Very nice...and its absolutely true...
Thank you Ranjana!
३ पंक्तियों में आप बहुत कुछ कह गए सुन्दरअमित जी
Thank you Shashi!
Thank you Manish, welcome here plz come again:)
Very nice, Amitji... did you sketch the pic?
Thank you Ash!...no the sketch is not mine:)
superb and true lines........
Thank you Muni!
but this sketch is in tandem with your beautiful lines.
...yeah that's why it's been put up there. Thank you Indu!
कोई न साथ खुद का मैं साथी हूँ सो तन्हा कहाँ??:-)अनु
Wow...great rejoinder...thank you Anu!
Wow, I didn't know a haiku could be written in Hindi too :) And The english version is awesome sir. :)
Thank you Neha:)
Thank you Panchali!
Thank you Deepak!
Very sad but written beautifully...
Thank you Valli!
but sir its good ki tanhai nahin hai saath.. it wud be sad otherwise although i understand ki woh saath nahin hai to it feel tanhai Bikram's
...That is the catch Bikram, that I'm in a crowd and yet none is with me, and since it is a crowd I'm not even alone!Thank you for caring to interpret and comment:)
Very true but feels some sadness also in it. . .
Hey Abhi...IT IS SAD...man! Thank you for feeling it:)
tanha safar hai , bus saanso ki awaaz hai mein kabhi kabhi un se baat kar leti hoon.
Thank you Alka for this beautiful rejoinder, but mere paas saanson ki aawaaz bhi nahi hai!
WOW great one sir :)
Thank you Saikat:)
सुंदर...ज़िंदगी की हकीकत बयानी...www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com
Thank you Rajnish!
Yeh zindagi tumhe kahen lekar aa gayi bhai!You packed a punch in those lines. Hats off!
Thanks a lot Kirti!:)
Just became a member of Indiblogger...saw the word haiku and got intersted.. have been writing haiku for two years now..you have done well...I invite you to wvisit me,,
Thank you Ramesh for stopping by, and liking my Haiku. I shall come to your blog soon:)
Thank you Rajesh!
Neatly represented. Good Work
thank you V.M.:)
reading haiku in hindi for the first time ! too good ..hats off to you !!!
Thank you Tangy...I'm obliged:)
I had written a few haiku in hindi, should look for them:)Very powerful one you got here~
welcome here Ghazala, and thank you for appreciating:) I'll reed your haikus soon...plz visit again:)
That's an interesting one. Isn't it a blessing if you don't feel lonely even when you are alone. Nicely crafted, Amit.
hey Divya...it's the other way round...I'm lonely even in a crowd 'coz no one is 'with' me...see the paradox...thank you:)
Life is so shallow and lonely at times. Very beautifully expressed...
Thank you Saru:)
very nice Haiku Amitji. Mira’s Talent Gallery
Thank you Mira:)