz no one is 'with' me...see the paradox...thank you:)

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  24. Saru Singhal9 June 2012 at 12:02

    Life is so shallow and lonely at times. Very beautifully expressed...

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  25. Mira20 June 2012 at 07:49

    very nice Haiku Amitji.

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  26. AmitAag21 June 2012 at 21:22

    Thank you Mira:)

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  27. Sarun Chachan25 June 2012 at 07:15

    Suprb caption..:-)

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