मयकशी...
आँखें तुम्हारी
छलकते पैमाने
होंठ तुम्हारे
लबालब प्याले.
रहमत खुदा की
न पैमाने
न प्याले
पूरा मयखाना.
तुम जिसपे भी
हो मेहरबाँ
पर मुझपे नहीं,
खुदा कुछ पे बरसता
बहुतों पे छलकता
पर मुझसे ज़रा बचता.
तुम मयस्सर नहीं
खुदा किसी दाम नहीं.
शराब सस्ती है
और हाज़िर भी,
न पियूँ तो क्या करूँ..
कहाँ जाऊं..?
Peete hain tho zinda hain; naa peete tho mar jaate, huh, Amit?:)
ReplyDeleteBtw, congrats on that book:) belated, I know, but I was away as you know:)
Thanks a lot for the nice rejoinder Suresh:) and also for your good wishes..it's not late at all:)
Deleteबहुत खूब अमित जी
ReplyDeleteसरफरनामा आज मैखाना हुआ
किसी ने नजरों से दी है
जज़्बात मे मै घुली है
हम ने भी कभी किसी आँख से पी थी
वी भी क्या खूब ज़िंदगी थी
Thank you Shashi:)
DeleteHic !!!!!!!
ReplyDelete:) thank you for the company :)
Deletetried to search for the meaning of some of the words but in vain. but yeah, understood that alcohol is available and it's quite cheap. good for us :)
ReplyDeleteHahaha...thank you Deb, you understood! But this is the last refuge because 'she' and God don't care..:)
DeleteAlien country-no comment.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indu for your kind visit...it is in no way less than a comment for me:)
DeleteLike Like..:-)
ReplyDelete(Brand liking as its written by you Amit Jee..:-))
Thanks a whole lot Nagini, I'm flattered and grateful:) You're very kind:)
DeleteCheers Amit !
ReplyDeleteखुदा कुछ पे बरसता
बहुतों पे छलकता
पर मुझसे ज़रा बचता. wah kya baat hai !
Hey Tangy..you caught the real essence! Rest all is just words to frame this picture:) I'm ecstatic:)
Deleteजो पिक्चर पिछली पोस्ट पर है .उसी घर में छलकाएं जाम .... क्या कहतें हैं ?
ReplyDeletehahaha...acchha idea hai:) lekin uss horse ko kaise
Deletemanaayenge? Thank you Bindas for this bindas idea:)
Kaun pita hai, kambakht, bardaasht karney ke liye? hum to pitey hai jeene ke liye - Devdas :)
ReplyDeleteyour lovely poem reminded me of this famous dialogue from Devdas
Thank you Deepak for finding my poem 'lovely', and putting this famous dialogue beside it:)
DeleteI like it...honestly i started reading Hindi Poesms after going through few of your Poems. I was telling this to Saru the other day after reading her Hindi Poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a whole lot Shams:) I'm delighted by your kind appreciation, and the fact that my poetry initiated you into reading Hindi poems:) Please don't forget to take me in when you plan for a compilation of Hindi Poets:) Thank you!!
ReplyDelete:) I think you should compile and i would be more than happy to be your sagird and help you in the entire journey.
Delete...you don't have to be my shagird dear, we'll do it together:)
DeleteBahut accha.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shalu:)
DeleteVery nice sir
ReplyDeleteThank you Mak:)
DeleteKya baat hai Amit ji......:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Seema:)
Deleteक्या बात है अमित जी....
ReplyDeleteरहमत खुदा की
न पैमाने
न प्याले
पूरा मयखाना.
नज़र आपकी बड़ी पारखी हैं... ह्म्म्म ..
कहाँ कोई मयखाना
आँगन में अपने
दीदार कों बुलाता है
पैमाना तों बस
पहली जाम का
फिर सिर्फ प्याला
प्याला, प्याला
और मयखाना..
कोशिश जारी रखिये पहली जाम का.... ;-)
Thank you Ashu:)
DeleteVAH ji VAH ji VAH
ReplyDeleteThank you Ashwini:)
Deleteशराब सस्ती है
ReplyDeleteऔर हाज़िर भी,
न पियूँ तो क्या करूँ..
कहाँ जाऊं..?
adbhut rachna..
Thank you Ashu:)
Deleteapki is kavita ko padh ke mujhe mahan kavi "dr. HARIVANSHA RAI BACHCHAN" ki suprasidhdha kavita "MADHUSHALA" yaad a gayi....
ReplyDeleteapki is kavita ki tarif me main madhushala ki shuruwat ki panktiyaan zaroor likhna chahunga...
"madiralaya jane ko ghar se chalta hai peene wala,
kis path ko jaye asmanjas me hai wo bhola bhala.
alag alag path batlate sab par main ye batlata hun,
raah pakar tu ek koi aur paa jaaiyega madhushala..."
awesome work amit sir...
..awesome comment Ashish sir! Thanks a lot:) I'm honored!
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