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Monday, 11 June 2012

क़िस्मत...



जानता हूँ मैं 
बेहतर हूँ उनसे
इल्म में
और इश्क़--बयानी में,

मानती हो तुम
सानी नहीं मेरा
हुनर '
क़द्रदानी में,

शाइस्ता हूँ, पशेमाँ भी,
ज़हीन तो हूँ ही, नफ़ीस भी,
और उन से कुछ ज़्यादा
हसीन भी!

पर क्या करें उसका
जो मेहरबाँ है उनपर 
और नाराज़ मुझ से...
क़िस्मत मेरी,
रक़ीबों की!


38 comments:

  1. अरे जिसको ऐसे हीरे की कद्र न हो उसका क्या गम करना..........
    :-)
    जो उनकी किस्मत होगी अच्छी
    तो वो खुद-ब-खुद
    होंगे मेहरबां.................

    अनु

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  2. well said sir .. indeed

    It is funny to know when they say , they know no one will love them as much as me, they will nver find anyone better then me, yet they have to let go of me to be with someone else ..

    Bikram's

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    1. Dear Bikram you're most welcome to call me Amit...why the formality of 'sir'? Thank you for appreciating:)

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    1. ...wafaa jinse ki bewafaa ho gaye...
      Thank you Indu:)

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  4. पहली बार आपके ब्लॉग पर आया हूँ. बड़ा अच्छा लगा.

    बस यूँ ही लिखते रहिये.

    विकल्प
    whynotvikalp.blogspot.in

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    1. Thank you Vikalp:) plz do come again:)

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  5. kya bat!!!!!!!......ati uttam

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    1. Thank you Ana:) ...welcome here...mere blog par phir se aanaa:)

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  6. Beautiful!! Had me spellbound!

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  7. Splendid words Amit ji. Touched !!!

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    1. Thanks loadz Anupam:) Glad you liked it:)

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  8. Very good...
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com

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  9. mahsha alla kaya kehne aap ke ,woh jo chal diye be kadar..bad kismat nahin toe aur kaya hain...

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  10. wah ! I am spellbound...i have noticed Amit your pictures always compliment ur writing

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    1. Thanks a lot Tangy:) Glad you liked:)

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  11. Superb again..Most of the words are far from my understanding scope but those words are so beautiful that heart doesn't let them go to my brain...:)

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    1. wow! what a wonderful analysis and conclusion of 'beautiful words'...they can be in my verse or anywhere else...I so wholly agree Ashish:)
      ...some words in every language have a sound, a feel, an aura about them so beautiful that the meaning becomes secondary...Thanks a lot:)

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  12. good one :)

    styledestino.blogspot.com

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    1. awww...I'm so sorry about it Ranjana that I can not apologize enough, but the fact is that I could not find corresponding words in English which could convey the essence, and did not want to mar the delicacy with a make shift arrangement. Kindly pardon me...promise I'll append it some day when I find justifying words...thanks and regards:)

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  14. Very well worded piece, Amit! beautiful ))

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  15. shikwe -shikaayat ka ye andaaze -bayan bahut khoob hai !

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    1. Thank you Varsha...glad you liked:)

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