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Sunday, 24 June 2012

मयकशी...


आँखें तुम्हारी
छलकते पैमाने
होंठ तुम्हारे
लबालब प्याले.

रहमत खुदा की
 पैमाने
प्याले
पूरा मयखाना.

तुम जिसपे भी
हो मेहरबाँ
पर मुझपे नहीं,

खुदा कुछ पे बरसता
बहुतों पे छलकता
पर मुझसे ज़रा बचता.

तुम मयस्सर नहीं
खुदा किसी दाम नहीं.

शराब सस्ती है 
और हाज़िर भी,
पियूँ तो क्या करूँ..
कहाँ जाऊं..?

36 comments:

  1. Peete hain tho zinda hain; naa peete tho mar jaate, huh, Amit?:)

    Btw, congrats on that book:) belated, I know, but I was away as you know:)

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    1. Thanks a lot for the nice rejoinder Suresh:) and also for your good wishes..it's not late at all:)

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  2. बहुत खूब अमित जी

    सरफरनामा आज मैखाना हुआ
    किसी ने नजरों से दी है
    जज़्बात मे मै घुली है
    हम ने भी कभी किसी आँख से पी थी
    वी भी क्या खूब ज़िंदगी थी

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    1. :) thank you for the company :)

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  4. tried to search for the meaning of some of the words but in vain. but yeah, understood that alcohol is available and it's quite cheap. good for us :)

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    1. Hahaha...thank you Deb, you understood! But this is the last refuge because 'she' and God don't care..:)

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    1. Thank you Indu for your kind visit...it is in no way less than a comment for me:)

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  6. Like Like..:-)
    (Brand liking as its written by you Amit Jee..:-))

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    1. Thanks a whole lot Nagini, I'm flattered and grateful:) You're very kind:)

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  7. Cheers Amit !

    खुदा कुछ पे बरसता
    बहुतों पे छलकता
    पर मुझसे ज़रा बचता. wah kya baat hai !

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    1. Hey Tangy..you caught the real essence! Rest all is just words to frame this picture:) I'm ecstatic:)

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  8. जो पिक्चर पिछली पोस्ट पर है .उसी घर में छलकाएं जाम .... क्या कहतें हैं ?

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    1. hahaha...acchha idea hai:) lekin uss horse ko kaise
      manaayenge? Thank you Bindas for this bindas idea:)

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  9. Kaun pita hai, kambakht, bardaasht karney ke liye? hum to pitey hai jeene ke liye - Devdas :)

    your lovely poem reminded me of this famous dialogue from Devdas

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    1. Thank you Deepak for finding my poem 'lovely', and putting this famous dialogue beside it:)

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  10. I like it...honestly i started reading Hindi Poesms after going through few of your Poems. I was telling this to Saru the other day after reading her Hindi Poem :)

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  11. Thanks a whole lot Shams:) I'm delighted by your kind appreciation, and the fact that my poetry initiated you into reading Hindi poems:) Please don't forget to take me in when you plan for a compilation of Hindi Poets:) Thank you!!

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    1. :) I think you should compile and i would be more than happy to be your sagird and help you in the entire journey.

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    2. ...you don't have to be my shagird dear, we'll do it together:)

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  12. Kya baat hai Amit ji......:)

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  13. क्या बात है अमित जी....

    रहमत खुदा की
    न पैमाने
    न प्याले
    पूरा मयखाना.

    नज़र आपकी बड़ी पारखी हैं... ह्म्म्म ..

    कहाँ कोई मयखाना
    आँगन में अपने
    दीदार कों बुलाता है
    पैमाना तों बस
    पहली जाम का
    फिर सिर्फ प्याला
    प्याला, प्याला
    और मयखाना..

    कोशिश जारी रखिये पहली जाम का.... ;-)

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  14. शराब सस्ती है
    और हाज़िर भी,
    न पियूँ तो क्या करूँ..
    कहाँ जाऊं..?
    adbhut rachna..

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  15. apki is kavita ko padh ke mujhe mahan kavi "dr. HARIVANSHA RAI BACHCHAN" ki suprasidhdha kavita "MADHUSHALA" yaad a gayi....

    apki is kavita ki tarif me main madhushala ki shuruwat ki panktiyaan zaroor likhna chahunga...

    "madiralaya jane ko ghar se chalta hai peene wala,
    kis path ko jaye asmanjas me hai wo bhola bhala.
    alag alag path batlate sab par main ye batlata hun,
    raah pakar tu ek koi aur paa jaaiyega madhushala..."


    awesome work amit sir...

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  16. ..awesome comment Ashish sir! Thanks a lot:) I'm honored!

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